kitna pyaasa tha ek ghum..........

[LAMHA]

doston,
dard ki ek aur tasveer leke hazir hoo....is dard se lakh nazarein churalo,fir bhi ye hamesh wafaa nibhata hai..pata nahi kaha se chala aata hai....umeed hai aap ko ye ghazal pasand aayegi....reply zaroor kijiyega...

Main Pal pal marti rahi wo Lamha lamha jee gaya,
Kitna Pyaasa tha ek Ghum, mujhe todkar pee gaya,

Kalam rafta rafta toot_ti ja rahi hai,
Dard mila kuch Aisa jo Lafzon ko see gaya,

Wo gaya mujhe chodkar, par mera sab le gaya,
Khayal tha usse bhoolne ka, lo abb wo bhi gaya,

Bastiyan jalne ka Sabab tumse poochte hain,
Par tumhe kya, kaun mara aur kaun jee gaya,

Uth kar Insaniyat se haath milana hai “LAMHA”
Wo Ehsaas tha yahin, bas Abhi gaya..Abhi gaya.....

[shab_seher]

bahut umda shabdon ki jadugari shayad isi ko kehte hai Yahan aapse .Vishal ji se aur baaki sabhi se kaafi seekh raha hoon

[dineshdharvi]

[quote=LAMHA;268165]doston,
dard ki ek aur tasveer leke hazir hoo....is dard se lakh nazarein churalo,fir bhi ye hamesh wafaa nibhata hai..pata nahi kaha se chala aata hai....umeed hai aap ko ye ghazal pasand aayegi....reply zaroor kijiyega...

Main Pal pal marti rahi wo Lamha lamha jee gaya,
Kitna Pyaasa tha ek Ghum, mujhe todkar pee gaya,

Kalam rafta rafta toot_ti ja rahi hai,
Dard mila kuch Aisa jo Lafzon ko see gaya,

Wo gaya mujhe chodkar, par mera sab le gaya,
Khayal tha usse bhoolne ka, lo abb wo bhi gaya,

Bastiyan jalne ka Sabab tumse poochte hain,
Par tumhe kya, kaun mara aur kaun jee gaya,

Uth kar Insaniyat se haath milana hai “LAMHA”
Wo Ehsaas tha yahin, bas Abhi gaya..Abhi gaya.....

wah lamha ji bahut khoob kafi acha likha hai apne hum humesha yahi ummid karte hai ke humesha app yuhi likhte raho aur hum padhte rahe aur bhi app likho bahut acha yahi chahte hai hum.

[drashti]

hmmmm....
tehreer to bahut acchiya aapne post ki hain lamhaji par aap shayad yeh bhul gayi ki kisi aur ki tehreer post kare to niche writer ka naam zaroor likhte.pata nahin to alag baat hain..par aap to kaafi waqt se yaha hain.kisi aur ki tehreer main uska naam hatake....apna lagana yeh theek baat nahi.Agge se dhyan rahe

khush rahen..drashti.....

[Saloniraj]

Dear Lamha........
Bahut Achhi shayri he.. aur sabdo ki jugal bandi achhi tarah banai he tumne....par sorry bahut kuch isme se jana pehchana sa laga... sayad pehle kisi shayri me isme se kuch wording padhe the esa laga..
fir bhi maja aa gaya.. ese hi likhti rehna...... atlist merejese tanha dil ko kuch sukun mil jata he

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by shab_seher

bahut umda shabdon ki jadugari shayad isi ko kehte hai Yahan aapse .Vishal ji se aur baaki sabhi se kaafi seekh raha hoon

shukriya SEHER....yaha aane keliye aur is ghazal ko pasand karne keliye...............

[LAMHA]

[quote=dineshdharvi;268196]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

doston,
dard ki ek aur tasveer leke hazir hoo....is dard se lakh nazarein churalo,fir bhi ye hamesh wafaa nibhata hai..pata nahi kaha se chala aata hai....umeed hai aap ko ye ghazal pasand aayegi....reply zaroor kijiyega...

Main Pal pal marti rahi wo Lamha lamha jee gaya,
Kitna Pyaasa tha ek Ghum, mujhe todkar pee gaya,

Kalam rafta rafta toot_ti ja rahi hai,
Dard mila kuch Aisa jo Lafzon ko see gaya,

Wo gaya mujhe chodkar, par mera sab le gaya,
Khayal tha usse bhoolne ka, lo abb wo bhi gaya,

Bastiyan jalne ka Sabab tumse poochte hain,
Par tumhe kya, kaun mara aur kaun jee gaya,

Uth kar Insaniyat se haath milana hai “LAMHA”
Wo Ehsaas tha yahin, bas Abhi gaya..Abhi gaya.....

wah lamha ji bahut khoob kafi acha likha hai apne hum humesha yahi ummid karte hai ke humesha app yuhi likhte raho aur hum padhte rahe aur bhi app likho bahut acha yahi chahte hai hum.

thanx DINESH......aap ki dua rahi to mai uhi likhti rahungi....shukriya.....

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by drashti

hmmmm....
tehreer to bahut acchiya aapne post ki hain lamhaji par aap shayad yeh bhul gayi ki kisi aur ki tehreer post kare to niche writer ka naam zaroor likhte.pata nahin to alag baat hain..par aap to kaafi waqt se yaha hain.kisi aur ki tehreer main uska naam hatake....apna lagana yeh theek baat nahi.Agge se dhyan rahe

khush rahen..drashti.....

hey DRASHTI,
mai aap ko ye bata du ki aap se thodi si purani member hone ke nate muje yaha ke kaayde-kanoon ka ilm hai...mai achi tarah janti hoo ki agar apni khud ki tehreer nahi hai to us par NOT MINE likhna chahiye...pata nahi kyo aap to mere piche hi pad gayi hai...agar meri tehreer nahi hoti to mai is par shayar ka naam ya fir not mine zaroor likhti...
apna khayal rakhiyega.....

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by Saloniraj

Dear Lamha........
Bahut Achhi shayri he.. aur sabdo ki jugal bandi achhi tarah banai he tumne....par sorry bahut kuch isme se jana pehchana sa laga... sayad pehle kisi shayri me isme se kuch wording padhe the esa laga..
fir bhi maja aa gaya.. ese hi likhti rehna...... atlist merejese tanha dil ko kuch sukun mil jata he

thanx RAJ.....kisi aur ki ghazal se hamare shabdo ka match hona ittefaq bhi ho sakta hai...gum ka sabab to ek hi hota hai...aksar ghazalein ek dusre se milti hai..kyo ki har mohabbat ke maare ka ghum ek sa hi hota hai....
par tumhe ye ghazal pasand aayi,us ke liye shukriya...

[drashti]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

hey DRASHTI,
mai aap ko ye bata du ki aap se thodi si purani member hone ke nate muje yaha ke kaayde-kanoon ka ilm hai...mai achi tarah janti hoo ki agar apni khud ki tehreer nahi hai to us par NOT MINE likhna chahiye...pata nahi kyo aap to mere piche hi pad gayi hai...agar meri tehreer nahi hoti to mai is par shayar ka naam ya fir not mine zaroor likhti...
apna khayal rakhiyega.....

Wallah......ek to chori upe se sinazori.....mujhe laga aap apne bhul ki maafi mangegi par aap to bahut rude hain....aaur aapki ankhen bhi kamzor aapne shayad dekha nahin meri join date date 2004 hain to aap mujhse purani memeber nahin hain....hum aisa karna to nahin chahte the par aapki rudeness ne aisa karne par majboor kar diya...yeh lijeye link yeh ek saal pehle ki post hain...ab na kehna ki yeh aapne likha hain.....good luck.....

http://www.muziqpakistan.com/board/i...howtopic=71442

[drashti]

ab aapke paas meri baat ka kya jawab hain???????????link bhi de di humne...ab to aap keh dijeye hi ki apne nahin likha...

[EkDharkan]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

doston,
dard ki ek aur tasveer leke hazir hoo....is dard se lakh nazarein churalo,fir bhi ye hamesh wafaa nibhata hai..pata nahi kaha se chala aata hai....umeed hai aap ko ye ghazal pasand aayegi....reply zaroor kijiyega...

Main Pal pal marti rahi wo Lamha lamha jee gaya,
Kitna Pyaasa tha ek Ghum, mujhe todkar pee gaya,

Kalam rafta rafta toot_ti ja rahi hai,
Dard mila kuch Aisa jo Lafzon ko see gaya,

Wo gaya mujhe chodkar, par mera sab le gaya,
Khayal tha usse bhoolne ka, lo abb wo bhi gaya,

Bastiyan jalne ka Sabab tumse poochte hain,
Par tumhe kya, kaun mara aur kaun jee gaya,

Uth kar Insaniyat se haath milana hai “LAMHA”
Wo Ehsaas tha yahin, bas Abhi gaya..Abhi gaya.....

Wah Lamha ji
Very beautyful

[EkDharkan]

Are ye kya huwa,
Maine gazal parh kar dusre replies parhe bina apna reply diya tha...
Lamha ji, ye bilkul galat baat hai
Drashti bahot sahi hai
Aage khayaal rakhiyega

Namaste,
Reshma,

[sunita thakur]

Dear Lamha........bahut dukh hua yeh sab padkar......aisa nahi hona chahiye....theek hai humey kisi ki koi shayri behad pasand aati hai...aur hum usko sabhi dosto.n ke saath share karna chahtey haiN to copy paste karna koi galat baat nahi hai....par haaN, ek baat bahut jaroori hai ki humey uske neeche writer ka naam ya phir "NOT MINE" jaroor likhna chahiye...taki likhne wale ko uska credit miley...jiska sahi haqdaar wahi hai.

aur dear lahma....galtiya.n sabse hoti haiN...aur apni galti maan.ne se koi chotta nahi ho jata....galti maan.na bhi ek badpan(greatness) hai...so dear tum SDC chorrkar kahiN nahi jaogi...aur mujhe umeed hai ki tum mujhe didi ("World's sweetest diiii") kahti ho...to meri baat ka bura nahi maanogi.....maine "Drashti" ke diye sabhi link pade haiN...woh sahi hai, aur meri pyari si lamha se galti hue hai....galtiya.n hum hi kartey haiN aur hum hi apni galtiya.n sudhartey bhi hain.....tum bahut accha likhti ho....hum nahi chahtey ki hum ek acchi shayra ko kho deN....so plsssssss.....baat ko samjo....umeed hai jaldi hi ek naye gazal ke saath Lamha hum sab ke saath yaha hogi....lamha tum ek acchi ladki ho aur mujhe pata hai tum bado.n ki baat bhi maanti ho...so jaldi se aao aur badiya si gazal ke saath mahfil mahkao....!

tumhari diiiii

[nihar]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

doston,
dard ki ek aur tasveer leke hazir hoo....is dard se lakh nazarein churalo,fir bhi ye hamesh wafaa nibhata hai..pata nahi kaha se chala aata hai....umeed hai aap ko ye ghazal pasand aayegi....reply zaroor kijiyega...

Main Pal pal marti rahi wo Lamha lamha jee gaya,
Kitna Pyaasa tha ek Ghum, mujhe todkar pee gaya,

Kalam rafta rafta toot_ti ja rahi hai,
Dard mila kuch Aisa jo Lafzon ko see gaya,

Wo gaya mujhe chodkar, par mera sab le gaya,
Khayal tha usse bhoolne ka, lo abb wo bhi gaya,

Bastiyan jalne ka Sabab tumse poochte hain,
Par tumhe kya, kaun mara aur kaun jee gaya,

Uth kar Insaniyat se haath milana hai “LAMHA”
Wo Ehsaas tha yahin, bas Abhi gaya..Abhi gaya.....

bahot aachi zuban di hain aapne dard ko

Main Pal pal marti rahi wo Lamha lamha jee gaya,
Kitna Pyaasa tha ek Ghum, mujhe todkar pee gaya,

Kalam rafta rafta toot_ti ja rahi hai,
Dard mila kuch Aisa jo Lafzon ko see gaya,

Wo gaya mujhe chodkar, par mera sab le gaya,
Khayal tha usse bhoolne ka, lo abb wo bhi gaya,




khuda kare aapke sab gum hamare ho
hamare khush nasib tumhare ho
aap muskurate raho sada zindagi main
aur dard ke girte huwe aasu hamare ho

[Saloniraj]

Dear Lamha...

agar Drashti ki baat sach he aur jo link di he wo sahi he to ye achha nahi he...

but its OK wese bhi Uparwala Galati nahi karsakta isliye to hum logo ko banaya he...

So just CHILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL and Enjoy the Life