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Miti Da Bawa -
12th October 2007, 06:58 PM
Miti Da Bawa Bnaea ,
is bawe te mein tail chdaea, ap bnaea apne hthi dudh pilaea, jd loki lge poojn is nu , merea v dil kr aaea, ik rati mein v apna dard sunaea, soh rub miti da but v akhian bhar aaea , o rat nai bhuldi yaro , jd miti da Bava v rub varga najr aaea, c ta o miti yaro , pr lagea rub varga , jd mein kale beh k hal dil da, kise apne vang sunaea , kise apne vang sunaea. |
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12th October 2007, 07:24 PM
HELLO PREET JI SAT SRI AKAL BAHUT WADIYA LIKHYA HAI TUSI KEEP IT UP &THANKS MERI POEM DI REPLY KARAN VASTE.....
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Waah! Waah! Waah! |
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Waah! Waah! Waah! -
24th October 2007, 12:24 PM
Preet ji bahut vadhiyaa. It's a great topic to write. Apnaa haal kisey nirjeev awasthaa to nu sunaa ke us nu surjeev kar denaa ik maharat hai, ik kalaa hai... Hats off to u. May i know ur age and what do u do apart from writing?
jd miti da Bava v rub varga najr aaea, c ta o miti yaro , pr lagea rub varga , agar is tarah hovey taan jd miti da Bava v rub varga najr aaea, c ta o miti yaro , pr rub varga hi nazar ayeyaa, Wasdey raho T R Suman |
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24th October 2007, 05:40 PM
thsnks again T.R. Suman ji,
tusi es site ch ena jo tusi sadi nimanea di mehfil ch aa rhe ho mein bhut hi teh dilo shukrgujar han, ate time to time sadi poetry nu sudharde ho , asi welcome krde han, tusi merian lines complete pado fir dasna kis tran lagea. pls tusi mind na kreo, te menu ise tran margdarshan krde rheo, agr fir v change kran jog hoea ta tohda sujah sir mathe, try again , jd miti da Bava v rub varga najr aaea, c ta o miti yaro , pr lagea rub varga , jd mein kale beh k hal dil da, kise ne apne vang sunaea , kise apne vang sunaea. |
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25th October 2007, 10:38 AM
Tusi theek ho preet ji.
Wasdey raho Tilak |
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17th November 2007, 09:13 PM
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20th November 2007, 11:09 AM
ji eh sach hai k miti hi tan han asi , es lae es miti nu nirjeev ta akhea nhi ja skda,
menu miti de bave nal hmesha hi lgav riha hai, ate mein miti de khidonea de nal aksr bandean vang gal krda c , te menu aksr enj lagda si jive eh menu dekh k has rhe hon |
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