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12th February 2005, 07:38 AM
Hi Everybody,
I had posted this poem of mine long time back on some thread... But it did not reach many people.... According to me it deserved a thread of its own... I hope you all like it and appreciate it... This thread will have my poetry on different ways to say I Love You On the canvas of my hart, I have drawn a dream, I want you my love To make this dream a reality It has a place so beautiful So heavenly, so magical ………. a sparkling sky The moon shining bright The smell of mohagany The slow cool breeze Just the place I wanna be Not alone but with thee Walking near the river bank And sit on the velvet green Staring in your ocean eyes Hold your hand and say …………..I love thee Say it.....please Love Rohin |
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12th February 2005, 12:39 PM
rohin,
well i dont to whether i shud have replied here or not , bt then i cudnot stop myself. srry before hand only if u dont like my coming here n replying u. well buddy ur poem is awesom. really touched heart. direct feelings from ur heart has explored. keep writing. god bless u with his fine glitters. |
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12th February 2005, 01:53 PM
rohinji
what beautiful expressions u hav i muct say this is lovely n extremely well written keep writing sonal |
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12th February 2005, 01:55 PM
Hi Ruhani,
Thanks for appreciating my post. Keep coming for more thanks Rohin |
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12th February 2005, 01:56 PM
Hi sonal ji,
I am glad u liked the expressions. Keep coming Thanks Rohin |
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12th February 2005, 07:51 PM
rohin paji
ki haal hai phatte chakki ja rahe hon.... bahut acha likha hai bhai... Keep it up... take care DEvdaas.... |
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12th February 2005, 08:45 PM
Hi Devdaas,
thanks buddy... i am glad u liked it Thanks Rohin |
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12th February 2005, 09:08 PM
Hi Yaara...
I should say...It's just fantastic ! About "dream" just remembered an old poem of mine... Slowly your memory digs me your breath is here close to me your words are echo among my hands to hear you again an instant to relive you forever … my dream ! Hope you like... Amanush...  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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12th February 2005, 09:15 PM
Hi Amanush,
Fantastic words my friend i really loved ur words... Thanks Rohin |
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12th February 2005, 11:55 PM
hi rohin dood,
as i always say your writings are really very good and very nice so keeo it up and write more like this... well i guess i will try and tell that person but i am not sure. «« The wolf in me always desires the sheep in you. »» Ph. No: +91-98867-99486 |
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13th February 2005, 12:04 AM
Hi Kevin,
i am gald you liked it.. Keep reading and i will wait to know how she reacted and it better be quick else i will ...lol ...just kidding... Just wanted to scare you so that u realise time might just slip away... Thanks Rohin |
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13th February 2005, 11:27 PM
thnx i found this one also. m runnin out of words each time, coz all ur poems r so good n amazing. thanx for sharin wit us
keep riting always. good luk n best wishes... tc |
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13th February 2005, 11:29 PM
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i run out of words myself when i write about love so .. thanks buddy and keep coming and reading... Thanks Rohin |
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13th February 2005, 11:37 PM
hey typical british buddy!!! lol jokes. i can understand coz love is something that canot always be defined in one way. i always like ur work coz u rite it from the botom of ur heart, n will always come n read. thanx agen for sharin wit all. keep ritin buddy.. lol. good luk best wishes...
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14th February 2005, 12:41 PM
Hi Reema,
Thanks buddy...Well tumhe aur kya kahoon... Aati rehna ...padhti rehna....muskurati rehna... Thanks Rohin |
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15th February 2005, 03:01 AM
Rohin, Tum bhi naa,hahaha Kuch nahi!!!
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15th February 2005, 04:42 AM
Parul,
Tum bhi na...Kya?? Arre batau bhi na...Kya kehna chahti ho Thanks Rohin |
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15th February 2005, 07:09 AM
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Hi Rohin, Well written friend keep it upi and HAppy Valentines day to you I hope you get the love of yor life very soon and the next valentines day you will be celebrating with her Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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15th February 2005, 07:47 AM
Rohin, You are too good, That's it... Okay, bye! Take care.
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15th February 2005, 09:42 AM
On the canvas of my hart,
I have drawn a dream, I want you my love To make this dream a reality It has a place so beautiful So heavenly, so magical ………. a sparkling sky Lovelyyyy.... The moon shining bright The smell of mohagany The slow cool breeze Just the place I wanna be Not alone but with thee Walking near the river bank And sit on the velvet green Staring in your ocean eyes Hold your hand and say …………..I love thee Say it.....please coooll.. Rohin, How didi i miss this one? Oh yes.. wasnt here on 12th..... Great Words buddy... Pehle mil jaate to kal kucch kaam aate  neways better late than never.. Evry day is a valentine's day Good work.. as usaual.. expressed in ur own style... loved it Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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15th February 2005, 01:41 PM
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Happy valentine's day to you too Thanks for the sweet wishes buddy.. Maybe not next but someday i will Thanks Rohin |
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15th February 2005, 01:42 PM
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Hi Parul, Bhai too good to albata kuch hota nahi hai ... Magar tum kehti ho to maan lete hain.... LOL Thanks a lot Rohin |
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15th February 2005, 01:45 PM
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I told you abt this yesterday....but i guess tum Valentine's day ke kisses lene mein busy the...  Well achi baat hai.... Well andaz har aashiq ka alag hota hai Magar dil mein naam Mohabbat hi hota hai Thanks Rohin |
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23rd February 2005, 04:52 PM
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23rd February 2005, 06:00 PM
Hi Priyanka,
Haan meine isse use kiya hai. And i am glad u liked it Thanks Rohin |
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23rd February 2005, 06:17 PM
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well kab use kiya... rohin hume nahi batoge... mana ye kisse sabhi ko sunate nahi hai.... magar dosto se chupate nahi hai.... so do telll..... |
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23rd February 2005, 06:29 PM
rohin, tumhari post par haq se aa gayi hu... par kisi aur kaam se. yakin k sath k tumhe bura nahi lagega.
di priyanka, tumhara mail box full hai ... maie jawaab nahi de pa rahi hu. inbox khali kar do di |
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23rd February 2005, 06:40 PM
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Take care Rohin |
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23rd February 2005, 06:47 PM
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rohin, soondar ahesaas......... khush raho. di |
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23rd February 2005, 07:09 PM
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Aapko pura haq hai... Thanks Rohin |
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23rd February 2005, 07:15 PM
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Thanks Rohin |
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24th February 2005, 08:37 AM
Bahut khoob rohin bhai....
kispe use kiya hai yeh to hume bhi jaanna hai dear... chupe rustam kar gayi umar magar ikraar karna nahi aaya usne maangi bhi to judaai mangi aur hame inkaar karna bhi na aaya |
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24th February 2005, 01:25 PM
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Jaanta to tu bhi hai to pooch kaise raha hai Chal enjoy kar Rohin |
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hi -
26th March 2005, 11:13 AM
On the canvas of my hart,
I have drawn a dream, I want you my love To make this dream a reality It has a place so beautiful So heavenly, so magical ………. a sparkling sky The moon shining bright The smell of mohagany The slow cool breeze Just the place I wanna be Not alone but with thee Walking near the river bank And sit on the velvet green Staring in your ocean eyes Hold your hand and say …………..I love thee Say it.....please beautfiul awsome luv ur wrtiing ur deep and simply amazing thoughts wow the person who will get ur luv will b very lucky very lucky Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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26th March 2005, 12:34 PM
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I am glad u loved my writing, I dont know whether she will be lucky or not. But i do hope she accepts my love Thanks Rohin |
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hi -
11th February 2006, 09:07 AM
Hi ROhin
Pyar ehsaas hi aisa hai sabko apni lapait me le hi leta hai Pyar ki kashish khich hi leti hai apni taraf Luv ya Priya this writing was awesome... and hrt touching.... On the canvas oh my hrt i have written ur name no rain can wash it away no wind can blow it away no distance can affect it no argument can neglect it one can do anything for your mesmerizing touch oh! cuz i love you so much! lols... Khush raho behad pyar Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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