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Vichode na paayi rabba (Punjabi) -
12th September 2006, 04:07 AM
Ohdiyan judaaiyan vich langdi ni raaT ve..
Jaa ke koi mere sajjan nu haank maar ve... Na din langge... na langge koi vella ve... Maahi de bina meri sajarriyan udaas ve.. Enj jii ke vi, kii kar laangi main haasil ve.. Maahi de bina Tan zindarrdi hi udaas ve... Jaa, jaa ke mere sajjan nu pej bulaava ve.. Keh ohnu "ChaahaT" marr jaavegi hun reh ke juda ve.. O rabba dil vaaleyan di zindarrdi ch.. vichode na paayi ve.. Jinde ji nahi jinde... o Tan marran nu hoye Taiyaar ve... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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12th September 2006, 09:48 AM
hi priya
kaisi ho aap? subha subha aaya to aapki ye peshkas pe nazar padi meri bahot hi achhi lagi aur pasand bhi aayi ap bhot achhalikhti hai bas uhi likhte rahitega Na din langge... na langge koi vella ve... Maahi de bina meri sajarriyan udaas ve.. ye line mujhe bahot hi achhi lagi keep wrinting priya aapka dost dhaval |
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12th September 2006, 10:14 AM
hi priya
kamaal kar diya apne,har ik word powerful hai.keep it up take care |
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12th September 2006, 03:31 PM
Hi Priya
Acha likha hay tumne...mere daad kabul karna... Ohdiyan judaaiyan vich langdi ni raaT ve.. Jaa ke koi mere sajjan nu haank maar ve... Ek geet yaad aa gaya channa veh ghar aa ja ve.....keep writing... take care |
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13th September 2006, 08:48 AM
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Humesha ki tarah is baar bhi mera sath dene ke liye shukriya.. Aapko yahan dekh ke bahut khushi hui.. Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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16th September 2006, 10:40 AM
Dear Priya,
Poori tarah se to samajh nahi aaya... but jitna samajha aaya woh bahut hi expressive thha... thou the expressions were of pain.... it's very well written.... Zindagi hai... Mushken bhi aaati hain... and i m sure u r not the one to give up... Keep on moving dear... take good care of urself... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Re: Vichode na paayi rabba (Punjabi) -
16th September 2006, 12:08 PM
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kush raha karo.....! tumhari didi  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Re: Vichode na paayi rabba (Punjabi) -
16th September 2006, 12:41 PM
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aapka kalam dekh kar mujhe apne dard ka ehsaas hota hai. sach me pyaar me judai bada tadpati hai. rabb kare pyaar me judai kabhi na dil bahot rota hai. lekin rabb sunta kahan hai. aapne bahot achha likha hai. rabb kare aapko jo chaahiye aapko mil jaye. meri daad kabool karo ji gratse aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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18th September 2006, 01:37 AM
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Aapko pasand aaya khushi hui jaan ke... Aapke yahan aane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya... Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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18th September 2006, 01:39 AM
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Aapko apni post pe dekh ke bahut khushi hui.... Bahut bahut shukriya aapki daad ke liye... Take Care... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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18th September 2006, 01:41 AM
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Ya that's right... I'm not someone who will give up! I have the courage to face the present & fight for a better future! It feels so nice to have you always on my side... Thanx a tonne!!!! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Re: Re: Vichode na paayi rabba (Punjabi) -
20th September 2006, 07:39 PM
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Aapne muh me ghee shakkar... chocolates... halwa.... aur jo bhi aapko pasand ho... sab... Par itne ache naseeb kahan.. abhi nahi ja rahi vapis.. abhi bhi time lagega unse milne ko.... Tab tak yahin milungi aapko... sabke dukh baantti aur apna haal sunaati.... Aap bhi khush raha karo.... samjhe!!! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Re: Vichode na paayi rabba (Punjabi) -
22nd September 2006, 04:26 AM
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Bahut hi changi lagi thuvadi eh punjabi nazm...... ek geet da misra yaad aaya taan likhda jaawan........ " muddat baad jamane ne samjhaya ae..... phul nu sungi da e, phul nu khaayi da nai.... pyar bakshda hai zindagi nu zindagi.... pyar pooji da e..pyar thukraai da nai....." aaj bade dinaan baad kujtch punjabi lekh padya....... mann nu changa lagaya.....te thuvade gamaan di raahe kujtch likhan lagya haan..... eh haal ae jind nimaani da.... jiven phul koi nishaani da...... suke pattyean waango jhad gaya..... jiven varqa kise kahani da........ **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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hi priya |
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hi priya -
22nd September 2006, 09:40 AM
well said priyaa ji keep it up .
himmatt waalaa hain wohh jo mausamm keyy sitamm sehttaa hainn patteeyy jadhtteeyy hainn maggarr paiddhh khhaddhhaa rehttaa hainn |
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hello priya -
22nd September 2006, 10:54 AM
very nice priya ji tussii bohhatt sohhnnaa likheyyaa keep it up .
himmatt waalaa hainn wohh joo maussamm ke sitamm sehtaa hain patteyy jadhhtteeyy hainn maggaarr ppaaiidd khaddhhaa rehhttaa haiinn |
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24th September 2006, 04:16 AM
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Aapki dua do har dil vaale ke liye sachchi ho jaaye.... "AAMEEN" Bahut bahut shukriya.. aapne jo ise pasand kiya.. Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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24th September 2006, 04:19 AM
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Tuhaada jawaab bada wadiya lageya... Te Tuhaada itthe aan da... te mainnu jawaab vi den da.. main boht ttanvaad kardi haan.. Dua kardi haan.. Penna de sir te veeran di chaan injh hi bani rahe.. Tussi apnna khayaal rakhiyo Veer ji.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Re: hi priya -
26th September 2006, 03:42 AM
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aapki hounsla afzaai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.. Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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28th September 2006, 08:49 AM
meri prii
soonder geet ... tumhari di |
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5th December 2006, 11:45 PM
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Itni der se jawab dene ke liye maafi chaahti hun. Jyada nahi bas kuch 3 mahine hi late hun.. lol.. Aap yahan aaye itna hi bahut hai.. Apna khayal rakhna humesha~!!! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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