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fusoon-e-alfaaz ..... the magic of words - 28th June 2014, 09:21 PM

SDC ke sabhi dostoN ko aadaab

Aaj aap ki ijaazat se ek nayee activity ka aaghaaz kar raha hooN, jis ka naam hai "fusoon-e-alfaaz", meaning the "magic of words".

Ye activity asal mein hamaare committed aur innovative moderators Shaad sahab aur Zainy sahiba ne conceive ki hai aur mujh se guzarish ki is ka aaghaaz karoon. To ise apni khushkismati samajh ke aap ke saamne ye nayee activity le kar haazir ho raha hooN.

Activity bahaut hi simple hai.

Is meiN ek lafz ya jumla diya jayega aur hum sab us par shayari karenge ... koyee sher, qit'ta ya mukhtasar si nazm kahenge, ya aur kuchh jise shayari kaha ja sake aap keh sakte haiN.

Meter ya form ki koyee bandish naheen hogi. Bas jo bhi kahein us meiN diye gale lafz ka istemaal zarooree hai.

Aur jaisa ki SDC ki sabhi activities meiN hota hai, members us par apni raay aur comments denge aur ek open conversation hoga.

Lafz dete waqt hum us ka meaning bhi denge aur saath hi kuchh aashaar ka bhi namoonaa saath meiN denge jin mein us lafz ka istemaal kiya gaya ho.

Ek lafz ek hafte tak rahega. Agle hafte phir naya lafz.

Is activity ka maqsad, mashq-e-shayari karne ke saath saath Urdu zabaan se jaan pehchaan badhaane ka bhi hai. Isliye lafz amooman aisa hoga jo ki aam bolchaal se thoda sa uncommon ho lekin jis se husn-e-shayari meiN izaafa ho sake.

Hamaara ye bilkul bhi maanna naheen hai ki shayari mahaz alfaaz ka hi khel hai, ya ke sirf mushkil lafz se hi khoobsurat shayari ho sakti hai. Qattaee naheeN. Shayari meiN simplicity aur naturalness bahaut zarooree hai.

YahaaN iraadaa bas itna hai ki agar hamari vocabulary meiN izaafa ho sake, to shayari karte waqt bayaan ke liye hamaare options badh jayenge. Shayari meiN ehsaasaat aur khayaalaat ka bayaan aur bhi khoobsurti se ho sakega. Aur mujh jaise shayari seekh rahe logon ko behr, qafiye aur radeef ki bandish meiN rehne ke liye, khayaal, maanee aur taghazzul ke saath samjhauta naheen karna padega.

Aakhir meiN, is activity ke mutalliq bas ye 3 baatein aur kehna chaahoonga ...

1. haalaaNki ye paathshaalaa section meiN hai lekin ye koyee serious class naheeN hai ... bas zauq-e-shayari ka lutf uthaane ka ek bahaana aur ek doosre se seekhne ka ek mauka

2. maiN koyee teacher ya ustaad bilkul bhi naheeN hoon ... asal mein mera urdu ka ilm bilkul bhi pukhta naheeN hai ... par mujhe is khoobsurat zabaan se beintehaa mohabbat hai aur ise gehraayee se samajhne ki behad chaah .... aur isee liye is activity is jud raha hooN

3. is activity meiN meri guzaarish hai ki sab ek doosre ka hausla badhaayeiN, galtiyoN ko sudhaareiN aur ek doosre se seekheeiN aur sikhaayeiN. jin members ka urdu zabaan ka ilm pukhta ho wo rehnumaayee karein jis se sab ko kuchh na kuchh haasil ko sake.

jald hi pehla lafz lekar haazir houNga

duaon ke saath

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28th June 2014, 09:59 PM

Achcha aghaaz hai....lekin ek lafz ek hafte tak.......siikhne ki raftaar bahut dhiime ho jaayegi.......mujhe lagta hai ....har roz ek naya alfaaz hona chaahiye......ab ek din me'n ek naya lafz siikhna koi badi baat to nahi hai......sirf meri haqiir raay hai......aur kuch nahi'n....
   
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28th June 2014, 10:13 PM

mai bhi ufaq sahab ke suggestion se ittefaq rakhta hu.
aadeil sahab -think it over..its a good sugestion.

something like ; word of the day'

but ofc u can take a day off...
aap par chalaan nahi hoga , agar kisi din aap lafz nahi de sake to
\bahut acche bhai

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28th June 2014, 10:25 PM

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Achcha aghaaz hai....lekin ek lafz ek hafte tak.......siikhne ki raftaar bahut dhiime ho jaayegi.......mujhe lagta hai ....har roz ek naya alfaaz hona chaahiye......ab ek din me'n ek naya lafz siikhna koi badi baat to nahi hai......sirf meri haqiir raay hai......aur kuch nahi'n....

Ufaq sahab, tashreef paane ka bahaut bahaut shukriya. Is koshish meiN aap jaise Urdu ke achchhe jaankaar ke saath ki bahaut zaroorat rahegi. Ji agar seekhne ki raftaar badh sake to is se achchhee aur kya baat ho sakti hai. ummeed hai lafz dene ki raftaar zaroor badhe members ke responses ke saath.

Aaghaazi daur meiN ek lafz ko ek hafte tak rakhne ki do wajaheiN haiN.

1. Zyada se zyada members ki cumulative wisdom mil sake har lafz par. Kyunki sabhi members har roz tashreef naheen laate hain, is liye shuruaati daur meiN ek hafte ka waqt diya gaya hai. Aage koshish rahegi ki raftaar badha sakein jaisa ki aap farmaa rahe hain.

2. Yahaan maqsad ye rahega ki kisi bhi lafz ka mafhoom samajhne ke saath saath us ke mukhtalif pehluoN aur raNgoN ka bhi nazaara kiya jaaye, taki us lafz ko hum gehraayee se seekh paayeiN. Ummeed ye hai ki alag alag members apne qalaam se lafz ke alag alag pehluoN ko saamne laayenge. Is liye lafz par kuchh original kehne ke liye un ko sahi waqt milna chaahiye. Agar ye kaam ek hafte se kam meiN hota hua sukhan dega to nothing like it raftaar badha sakte hain. ek din meiN ek lafz kya, ek din meiN do lafz bhi saamne rakh skate haiN but I suggest we take one step at a time

Ummeed hai isee tarah aap ke khayaalaat humeiN milte raheNge ..... aur is activity par aap ke qalaam ka bhi intezaar rahega


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28th June 2014, 10:32 PM

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Ufaq sahab, tashreef paane ka bahaut bahaut shukriya. Is koshish meiN aap jaise Urdu ke achchhe jaankaar ke saath ki bahaut zaroorat rahegi. Ji agar seekhne ki raftaar badh sake to is se achchhee aur kya baat ho sakti hai. ummeed hai lafz dene ki raftaar zaroor badhe members ke responses ke saath.

Aaghaazi daur meiN ek lafz ko ek hafte tak rakhne ki do wajaheiN haiN.

1. Zyada se zyada members ki cumulative wisdom mil sake har lafz par. Kyunki sabhi members har roz tashreef naheen laate hain, is liye shuruaati daur meiN ek hafte ka waqt diya gaya hai. Aage koshish rahegi ki raftaar badha sakein jaisa ki aap farmaa rahe hain.

2. Yahaan maqsad ye rahega ki kisi bhi lafz ka mafhoom samajhne ke saath saath us ke mukhtalif pehluoN aur raNgoN ka bhi nazaara kiya jaaye, taki us lafz ko hum gehraayee se seekh paayeiN. Ummeed ye hai ki alag alag members apne qalaam se lafz ke alag alag pehluoN ko saamne laayenge. Is liye lafz par kuchh original kehne ke liye un ko sahi waqt milna chaahiye. Agar ye kaam ek hafte se kam meiN hota hua sukhan dega to nothing like it raftaar badha sakte hain. ek din meiN ek lafz kya, ek din meiN do lafz bhi saamne rakh skate haiN but I suggest we take one step at a time

Ummeed hai isee tarah aap ke khayaalaat humeiN milte raheNge ..... aur is activity par aap ke qalaam ka bhi intezaar rahega
aapke reply ke baad zarra sahab aisa laga ki aap bilkul sahi hai..

sirf lafzo ke literal meaning hi se matlab nahi hai.

us lafz ke har pahlu par gaur karna hai...
   
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28th June 2014, 10:40 PM

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aapke reply ke baad zarra sahab aisa laga ki aap bilkul sahi hai..

sirf lafzo ke literal meaning hi se matlab nahi hai.

us lafz ke har pahlu par gaur karna hai...

Shukriya Zidd sahab

Ji aaghaaz kar ke dekhte haiN. We will keep on course correcting as per suggestions received and based on members' responses.


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29th June 2014, 01:09 AM

Masha Allah bohat hi khoobsurat aaghaz hai Zarraa sahab..

Khuda aapki mehnat kaamiyab kare....Aameen

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29th June 2014, 08:21 PM

Zarraa saahab behad mubaarakbaad is khoobsurat aaghaz par..
meriii duaaen hain is silsile ki kkaamyaabi ke liye aapke saath aur ummeed hai ke ise aap dilchasp banaae rakkhenge....

har lafz ko samajhnaa badee baat nahi uske har pahluu par gaur ho to mazaa aaye....
chaliye saahab main taiyaar hoon aur aapke saath hoon...

All the best..

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