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tamne jotaa.n chaa.nd - 2nd July 2015, 12:45 PM

dosto,

aa maari pehli koshish chhe ek gujarati ghazal saathe....
aasha chhe tamne sau ne pasand aavshe........


tamne jotaa.n chaa.nd pa.n moDhu.n chupaavaa laagshe
aabh maa.n taaraa sajii nrutak bataavaa laagse

aavyaa.n jyaare dil ne dvaare shvaas adhdhar thay gayo
jo jasho to ej dilno dam gho.nTaavaa laagse

aa.nkh maa.n ashru nathi te thi aa dil paththar nathi
maansho jyaare jigar tamne raDaavaa laagse

jem nadi daryaa ne malvaa sharm thi namti nathi
tamne jovaa aa.kh sau majlis uThaavaa laagshe

jindagii chhe khel jemaa.n chhe tamaasho tu 'Safir'
mot pehla vhaalsoyaa khaaD banaavaa laagshe


તમને જોતાં ચાંદ પણ મોઢું છુપાવા લાગશે
આભ માં તારા સજી નૃતક બતાવા લાગશે

આવ્યાં જ્યારે દિલ ને દ્વારે શ્વાસ અધ્ધર થઇ ગયો
જો જશો તો એજ દિલનો દમ ઘોંટાવા લાગશે

આંખ માં અશ્રુ નથી તે થી આ દિલ પથ્થર નથી
માનશો જ્યારે જીગર તમને રડાવા લાગશે

જેમ નદી દરયા ને મળવા શર્મ થી નમતી નથી
તમને જોવા આંખ સૌ મજલિસ ઉઠાવા લાગશે

જિંદગી છે ખેલ જેમાં છે તમાશો તું 'સફીર'
મોત પેહલાં વ્હાલસોયા ખાડ બનાવા લાગશે



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अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता



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2nd July 2015, 02:02 PM

koshish achhi hai aadeil bhai gujraati me likhi yeh rachna thodi thodi samaj me aa rahi hai


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2nd July 2015, 02:55 PM

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koshish achhi hai aadeil bhai gujraati me likhi yeh rachna thodi thodi samaj me aa rahi hai
ishkji,

hausla afzaa ke liye aap ka bahot bahot shukriya...
yuN hi aate rahiye



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9th July 2015, 05:44 PM

translation kar ke samajh aaya...............:P

bohut acha hai..........dil se nikla maloom hota hai.

bohut khoob.


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9th July 2015, 09:45 PM

Aadeil bhaii

kem chho..majamaa

Su vaat chhe ... tame ane gujarati ghazal saathe... waah khoob j saras ghazal raju kari chhe tame mehfil ma... umdaah ehsaas chhe ane darek shabdo dil thi niklela seedha dil ma utri jaay chhe... abhinandan aapne aa sundar ghazal maate

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Aadeil bhaii

kem chho..majamaa

Su vaat chhe ... tame ane gujarati ghazal saathe... waah khoob j saras ghazal raju kari chhe tame mehfil ma... umdaah ehsaas chhe ane darek shabdo dil thi niklela seedha dil ma utri jaay chhe... abhinandan aapne aa sundar ghazal maate

Aapno mitra

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Dhavalbhai,
hu Gujarat thi j chhu, Navsari thii . parantu varsho thi Mumbai ma rahu chhu, pehla bhantar baabate ane have nokri maaTe.

tamaari daad ane hetbhariyaa protsaahan maaTe tamaaro khub khub aabhaar..



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translation kar ke samajh aaya...............:P

bohut acha hai..........dil se nikla maloom hota hai.

bohut khoob.
Sarikaji,

aap ka behad shukr guzaar hu.... khaskar, aapne hamaari iis koshish ko lekar use samajhne ke liye jo waqt nikaalaa, us ke liye maiN aapka mamnuun huu..



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Dhavalbhai,
hu Gujarat thi j chhu, Navsari thii . parantu varsho thi Mumbai ma rahu chhu, pehla bhantar baabate ane have nokri maaTe.

tamaari daad ane hetbhariyaa protsaahan maaTe tamaaro khub khub aabhaar..
Are saras... chalo ek gujarati mitra ne shayri na darbaar maa maline anero aanand thayo mane...je hindi ghazal to sundar lakhej chhe saathe gujarati ghazal maa pan maahir chhe. Lakhtaa raho.. malta rahisu aa mehfil maa

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hai koi bhojpuree me bhi likhne waala...... mujhe bhi koi sangee saathii mil jaae to kyaa baat ho....

Aadeil bhai samajhne ki bharpoor koshish ki par sar phodne ke baad bhi jawaab aayaa zero..... lekin jab itne saare dost accha akah rahe hain to zaruur acchaa likha hogaa......

meri taraf se bahut si daad aur mubaarakbad aapko... likhte rahen......

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13th July 2015, 12:54 PM

lijiye, hamaare un dostoN ke liye jinheN gujarati nahi aati ho, hindi/urdu translation ke saath. kuchh ashaar tabdil kiye haiN...

tamne jotaa.n chaa.nd pa.n chehro chhupaavaa laagshe
aabh taaraao thaki rajni sajaavaa laagshe

aavyaa.n jyaare dil ne dvaare shvaas tivr thai gayo
jo jasho to ej paL maa.n dam ru.ndhaavaa laagshe

aa.nkh maa.n ashru nathi to kai.n aa dil paththar nathi
maansho jyaare hruday tamne raDaavaa laagshe

jem nadi daryaa ne maLvaa thaakti thambhti nathi
ek jhaLak maaTe najar sau shram uThaavaa laagshe

jindagii chhe khel jemaa.n chhu.n tamaasho hu.n Safir
mot pehla priya maaraa.n khaii banaavaa laagshe

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તમને જોતાં ચાંદ પણ ચેહરો છુપાવા લાગશે
આભ તારાઓ થકી રજની સજાવા લાગશે

આવ્યાં જ્યારે દિલ ને દ્વારે શ્વાસ તીવ્ર થઇ ગયો
જો જશો તો એજ પળ માં દમ રૂંધાવા લાગશે

આંખ માં અશ્રુ નથી તો કંઈ આ દિલ પથ્થર નથી
માનશો જ્યારે હૃદય તમને રડાવા લાગશે

જેમ નદી દરયા ને મળવા થાકતી થંભતી નથી
એક ઝળક માટે નજર સૌ શ્રમ ઉઠાવા લાગશે

જિંદગી છે ખેલ જેમાં છું તમાશો હું સફીર
મોત પેહલાં પ્રિય મારાં ખઇ બનાવા લાગશે


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aapko dekhte chaa.nd bhii chehra chhupaane lagegaa
aasmaan taaro.n ke sahaare raat ko sajaane lagegaa

(aap) aaye jab dil ke dar pe saa.nse.n tez ho gayii
agar jaaoge to usii pal me.n dam ghu.ntne lagegaa

aa.nkho.n me.n aa.nsuu.n nahi hai to ye nahi.n ki ye dil patthar hai
(aap ye baat) maanoge jab dil aapko bhi rulaane lagegaa

jis tarah nadi saagar se milne ke liye thakti ya rukti nahi hai
(aapki) ek jhalak ke liye nazar har musibat uthaane lagegii

zindagii aisa khel hai jisme mai.n (khud Safir) tamaashaa hu.n
maut se pehle mere pyaare (meri) qabr banaane lagenge



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Are saras... chalo ek gujarati mitra ne shayri na darbaar maa maline anero aanand thayo mane...je hindi ghazal to sundar lakhej chhe saathe gujarati ghazal maa pan maahir chhe. Lakhtaa raho.. malta rahisu aa mehfil maa

Aapno mitraa

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mitra,
tamne maLine paN khub aanad thayo chhe

jarur maltaa rahishu.. aa mehfil pan amaaruN ek biju ghar j chhe to ene chhodi ne jashu pan kya?



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hai koi bhojpuree me bhi likhne waala...... mujhe bhi koi sangee saathii mil jaae to kyaa baat ho....

Aadeil bhai samajhne ki bharpoor koshish ki par sar phodne ke baad bhi jawaab aayaa zero..... lekin jab itne saare dost accha akah rahe hain to zaruur acchaa likha hogaa......

meri taraf se bahut si daad aur mubaarakbad aapko... likhte rahen......

shaad....
bhai, bhojpuri, filmoN meN thoDi bahot samajh lete haiN... ,

vaise, aapkii guzaarish sar-ankhoN, Shoaibbhai..
lijiye, hamne phir se translation ke saath ye Gazal post kar di



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