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Ghazal: rang mazhab zubaan se bhi aage... - 12th June 2012, 11:05 AM
aadaab dosto,

ek taaza ghazal peshe Khidmat..tamaam ahbaab ki raaey ka intezaar rahega..


rang mazhab zubaan se bhi aage
hai tasavvur bayaan se bhi aage

khwahishoeN ke paroeN ko lagaa kar
ja uduuN aasmaan se bhi aage

mujhe dhundhna hai basera
soch ke har makaan se bhi aage

raat bhar hi ginieN maine taare
kuch to ho kehkashaan se bhi aage

mil gaya woh khuda se kabhi ka
jee gaya jo gumaan se bhi aage

phir wahi tum wahi baat bismil
ramz hai kya jahaan se bhi aage?

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rang mazhab zubaan se bhi aage
hai tasavvur bayaan se bhi aage

khwahishoeN ke paroeN ko lagaa kar
ja uduuN aasmaan se bhi aage

mujhe dhundhna hai basera
soch ke har makaan se bhi aage

raat bhar hi ginieN maine taare
kuch to ho kehkashaan se bhi aage

mil gaya woh khuda se kabhi ka
jee gaya jo gumaan se bhi aage

phir wahi tum wahi baat bismil
ramz hai kya jahaan se bhi aage?

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khwahishoeN ke paroeN ko lagaa kar
ja uduuN aasmaan se bhi aage

raat bhar hi ginieN maine taare
kuch to ho kehkashaan se bhi aage

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aadaab dosto,

ek taaza ghazal peshe Khidmat..tamaam ahbaab ki raaey ka intezaar rahega..


rang mazhab zubaan se bhi aage
hai tasavvur bayaan se bhi aage

khwahishoeN ke paroeN ko lagaa kar
ja uduuN aasmaan se bhi aage

mujhe dhundhna hai basera
soch ke har makaan se bhi aage

raat bhar hi ginieN maine taare
kuch to ho kehkashaan se bhi aage

mil gaya woh khuda se kabhi ka
jee gaya jo gumaan se bhi aage

phir wahi tum wahi baat bismil
ramz hai kya jahaan se bhi aage?

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mil gaya woh khuda se kabhi ka
jee gaya jo gumaan se bhi aage


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rang mazhab zubaan se bhi aage
hai tasavvur bayaan se bhi aage

khwahishoeN ke paroeN ko lagaa kar
ja uduuN aasmaan se bhi aage



raat bhar hi ginieN maine taare
kuch to ho kehkashaan se bhi aage

mil gaya woh khuda se kabhi ka
jee gaya jo gumaan se bhi aage

phir wahi tum wahi baat bismil
ramz hai kya jahaan se bhi aage?

pardhuman ji

yuN tou poori gazal hi ek umda peshkash hai
lekin yeh lines bahut gehri utri....

mujhe dhundhna hai basera
soch ke har makaan se bhi aage


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namaste!

aik achchhi koShiSh.. daad

KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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raat bhar hi ginieN maine taare
kuch to ho kehkashaan se bhi aage

phir wahi tum wahi baat bismil
ramz hai kya jahaan se bhi aage?

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aadaab dosto,

ek taaza ghazal peshe Khidmat..tamaam ahbaab ki raaey ka intezaar rahega..


rang mazhab zubaan se bhi aage
hai tasavvur bayaan se bhi aage

khwahishoeN ke paroeN ko lagaa kar
ja uduuN aasmaan se bhi aage

mujhe dhundhna hai basera
soch ke har makaan se bhi aage

raat bhar hi ginieN maine taare
kuch to ho kehkashaan se bhi aage

mil gaya woh khuda se kabhi ka
jee gaya jo gumaan se bhi aage

phir wahi tum wahi baat bismil
ramz hai kya jahaan se bhi aage?

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aadaab dosto,

ek taaza ghazal peshe Khidmat..tamaam ahbaab ki raaey ka intezaar rahega..


rang mazhab zubaan se bhi aage
hai tasavvur bayaan se bhi aage

khwahishoeN ke paroeN ko lagaa kar
ja uduuN aasmaan se bhi aage

mujhe dhundhna hai basera
soch ke har makaan se bhi aage

raat bhar hi ginieN maine taare
kuch to ho kehkashaan se bhi aage

mil gaya woh khuda se kabhi ka
jee gaya jo gumaan se bhi aage

phir wahi tum wahi baat bismil
ramz hai kya jahaan se bhi aage?

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Tasleemaat Bismil Bhaee!
Aalaa buhat aalaa ghazal! Takhayyul o tasavvur aur adaygee buhat bhaieee hamayn!

raat bhar hi ginieN maine taare
kuch to ho kehkashaan se bhi aage


phir wahi tum wahi baat bismil
ramz hai kya jahaan se bhi aage?

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aadaab dosto,

ek taaza ghazal peshe Khidmat..tamaam ahbaab ki raaey ka intezaar rahega..


rang mazhab zubaan se bhi aage
hai tasavvur bayaan se bhi aage

khwahishoeN ke paroeN ko lagaa kar
ja uduuN aasmaan se bhi aage

mujhe dhundhna hai basera
soch ke har makaan se bhi aage

raat bhar hi ginieN maine taare
kuch to ho kehkashaan se bhi aage

mil gaya woh khuda se kabhi ka
jee gaya jo gumaan se bhi aage

phir wahi tum wahi baat bismil
ramz hai kya jahaan se bhi aage?

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aadaab dosto,

ek taaza ghazal peshe Khidmat..tamaam ahbaab ki raaey ka intezaar rahega..


rang mazhab zubaan se bhi aage
hai tasavvur bayaan se bhi aage

khwahishoeN ke paroeN ko lagaa kar
ja uduuN aasmaan se bhi aage

mujhe dhundhna hai basera
soch ke har makaan se bhi aage

raat bhar hi ginieN maine taare
kuch to ho kehkashaan se bhi aage

mil gaya woh khuda se kabhi ka
jee gaya jo gumaan se bhi aage

phir wahi tum wahi baat bismil
ramz hai kya jahaan se bhi aage?

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Bismil sahab achi ghazal ke liyN daad paish e khidmat hai qubool farmaaiye

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