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Aadat teri padh gayi hai o jaana aisi... -
1st July 2015, 07:38 AM
Aadat teri padh gayi hai oh jaana aisi
Phoolon ko bhanvre ki hoti hai lat jaisi
Muskuraata dekhoon, mera din ban jaaye
Mohabbat main kartaa hoon ye tujhse kaisi
Yaad karoon khudaa ko to yaad too bhi aaye
Tujhko jo khushi de, dua maanguun hardam vaisi
Too jo mujhe mili hai, khuda ki rehmat hai
Varna kahaan mujhme koi khoobi tere jaisi
Door se hi sahi, takta rahoon main tujhko
Mehsoos tujhko kar ho mujhko khushi aisi
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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1st July 2015, 10:18 AM
oye hoye....................
kis par itna pyaar chidak rahe ho pulkit miyaa..................
Shweta ko sunaaya kya? woh to aaj khushi se fooli nahi samaa rahi hogi.
ishq se saraabor iss kalaam ko mera salaam.
by the way ye dard section mein kar kya raha hai?
ye to mehak raha hai pyaar ke gulaabon se.
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1st July 2015, 11:37 AM
waahhh pulkit bhai..... kya abaat hai kyaa andaaz hai aur kyaa khooob ghazal huii hai ke bas padhte hi bantaa hai..... masha allaah aapke khayaalon ki parwaaz aaj bahutt uuchii lageee hame aur bas bebaaq hi ise baar baar padhne kaa mann karta rahaa......
bahut bahut daad pesh hain aapko.. aate rahen.. likhte rahiye..
shaad....
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1st July 2015, 12:00 PM
bahut pyaari rachna hai pulkit jee..............
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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1st July 2015, 12:08 PM
Muskuraata dekhoon, mera din ban jaaye
Mohabbat main kartaa hoon ye tujhse kais
bahut pyare bahut nazuk ehsaas....bahut khoob kalam pulkit jii.... likhte rahein aise hee... i
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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1st July 2015, 08:48 PM
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Originally Posted by masti
oye hoye....................
kis par itna pyaar chidak rahe ho pulkit miyaa..................
Shweta ko sunaaya kya? woh to aaj khushi se fooli nahi samaa rahi hogi.
ishq se saraabor iss kalaam ko mera salaam.
by the way ye dard section mein kar kya raha hai?
ye to mehak raha hai pyaar ke gulaabon se.
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Bhaabhi,
Aapko itna pasand aaya jaankar khushi huwi... Aise hi mann me kucch chal raha thha to likh diya... Shweta ko nahin sunaaya, aise hi post kar diya thha. Aapne itni tareef kardi ke ab mujhe lagta hai use sunaa dena chaahiye.
Aise hi saath banaaye rakhiye, apna khayal rakhiye
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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1st July 2015, 08:52 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
waahhh pulkit bhai..... kya abaat hai kyaa andaaz hai aur kyaa khooob ghazal huii hai ke bas padhte hi bantaa hai..... masha allaah aapke khayaalon ki parwaaz aaj bahutt uuchii lageee hame aur bas bebaaq hi ise baar baar padhne kaa mann karta rahaa......
bahut bahut daad pesh hain aapko.. aate rahen.. likhte rahiye..
shaad....
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Dear Shoaib,
Bhai itni saari tareef ke liye shukriya... Main to mann ke ehsaas likhne ki koshish karta hoon, aap log use khaas bana dete hain. Yun hi haunsla badhate raho, koshish zaari rahegi
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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1st July 2015, 10:37 PM
Pulkit bhai,
You are writing beautiful poems.Cool one.Muskurata Gungunata yeh qalam bahut khoobsurat hay.Keep up the good work.
tk care
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Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta
Aadat teri padh gayi hai oh jaana aisi
Phoolon ko bhanvre ki hoti hai lat jaisi
Muskuraata dekhoon, mera din ban jaaye
Mohabbat main kartaa hoon ye tujhse kaisi
Yaad karoon khudaa ko to yaad too bhi aaye
Tujhko jo khushi de, dua maanguun hardam vaisi
Too jo mujhe mili hai, khuda ki rehmat hai
Varna kahaan mujhme koi khoobi tere jaisi
Door se hi sahi, takta rahoon main tujhko
Mehsoos tujhko kar ho mujhko khushi aisi
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1st July 2015, 10:55 PM
Pulkit Gupta ji ....bada hi romantic matla hai aapki ghazal ka
Aage aap rab ko yaad kerte haiN tau mehboob bhi yaad aata hai ..bhai subhan allah.
Manga hai tujko rab se duaon meiN kahIN .....yaar ke deedar ki bus tamanna hai dil meiN ..
Bahut ache bhai , yuN hi likhte raho .
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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1st July 2015, 11:09 PM
shaadi ke baad romantic likhna majboori ho jaati hai... waise bhagwan jaane mera kya hoga... :P Pulkit bhaiya bahut masoom se andaaz mein aapne apna ishq bayaaN kiya hai, umeed karta hun aage bhi yuNhi aapke aur rang dekhne ko milte raheNge...
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3rd July 2015, 08:35 AM
Pulkit ji...
Behad dil fareb rahi aapki ye peshkash........bohot achhe....waaaaaaaah kya kahne
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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3rd July 2015, 02:17 PM
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bahut pyaari rachna hai pulkit jee..............
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Shukriya janaab! Yunhi saath dete rahiye!
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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3rd July 2015, 02:18 PM
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Muskuraata dekhoon, mera din ban jaaye
Mohabbat main kartaa hoon ye tujhse kais
bahut pyare bahut nazuk ehsaas....bahut khoob kalam pulkit jii.... likhte rahein aise hee... i
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Shukriya Madhu ji, ehsaas pasand aaye jaankar khushi huwi... aap saath deti rahiye!
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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3rd July 2015, 02:19 PM
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Pulkit bhai,
You are writing beautiful poems.Cool one.Muskurata Gungunata yeh qalam bahut khoobsurat hay.Keep up the good work.
tk care
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Thank you so much Sukanya di... Isme mera nahin bass us ehsaas ka kamaal hai... aap aati rahiye... apna khayal rakhiye
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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3rd July 2015, 02:21 PM
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Pulkit Gupta ji ....bada hi romantic matla hai aapki ghazal ka
Aage aap rab ko yaad kerte haiN tau mehboob bhi yaad aata hai ..bhai subhan allah.
Manga hai tujko rab se duaon meiN kahIN .....yaar ke deedar ki bus tamanna hai dil meiN ..
Bahut ache bhai , yuN hi likhte raho .
Sanjay Sehgal
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Sanjay bhai,
Mann me jaise ehsaas aate hain vaisa likh leta hoon, aapko pasand bhai bahut accha laga... aap yun hi haunsla badhate rahen... khayal rakhen apna! Aur yeh Pulkit Gupta ji ka takalluf chhodiye, Pulkit hi kaafi hai
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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3rd July 2015, 02:23 PM
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shaadi ke baad romantic likhna majboori ho jaati hai... waise bhagwan jaane mera kya hoga... :P Pulkit bhaiya bahut masoom se andaaz mein aapne apna ishq bayaaN kiya hai, umeed karta hun aage bhi yuNhi aapke aur rang dekhne ko milte raheNge...
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Majboori kaisi dost? Majboori me main to likh nahin paata at least... Mann me ehsaas hon tabhi khul ke bayaan ho paate hain... Baaki aapke saath bhi jo hoga accha hi hoga... take care of yourself!
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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3rd July 2015, 02:24 PM
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Pulkit ji...
Behad dil fareb rahi aapki ye peshkash........bohot achhe....waaaaaaaah kya kahne
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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Thank you Bhushan bhai! Aise hi saath dete rahiye!
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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7th April 2021, 10:44 PM
Wah kya baat hai, Aakhir shayar ban hi gaye. Ye is mehfil ka asar hai ya kisi aur ka....?
Chadha hai aaj bhi uska Rang, jisne kabhi Ranga hi nahi :-)
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