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Koi suraj nahi diyaa mange....( Ghayel )
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Koi suraj nahi diyaa mange....( Ghayel ) - 9th February 2013, 01:47 PM

Tujhse thodi si dil ziyaa mange
Koi suraj nahi diyaa mange

Zindagi meri zindagi ke liye
Jab bhi mange meri qazaa mange

Mangne se yaha bohat behtar
Bhookh sehne ka hausla mange

Ek taraf tu hai ek taraf jannat
Kaisa naadan hai tu kya mange

Zakhm koi nahi mile tujhko
Ek Ghayel yahi duaa mange...

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9th February 2013, 01:58 PM

Sajid jee...welcome back. Aur kya baat hai....bahut khoobsurat andaaz laga aapka..... Daad kubul karein..



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9th February 2013, 04:31 PM

saajid bhaii:

namaste!

baDe dinoN baad aapki Ghazal paDhii achchhi rahiin aapki yeh koShiSh

dil se daad

Khush rahiye... apnaa khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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9th February 2013, 05:01 PM

bazm meiN phir se khush-am-ded Sajid miyaaN

mashah allaah Ghazal bhi khoob le kar aaye aap, kya kehne!!

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10th February 2013, 10:26 AM

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Tujhse thodi si dil ziyaa mange
Koi suraj nahi diyaa mange

Zindagi meri zindagi ke liye
Jab bhi mange meri qazaa mange

Mangne se yaha bohat behtar
Bhookh sehne ka hausla mange

Ek taraf tu hai ek taraf jannat
Kaisa naadan hai tu kya mange

Zakhm koi nahi mile tujhko
Ek Ghayel yahi duaa mange...

Sajid Ghayel

Masha Allaah Sajid miyaaN... waahh kya kaalaam hai, kya khayaal haiN...

aur sabse khoob to aapko yahaan waapas dekh kar lagaa... behad khushi hui jo aap waapas lout aaaye... aur kamaal ki ghazal le kar aaye..

Zindagi meri zindagi ke liye
Jab bhi mange meri qazaa mange

Mangne se yaha bohat behtar
Bhookh sehne ka hausla mange




is ummdah takhayyul ke liye tahe dil se daad haazir hai bhai... likhte raheN...

Shaad....


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10th February 2013, 02:54 PM

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Tujhse thodi si dil ziyaa mange
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bahut Khoob ! daad

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Zindagi meri zindagi ke liye
Jab bhi mange meri qazaa mange
wah kiyaa kehny !

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Mangne se yaha bohat behtar
Bhookh sehne ka hausla mange
hats off ... nihayat u'mdah

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Zakhm koi nahi mile tujhko
Ek Ghayel yahi duaa mange...
yeh bhee acha rahaa

Aadaab !

aik behtareen ghazal per meree dil se niklee daad qabool karieN . wapsee per khush amdeed

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10th February 2013, 04:41 PM

Sajid bhai

Bahut achhi ghazal kahii aapne ..

Mujhe sabhi ashaar behad pasand aaye

Apna khyaal rakheiN

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11th February 2013, 07:55 AM

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Tujhse thodi si dil ziyaa mange
Koi suraj nahi diyaa mange

Zindagi meri zindagi ke liye
Jab bhi mange meri qazaa mange

Mangne se yaha bohat behtar
Bhookh sehne ka hausla mange

Ek taraf tu hai ek taraf jannat
Kaisa naadan hai tu kya mange

Zakhm koi nahi mile tujhko
Ek Ghayel yahi duaa mange...

Sajid Ghayel
Kyaa Kahne ... Bahut UmdaaH ... Sajid Bhai !!

Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!




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15th February 2013, 08:52 AM

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Tujhse thodi si dil ziyaa mange
Koi suraj nahi diyaa mange

Zindagi meri zindagi ke liye
Jab bhi mange meri qazaa mange

Mangne se yaha bohat behtar
Bhookh sehne ka hausla mange

Ek taraf tu hai ek taraf jannat
Kaisa naadan hai tu kya mange

Zakhm koi nahi mile tujhko
Ek Ghayel yahi duaa mange...

Sajid Ghayel

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24th March 2013, 12:06 PM

Aap sab ka bohat shukrguzaar ho aapne meri ghazal ko waqt diya.


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24th March 2013, 11:29 PM

Sajjid Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab kia baat hai badi hi umdaa gazal kahi hai behad khoob.. kafi
gehre aur khoobsurat ashaar bune haiN janab ..

Waise toH mujhe sabhi ashaar behad khoob lage pahle uske liye
dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

haaN par yeH ashaar mujh par khulaa nahi... niche Mujeeb Sahaab
ka bhi reply tha unhoNne bhi wazahat maNgi thi par aapne nahi dii
so maiN aik baar maNg leta huN..


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Kaisa naadan hai tu kya mange

Ho sake toH is par khul kar wazahat de dijiye ...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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26th March 2013, 03:03 PM

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Tujhse thodi si dil ziyaa mange
Koi suraj nahi diyaa mange

Zindagi meri zindagi ke liye
Jab bhi mange meri qazaa mange

Mangne se yaha bohat behtar
Bhookh sehne ka hausla mange

Ek taraf tu hai ek taraf jannat
Kaisa naadan hai tu kya mange

Zakhm koi nahi mile tujhko
Ek Ghayel yahi duaa mange...

Sajid Ghayel
sajid bhai aadaab..kaise haiN aap? umeed hai khairiyat se honge..

matla lajawaab hai..maqte meiN aapne apna takhallus kamaal fit kiya hai..daad.. aur jaisa kuch dosto ne poocha meiN bhi poochna chaahunga iss sher ke maaine

Ek taraf tu hai ek taraf jannat
Kaisa naadan hai tu kya mange

meri samjh meiN nahi aaya..
god bless

aapka dost,
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