bahaar baki ae

ABABBU · 04:03 PM

ruk jara raat aje ohda inezaar baki ae,
mehfil rukhsat ho gyi bhave par aje auna ik mehmaan baki ae,
saza poori ta shayad ho gayi hove,
par ban-na aje gunah gaar baki ae,
mere har sawal da jawab ohde kol ikko,
par karna mera ik hor swaal baki ae,
ohde labaaN di thirkan to pta lagda hai,
karna ohda vi koi izhaar baki hai,
mousam beet gye ne bhawe sare hi,
par mere hise di bahaar baki ae,
khamoshiyaan de geet bahut ga laye ikaleya,
aje ohde naal thoda taqraar baki ae,
mere chawaan di dulhan kujh sharmaundi vadh hai,
ajje ohda karna shingaar baki ae,
ae zindgi kujh ta mohlat de jara,
aje mere sir sajjna da udhaar baki ae,

Shimul · **Bas Geet Hee To Hain :) -** 28th April 2008, 07:07 PM

Khuloos Bhada Aadab

**Aapko Parhkar Aksar Dilko Bohot Achchha Laga

**Jiss Geet Kee Yaad Aayi Socha Ussi Ko Yahaan Par Submit Kardu

**Dilki Gehraaion Kee Gehraaion Se Dher-o-Dher Saare Phuul,Shukriya

**Aapna Khayaal Rakhiyega

**Uparwala Aapko Khush Rakhe

**Duwaaon Ke Saath Ijaazat Dijiyega, Phir Milenge

**

Ruk Jaa Raat Thhahar Jaa Re Chandaa-Beete Naa Milan Kee Belaa
Aaj Chaandnee Kee Nagree Mein-Armaanon Kaa Melaa

Pehlee Milan Kee Yaadein Le Kar Aayee Hain Ye Raat Suhaanee
Dohraate Hain Phir Ye Sitaare-Meree Tumhaari Prem Kahaanee

Kal Kaa Darrnaa Kahe Kee Chintaa-Do Tan Hain Mann Ek Humaare
Jeewan Seemaa Ke Aage Bhee-Aaoongee Main Sang Tumhaare

*Singer: Lata Jee

**
*Film: Dil Ek Mandeer

**

ABABBU · 28th April 2008, 08:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shimul

Khuloos Bhada Aadab

**Aapko Parhkar Aksar Dilko Bohot Achchha Laga

**Jiss Geet Kee Yaad Aayi Socha Ussi Ko Yahaan Par Submit Kardu

**Dilki Gehraaion Kee Gehraaion Se Dher-o-Dher Saare Phuul,Shukriya

**Aapna Khayaal Rakhiyega

**Uparwala Aapko Khush Rakhe

**Duwaaon Ke Saath Ijaazat Dijiyega, Phir Milenge

****

Thx for ur very nice reply Shimul ji, sachmuch mujhe bahut khushi hoti hai jab aap iss mehfil me punjabi poetry read karan aate ho

Dr. Preet Chhou · 28th April 2008, 09:36 PM

A-babu ji Satsri Akal , bhut hi achha lagda hai jd tuhanu padde han, ek tusi ate heer ji, Deep Ji, Adeep ji, Ate Mera Veer Rajveer ji pddna bhut hi achha lagda hai sachhi tuhadi har ik rachna padn de yog hundi hai . ik hor gal dasi e ke shimul mji vrge mehman v tuhanu ta shubh kamnavan den paunch gae ta fir hun ta es poem de chhar chand lag gae ne . really bhut hi achha c .

D33P · 28th April 2008, 10:41 PM

ohh man.too good....yar tusi hamesha bahut vadia likhde ho....dard vnda te is nimane de...aje mere hise di bahaar baki a.......kya baat hai....jaan kad li....meri rooh di khuraak jeha geet..shyd main kde na likh ska is tra da ta...mehrbaani ji,,,,thanx alot

LOVEDEEP · 09:12 AM

Hello babbu ji, bahut hi sohna likhiya hai,dil nu chhun wala, vese Dr. preet theeek kehnde han ke tuhadiya sab diya poems read kita bina nahi raha janda

tilakji · **Bahut hi shaandaar -** 29th April 2008, 09:29 AM

Babbu ji tuhaadi ik shaandaar rachnaa di bahut der toN udeek si. Ajj poori ho gayi. This is fantastic. Bahut gehri soch. Kadi kadi mainu lagdaa hai ki tusi sab shayar bahut lambey experience waaley ho. Dard di bahut gehri samajh rakhdey ho. ShabdaaN da bahut umdaa istemaal. Ki kardey ho Babbu ji tusi aur kithey On ajj kal. Kadi zindagi ne maukaa dittaa taaN Tuhaanu zaroor milaangaa.

mere har sawal da jawab ohde kol ikko,
par karna mera ik hor swaal baki ae,

Gazal de bahut wadhiyaa shaayar banogey ik din. Bas aapnaa safar jaari rakhnaa.

tilak

ABABBU · 29th April 2008, 12:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dr. Preet Chhou

A-babu ji Satsri Akal , bhut hi achha lagda hai jd tuhanu padde han, ek tusi ate heer ji, Deep Ji, Adeep ji, Ate Mera Veer Rajveer ji pddna bhut hi achha lagda hai sachhi tuhadi har ik rachna padn de yog hundi hai . ik hor gal dasi e ke shimul mji vrge mehman v tuhanu ta shubh kamnavan den paunch gae ta fir hun ta es poem de chhar chand lag gae ne . really bhut hi achha c .

hello Dr.PREET,shukriya tuhada usi is poem nu like kita,eh meri khushkismati hai tusi sare ena pyaar dinde ho.rini ha tuhada..

ABABBU · 29th April 2008, 12:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by D33P

ohh man.too good....yar tusi hamesha bahut vadia likhde ho....dard vnda te is nimane de...aje mere hise di bahaar baki a.......kya baat hai....jaan kad li....meri rooh di khuraak jeha geet..shyd main kde na likh ska is tra da ta...mehrbaani ji,,,,thanx alot

thank you DEEP,tusi like kita ehsaanmand ha.khush raho hamesha..

ABABBU · 29th April 2008, 12:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LOVEDEEP

Hello babbu ji, bahut hi sohna likhiya hai,dil nu chhun wala, vese Dr. preet theeek kehnde han ke tuhadiya sab diya poems read kita bina nahi raha janda

LOVEDEEP shukriya tuhada,tusi sach much bahut vadiya insaan ho,read karna v ikk kla hai,eh har kise kol nahi hundi,khush raho hamesha

ABABBU · 29th April 2008, 12:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tilakji

Babbu ji tuhaadi ik shaandaar rachnaa di bahut der toN udeek si. Ajj poori ho gayi. This is fantastic. Bahut gehri soch. Kadi kadi mainu lagdaa hai ki tusi sab shayar bahut lambey experience waaley ho. Dard di bahut gehri samajh rakhdey ho. ShabdaaN da bahut umdaa istemaal. Ki kardey ho Babbu ji tusi aur kithey On ajj kal. Kadi zindagi ne maukaa dittaa taaN Tuhaanu zaroor milaangaa.

mere har sawal da jawab ohde kol ikko,
par karna mera ik hor swaal baki ae,

Gazal de bahut wadhiyaa shaayar banogey ik din. Bas aapnaa safar jaari rakhnaa.

tilak

shukriya TILAK JI tusi eh poem kabool kiti,..............kujh nahi.

ADHURI HEER · 2nd May 2008, 08:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by A-BABBU

ruk jara raat aje ohda inezaar baki ae,
mehfil rukhsat ho gyi bhave
par aje auna ik mehmaan baki ae,
saza poori ta shayad ho gayi hove,
par ban-na aje gunah gaar baki ae,
mere har sawal da jawab ohde kol ikko,
par karna mera ik hor swaal baki ae,
ohde labaaN di thirkan to pta lagda hai,
karna ohda vi koi izhaar baki hai,
mousam beet gye ne bhawe sare hi,
par mere hise di aje bahaar baki ae,
khamoshiyaan de geet bahut ga laye ikaleya,
aje ohde naal thoda taqraar baki ae,
mere chawaan di dulhan kujh sharmaundi vadh hai,
ajje ohda karna shingaar baki ae,
ae zindgi kujh ta mohlat de jara,
aje mere sir sajjna da udhaar baki ae,

Wow Babbu ji, bahut hi pyara likhiya hai,
tusi ta sachi hi kamaaal da likhiya hai,

Always-4-you · 2nd May 2008, 09:48 AM

hello babu ji tumhari pehli poem ruk jara raat aje ohda....
bahut hi acchi hi
keep it up...
something from me

Lut ke le gya jan ve rabbayaar bada baiman ve rabba.kadh ke le gya jind nimani,do pal da mehman ve rabba.khushian de sab tohfe le ke,hanju de gya daan ve rabba……….

sandeep · **gurdeep -** 2nd May 2008, 01:12 PM

karke bhane main ta raat msa taali a
pta nai tu kad aauna saver hon vali a
Beet gayi a raat chnna
Taare gaye ne luk ve
Aakhian unidia te
saah gaye ne suk ve
mukh tera takia nai mai ta chnna hali ve
pta nai tu kad aauna saver hon vali a
sandeep gill

ABABBU · 2nd May 2008, 01:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ADHURI HEER

Wow Babbu ji, bahut hi pyara likhiya hai,
tusi ta sachi hi kamaaal da likhiya hai,

thx HEER teri reply to bina koi v poem adhoori hi rehndi hai.
tuhanu tuhada mukamal jahaan mile.

ABABBU · 2nd May 2008, 01:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Always-4-you

hello babu ji tumhari pehli poem ruk jara raat aje ohda....
bahut hi acchi hi
keep it up...
something from me

Lut ke le gya jan ve rabbayaar bada baiman ve rabba.kadh ke le gya jind nimani,do pal da mehman ve rabba.khushian de sab tohfe le ke,hanju de gya daan ve rabba……….

thx DEEPAK itna pyara reply dene ke liye.khush raheen hamesha

ABABBU · 02:21 PM

[quote=sandeep;285041]karke bhane main ta raat msa taali a
pta nai tu kad aauna saver hon vali a
Beet gayi a raat chnna
Taare gaye ne luk ve
Aakhian unidia te
saah gaye ne suk ve
mukh tera takia nai mai ta chnna hali ve
pta nai tu kad aauna saver hon vali a
sandeep gill

sabh to pehla ta ji aaya Sandeep tuhade iss mehfil ch aan naal iss mehfil nu chaar chan lag gye ne.
meri petry nu aapna kimti waqt den lai tuhada rini ha.
tusi sach much bahut sohna likhde ho tuhadi iss poem de sahve ta meri poetry kujh v nahi .sachi tusi bahut sohna likhde ho .likhde reha karo.rabh tuhanu hamesha khush rakhe

sandeep · 2nd May 2008, 06:44 PM

[quote=A-BABBU;285058]

Quote:

Originally Posted by sandeep

karke bhane main ta raat msa taali a
pta nai tu kad aauna saver hon vali a
Beet gayi a raat chnna
Taare gaye ne luk ve
Aakhian unidia te
saah gaye ne suk ve
mukh tera takia nai mai ta chnna hali ve
pta nai tu kad aauna saver hon vali a
sandeep gill

sabh to pehla ta ji aaya Sandeep tuhade iss mehfil ch aan naal iss mehfil nu chaar chan lag gye ne.
meri petry nu aapna kimti waqt den lai tuhada rini ha.
tusi sach much bahut sohna likhde ho tuhadi iss poem de sahve ta meri poetry kujh v nahi .sachi tusi bahut sohna likhde ho .likhde reha karo.rabh tuhanu hamesha khush rakhe

Asal gall eh hai Babbu ji ke tuhadia rachnava hi mainu likhan layi majboor kardia isde layi tuhada bahut bahut danwad shukriya
sandeep gill