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Yaadon ka Daaman - 18th January 2005, 12:31 PM

Yaadon ka Daaman"

Yaaron ..
yaadon ka daaman bhule se bhi na chodna!
En ki chhaav mein hum har mushqil se guzar saktein hein..


yaadon ke panno ko hum jab chahen palat saktein hein
yaadon ko sine se laga kar rakh saktein hein!
yaadon ke kafilen toh khud chal kar aate hein,
Voh kisi bewafa mehboob se nahi hotein...
Jo ruh tak utar kar..thukra jate hein!!

Isi liye ...
Yaron yaadon ka daaman kabhi na chodna!
En ki chhaav mein hum har mushqil se guzar saktein hein..
ye zinda hein toh hum jee saktein hein!


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18th January 2005, 10:42 PM

Hi ,

yaadon ko janjo ke rakho. per jine ke liye dil ki shama ko fir jalana bhi sikho.......

may be this is not relevant here but still i will write it:---

"Some times your heart thinks, whom do you really love?
You love someone but you like someone else,
Your mind speaks, but your heart denies....
Someone listens, but someone else comforts...
Someone prays, but someone else consoles...
Someone says but someone else's action speaks...
Someone laughs, but someone else understands...
Someone just tells, but someone makes you do...
Someone is there, but someone you want is not...
You search for someone is someone else...
Is this the beginning of love, or is it the end...
A times come in life when you thinks what love really is?
What you think is love or it is something else...
Listen to your mind but follow your heart."
   
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19th January 2005, 02:20 AM

komal and Raj that's really very nice. Apni bhi arz hei -

yaadein tho aansoo hein
beh jaaein tho achcha ho
aur sookh jaaein
tho mushkil ho

meri maano
achchi yaadon ko
sanjoey rakkho
aur buri yaadon ko
jaaney do!
   
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HI raj! - 19th January 2005, 11:19 AM

Raj ji!

What u wrote it may not be relevant..but i luved it! U'r right..thre r times when one wonders wat is love?...and sumtimes he finds himself searching an answer forever..

Do keep writing
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hi Bina ji - 19th January 2005, 11:21 AM

Bina ji...! bahot khub kaha apne ...aur sahi bhi!

Apki ye sallaah hame sahi lagi
Dil ki baat kahi apne...sidhi dil pe ake lagi! )) ha ha! kidding!

i liked reading ur post..in reply do keep writng!

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hi - 20th January 2005, 10:48 PM

hello komalji!!!!


aap bahut hi umda likhti hain aur yaadon ke baare main to aapka ek ek shabd sahi hai.....i loved ur composition ..please keep writing...bye 4 now!!!!!!!!!!take care!!!!!!!!!


koshish ko hamari please nakarna mat.........gar pasand aaye to likhna zaroor ek khat....
   
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