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Dil Masroor Rahe Taa-umr Gar Paas Rahe Woh Nau-bahaar-e-naaz....!! -
26th August 2014, 09:06 PM
Adaab hazireen-e-mehfil-e-ishQ,
Hum in dinoN Zarraa saheb ki sarbarahi meiN meHfil-e-fusoon-e-alfaaz
meiN alfaaz nasheeb-o-faraaz per ghaur kar rahe haiN,
ussi per aik ishQ 'koshish' pesh-e-khidmat hai:-
guzre haiN zeest meiN janay kese kese nasheeb-o-faraaz
zikr hua hai to batlaatay haiN kese hua pyar ka aaghaaz
pan-ghat pe mili alhad si mutyaar, jis pe hum dil the gaye haar!
Qurbat hi faQt matloob rahi, dil meiN kabhi rakhi na koi aaz
faQt : only, just
aaz : desire
tamaam lawaazim us ke rakhe apne sir pe aur chal pad’ay!
daR tha woH uktaa na jayeN raste meiN, hum ban gaye laffaaz
lawaazim : baggage
laffaaz : one who talks too much
lazim tha ke zindagi ik dosray ka aasra ban ke basar karte
kiya waada, rakheN ge aise aap ko jese aap koi Khuda-saaz
Khuda-saaz : God’s gift
‘parStaar’ naazaaN hai bohat apne pyar pe aur ba-zidd hai ke!
dil masroor rahe taa-umr gar paas rahe woH nau-bahaar-e-naaz
naazaaN : proud, arrogant
taa-umr : life long
nau-bahaar-e-naaz : lover
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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26th August 2014, 09:17 PM
Waaaah hassan ji agree with naaz ji...very beautiful gazal....dil se daad...
Yoon hi hame padne ka mauka dete rahein...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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27th August 2014, 01:46 AM
wwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh !!!!!
bahaaaaauuuuuuut hi khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai Hassan bhai !!
ye ek prem geet bhi hai, ek afsaana-e-ulfat bhi, ek kahaani bhi, ek tasweer bhi, ek mahakta huwa phool bhi aur bahaar-e-gulshan bhi !!!
is ke fusoon se mehfil-e-fusoon-e-alfaaz charaaghaan ho uthee aur bazm-e-SDC naghmon mein doob gayee !!
bahaut se pyaar ke saath dheron dheron daad aap ko Hassan bhai !!! ummeed hai isee tarah sher-o-sukhan ke panghat par aap hunar ki pyaas bujhaate bhi rahein aur us ki tishnagi bardhaate bhi rahein !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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27th August 2014, 09:21 AM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!
Hassanbhai,
bahot hi umda ghazal taamir kii hai..
aur maktaa behad khubsurat hai
dheroN dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad...
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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27th August 2014, 07:37 PM
Hassan Bhaii:
namaste!
aapki Ghazal to huzoor dilkash rahiiN..
lazim tha ke zindagi ik dosray ka aasra ban ke basar karte
kiya waada, rakheN ge aise aap ko jese aap koi Khuda-saaz
Khuda-saaz : God’s gift
ees Sher ko paDhaa to bas paDhtaa hi gayaa.. waah kya Khoob soch!!
dil se daad
KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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27th August 2014, 09:17 PM
Naazuk!
Phir se chanay ke jhaad pe bhejnay ka iradaa hai kia?
Itni tareef kar di khaak alfaazoN ki.... dil khushi se jhoom raha hai!
Aagay bhi aise hi saath ki umeed rahe gi,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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27th August 2014, 10:14 PM
wahhhh.....bahut badiya likha hai, Zarra ji ki sohbat meiN rang aur nikhar rha hai aapki poetry ka.
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th August 2014, 07:22 AM
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Adaab hazireen-e-mehfil-e-ishQ,
Hum in dinoN Zarraa saheb ki sarbarahi meiN meHfil-e-fusoon-e-alfaaz
meiN alfaaz nasheeb-o-faraaz per ghaur kar rahe haiN,
ussi per aik ishQ 'koshish' pesh-e-khidmat hai:-
guzre haiN zeest meiN janay kese kese nasheeb-o-faraaz
zikr hua hai to batlaatay haiN kese hua pyar ka aaghaaz
pan-ghat pe mili alhad si mutyaar, jis pe hum dil the gaye haar!
Qurbat hi faQt matloob rahi, dil meiN kabhi rakhi na koi aaz
faQt : only, just
aaz : desire
tamaam lawaazim us ke rakhe apne sir pe aur chal pad’ay!
daR tha woH uktaa na jayeN raste meiN, hum ban gaye laffaaz
lawaazim : baggage
laffaaz : one who talks too much
lazim tha ke zindagi ik dosray ka aasra ban ke basar karte
kiya waada, rakheN ge aise aap ko jese aap koi Khuda-saaz
Khuda-saaz : God’s gift
‘parStaar’ naazaaN hai bohat apne pyar pe aur ba-zidd hai ke!
dil masroor rahe taa-umr gar paas rahe woH nau-bahaar-e-naaz
naazaaN : proud, arrogant
taa-umr : life long
nau-bahaar-e-naaz : lover
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Hassan ji
Sach mein kamaal kar diya apne.
Mazaa aagaya aisa laga 80,'s KI movie dekh rahe hain.
Beautiful.
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28th August 2014, 11:28 AM
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Waaaah hassan ji agree with naaz ji...very beautiful gazal....dil se daad...
Yoon hi hame padne ka mauka dete rahein...
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Madhu jee,
Mamooli si koshish ko iss darja pazeerayi bakhshne ke liye be-had
shukarguzaar hooN!
Aagay bhi aise hi saath ki umeed rahe gii,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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29th August 2014, 03:01 AM
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wwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh !!!!!
bahaaaaauuuuuuut hi khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai Hassan bhai !!
ye ek prem geet bhi hai, ek afsaana-e-ulfat bhi, ek kahaani bhi, ek tasweer bhi, ek mahakta huwa phool bhi aur bahaar-e-gulshan bhi !!!
is ke fusoon se mehfil-e-fusoon-e-alfaaz charaaghaan ho uthee aur bazm-e-SDC naghmon mein doob gayee !!
bahaut se pyaar ke saath dheron dheron daad aap ko Hassan bhai !!! ummeed hai isee tarah sher-o-sukhan ke panghat par aap hunar ki pyaas bujhaate bhi rahein aur us ki tishnagi bardhaate bhi rahein !!
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Zarraa saheb..
aap ne na-cheez ke kalaam ko jitni pazeeraayi bakhshi hai,
shayed maiN is ke qaabil nahi tha...
aur jis andaaz se aap ne khaak alfaazoN ki tareef ki hai..
dil khushi se baagh baagh ho gaya...
bas younhi humeN milte rahiye,
aap ka saaaya sir pe aik ghanay shajar sa lagta hai!
Apna bohat ziyada khiyaal rakhiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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30th August 2014, 04:22 AM
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!
Hassanbhai,
bahot hi umda ghazal taamir kii hai..
aur maktaa behad khubsurat hai
dheroN dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad...
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Adil bhai,
Be-had shukarguzaar hooN ke aap ne adna si koshish pe apna waQt
surf kiya aur issay pasand kiya.......
Bas younhi miltay rahiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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1st September 2014, 02:03 AM
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Originally Posted by Dhaval
Hassan Bhaii:
namaste!
aapki Ghazal to huzoor dilkash rahiiN..
lazim tha ke zindagi ik dosray ka aasra ban ke basar karte
kiya waada, rakheN ge aise aap ko jese aap koi Khuda-saaz
Khuda-saaz : God’s gift
ees Sher ko paDhaa to bas paDhtaa hi gayaa.. waah kya Khoob soch!!
dil se daad
KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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Dhaval bhai,
Jis aandaaz se aap ne khaak alfaazoN ko wuqqat bakhshi hai,
maiN bayaaN nahi kar sakta ke kitni musarrat hui hai!
Milte rahiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Wahhhh -
1st September 2014, 01:59 PM
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Adaab hazireen-e-mehfil-e-ishQ,
Hum in dinoN Zarraa saheb ki sarbarahi meiN meHfil-e-fusoon-e-alfaaz
meiN alfaaz nasheeb-o-faraaz per ghaur kar rahe haiN,
ussi per aik ishQ 'koshish' pesh-e-khidmat hai:-
guzre haiN zeest meiN janay kese kese nasheeb-o-faraaz
zikr hua hai to batlaatay haiN kese hua pyar ka aaghaaz
pan-ghat pe mili alhad si mutyaar, jis pe hum dil the gaye haar!
Qurbat hi faQt matloob rahi, dil meiN kabhi rakhi na koi aaz
faQt : only, just
aaz : desire
tamaam lawaazim us ke rakhe apne sir pe aur chal pad’ay!
daR tha woH uktaa na jayeN raste meiN, hum ban gaye laffaaz
lawaazim : baggage
laffaaz : one who talks too much
lazim tha ke zindagi ik dosray ka aasra ban ke basar karte
kiya waada, rakheN ge aise aap ko jese aap koi Khuda-saaz
Khuda-saaz : God’s gift
‘parStaar’ naazaaN hai bohat apne pyar pe aur ba-zidd hai ke!
dil masroor rahe taa-umr gar paas rahe woH nau-bahaar-e-naaz
naazaaN : proud, arrogant
taa-umr : life long
nau-bahaar-e-naaz : lover
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Bahut he umda kalam hasan bhai daad kabool kijiye....
Regards,
Ashwani Tyagi
akela hun magar abaad karleta hun 'veeranay'
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2nd September 2014, 05:55 PM
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wahhhh.....bahut badiya likha hai, Zarra ji ki sohbat meiN rang aur nikhar rha hai aapki poetry ka.
god bless u
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Sunita baaji,
Shuru se milta hua aap ka pal pal saath bohat khaas hai mere liye!
Allah se dua hai ke aise hi aap ka saath mere saath salamat rahe (ameen)
Apna khayaal rakhiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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3rd September 2014, 04:23 AM
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Hassan ji
Sach mein kamaal kar diya apne.
Mazaa aagaya aisa laga 80,'s KI movie dekh rahe hain.
Beautiful.
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Sarika jee,
Khaak alfaazoN ko itni tarjeeH-o-pazeeraayi dene ke liye be-had manoon hooN!
Apna khayaal rakhiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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3rd September 2014, 04:59 PM
Wah Hassan Saheb..
Maza agaya...kya intekhaab hai alfaaz ka!!
Mujeeb Parwaaz
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3rd September 2014, 06:39 PM
Waah Hassan Bhai kya baat hai...Bahut khoob!
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5th September 2014, 12:43 PM
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Bahut he umda kalam hasan bhai daad kabool kijiye....
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Ashwani jee,
Aap ka saath mere liye bohat khaas raha hai..... aise hi milte rahiye ga!
Apna khayaal rakhiye ga,
DuaooN kesaath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Wah Hassan Saheb..
Maza agaya...kya intekhaab hai alfaaz ka!!
Mujeeb Parwaaz
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Mujeeb bhai,
Hausla afazaai ke liye be-had shurkiyaaH!
Milte rahiye ga,
Apna khayaal rakhiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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5th September 2014, 12:45 PM
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Waah Hassan Bhai kya baat hai...Bahut khoob!
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Raina jee,
Iss qadar pazeeraayi ke liye be-panaaH shukriyaaH!
Milte rahiye ga,
Apna khayaal rakhiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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7th September 2014, 08:15 PM
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Adaab hazireen-e-mehfil-e-ishQ,
Hum in dinoN Zarraa saheb ki sarbarahi meiN meHfil-e-fusoon-e-alfaaz
meiN alfaaz nasheeb-o-faraaz per ghaur kar rahe haiN,
ussi per aik ishQ 'koshish' pesh-e-khidmat hai:-
guzre haiN zeest meiN janay kese kese nasheeb-o-faraaz
zikr hua hai to batlaatay haiN kese hua pyar ka aaghaaz
pan-ghat pe mili alhad si mutyaar, jis pe hum dil the gaye haar!
Qurbat hi faQt matloob rahi, dil meiN kabhi rakhi na koi aaz
faQt : only, just
aaz : desire
tamaam lawaazim us ke rakhe apne sir pe aur chal pad’ay!
daR tha woH uktaa na jayeN raste meiN, hum ban gaye laffaaz
lawaazim : baggage
laffaaz : one who talks too much
lazim tha ke zindagi ik dosray ka aasra ban ke basar karte
kiya waada, rakheN ge aise aap ko jese aap koi Khuda-saaz
Khuda-saaz : God’s gift
‘parStaar’ naazaaN hai bohat apne pyar pe aur ba-zidd hai ke!
dil masroor rahe taa-umr gar paas rahe woH nau-bahaar-e-naaz
naazaaN : proud, arrogant
taa-umr : life long
nau-bahaar-e-naaz : lover
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Bari dilruba si kahani ko shair ka jaama pehnaia apne!
Younhi khyalat ke phool bikherte rehen
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8th September 2014, 11:16 AM
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Bari dilruba si kahani ko shair ka jaama pehnaia apne!
Younhi khyalat ke phool bikherte rehen
Yasmin Khan
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Yasmine saheba,
Bohat bohat shukar-guzaar hooN aap ki tashreef-aawri ke liye,
bohat accha laga ke aap ko na-cheez ki adna si koshish pasand aayi...
Aise hi aagay bhi saath ki umeed rahe gi,
Apna khayaal rakhiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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