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Na wajood mera, na pehchaan meri -
2nd February 2010, 02:22 PM
iss praye desh ch a ke, paraye loka ch reh ke
tianu hi labhadi rahi, awaza maar baloandi rahi Dine has has ke khush reh reh dekha Raata nu uth uth rondi rahi, karloadi rahi Tere to bina jindgi ruk gayi othe hi par umar turdi gayi,waqt lagaondi rahi Tere naal rista hi rooh da aa, mere rabb varaga ta hi sari duniya de riste thhakroundi rahi na wajood mera, na hi pehchaan meri tere to bina dono hath jorr jorr rabb nu manondi rahi vese ta tere bina mainu saah v laina aukha tere te door 12 saal phr kive jiaondi rahi  GOD IS GREAT
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2nd February 2010, 02:27 PM
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O my god..................12 saal ! dear ek gal kahan tuhade naal gal karan nu dil karda aa, lagda hai aapa dove ksie janam diya bichriyaN behna aa, menu es judai vich kulaundiyaN nu 11 saal ho gaye ne, pata nahi ki hai ena goriyaN de desh ki jo bhi jaunda hai vapis aaun da naa hi nai lainda....tuhadi poetry padke meriyaN aakhan hanjuaN nal bhar gayiaN ne. rabb raakha   .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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2nd February 2010, 07:32 PM
heer ji
tuhadi eh rachna wakia hi tahude na nu sarthik kardi hai.......12 saal....? hun tusi meri rachna KHAT pado te enj di enj hi apne chahetay nu post kar devo. tuhadi lekhni ch bahut birha hai.daad qbool karo |
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3rd February 2010, 06:25 PM
[quote=ADHURI HEER;382916]iss praye desh ch a ke, paraye loka ch reh ke
tianu hi labhadi rahi, awaza maar baloandi rahi Dine has has ke khush reh reh dekha Raata nu uth uth rondi rahi, karloadi rahi Tere to bina jindgi ruk gayi othe hi par umar turdi gayi,waqt lagaondi rahi Tere naal rista hi rooh da aa, mere rabb varaga ta hi sari duniya de riste thhakroundi rahi na wajood mera, na hi pehchaan meri tere to bina dono hath jorr jorr rabb nu manondi rahi vese ta tere bina mainu saah v laina aukha tere te door 12 saal phr kive jiaondi rahi umm.. bvncmxlkjhgfdwpoeiurtvnbiievhb..... |
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4th February 2010, 09:10 AM
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Thanks again GOD IS GREAT
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4th February 2010, 09:13 AM
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tuahai KHAT poem read kiti bahut hi sohni aa, par mai osde opposite gall kiti aa, Pardesha ch reh v koi ghat phr v reh jandi aa jo kade v puri nahi hundi GOD IS GREAT
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4th February 2010, 09:17 AM
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par eh samjh nahi aayi ke tusi like kti ya nahi, par Jis tan lage so tan jaane GOD IS GREAT
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4th February 2010, 09:27 AM
Heer ji thuhanu enni der baad etthe dekh ke bahut khushi hoi. har vaar di taraN bahut hi pyara likhia hai tusiN...eddaN hi likhde raho...
 ਹਾਂ ਮੈਂ ਵੀ ਜਾਣਦਾ ਹਾਂ ਇਖਲਾਕ ਦੇ ਤਕਾਜ਼ੇ ਸਭ ਰਿਸ਼ਤਿਆਂ ਦੀ ਸੀਮਾ ਹਰ ਸਾਕ ਦੇ ਤਕਾਜ਼ੇ ਰੁਕਦਾ ਨ ਖੂਨ ਇਹ ਨੇ ਦਿਲ ਚਾਕ ਦੇ ਤਕਾਜ਼ੇ ਕੀ ਰੱਤ ਦੇ ਪੁਤਲਿਆਂ ਨੇ ਚੱਟਾਨ ਹੋ ਕੇ ਜਿਉਣਾ ਬੇਦਾਗ ਨੇ ਉਹ ਸਾਰੇ ਬੱਸ ਦਾਗਦਾਰ ਮੈਂ ਹੀ ਉਹ ਲਿਸ਼ਕਦੇ ਨੇ ਸ਼ੀਸ਼ੇ ਮੈਲੀ ਨੁਹਾਰ ਮੈਂ ਹੀ ਤੁਸੀਂ ਖੁਦ ਹੀ ਧਿਆਨ ਮਾਰੋ, ਕਿੰਨਾ ਕਠਿਨ ਹੈ ਯਾਰੋਂ, ਏਨੇ ਖੁਦਾਵਾਂ ਅੰਦਰ ਇਨਸਾਨ ਹੋ ਕੇ ਜਿਉਣਾ |
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6th February 2010, 10:04 AM
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GOD IS GREAT
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6th February 2010, 07:32 PM
simple.......uneffective..........cant lie..........eh heer ne nai likhiya...........well its gud to c u after so much time...................i hope ur doin' gud.....tc
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6th February 2010, 10:30 PM
vese ta tere bina mainu saah v laina aukha
tere te door 12 saal phr kive jiaondi rahi ... SAT SRI AKAL HEER.. tusi sachi hi bahut bahut sohna likhea hai... umm.. shabda naal khedana ik hor gal hai.. par handaye hoye poem de roop ch pirona sachi sabh to aukha.. tusi theeek likheya "JIS TAN LAGE SOI JANE."... |
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7th February 2010, 06:02 AM
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7th February 2010, 06:37 AM
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Thx Dear, dubara reply den layi, asal ch tuahdi pehli reply to hi samjh aa gayi c ke tusi eda hi reply kiti hovegi,sahi gall aa ke Iss nu shabada ch piron naal kina chhota ban janda aa, par jad handaya pawe ta phr ehi mukan da naam nahi lainda, baki kini ajeeeb gall hai na ke jindgi da ek eda vada Paida kuch lines wich hi khatam ho janda aa GOD IS GREAT
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7th February 2010, 01:06 PM
bura na mna jayeo..mainu jo lagda main keh dina........tsi sohna likhde o..eh mainu nai lagia..so kehta..baki rhi gall sach di..sach kehna v ta kalla a... hun for example... main insaan haan...ik sach hai... mainu insaan da rutba haasil hai... eh jyada sach hai....oh kehnde ne ki main insaan haan,oh kehnde ne k main ohna warga haan..eh jyada sach hai...par sach ki hai..kise nu nahi pta..so discover it.. tell people...idk u r gettin' me r nt..i jst wrt...
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7th February 2010, 02:19 PM
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Oh nahi nahi mai bura nahi manaya, naale iss wich bura manaon wali kihari gall aa, Yeah I can understand what u mean. I know that u always saying that what u feel for the poems, Next time I will try my best. Thx Deep for ur comments. GOD IS GREAT
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7th February 2010, 05:08 PM
oh ik mistake ho gyi...utte jo lines likhyaa i think u misuderstood... main keh reha c..tsi sohna likhde o....bt eh post mainu sohni nai laggi.........oh lines utte ikathia kuj hor e beyaan kr rhia c..hahahha main hun dekhiyaa..eh lafza de edar udar ho jaan nal kina fark pai janda........ keep it up.............u rocks...lolz
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8th February 2010, 03:36 AM
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