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28th September 2006, 12:04 PM
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[B]6th share aaj hawa mai.n kuch seelan se lagti hai mujhe, woh aapni be-waffeai par khoob rokar aaye hai.n -sunita virender 7th share taumar jeeta raha bass usse apna samajh kar, haqkit yeh hai ki wo ajj bhee humse praye hai.n..... 'veer' 8th share hum sochtey thy ki hum bhool chuke hai.n unko, aaj kaya hua, phir aansu palko mai.n aaye hain.... -sunita virender  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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28th September 2006, 01:19 PM
1st sher kaise kaha den ki khush hai tujhse door rahakar hum, un to chhup-chhup ke humne bhi zakhanm sehalaye hai.... pooja 2nd sher tere jane se meri karah se hi mera ab koi rista na raha mere khud ke aansu meri aankho se hi huye paraye hain dilip 3rd sher koi khushi to ho hansil hume bhi aye khuda, jane kitne khwab humne ab tak dafnaye hai... pooja 4th share kabhi thakta nahi tha jo waffa ki kasme khate hue, dekho dosto, wahi aaj humse huey paraye hai.n -sunita virender 5th sher toone maine pyar kiya to kya khoya aur kya paya mere pas ye saye hain tere pas bhee saye hain - Anil 6th share aaj hawa mai.n kuch seelan se lagti hai mujhe, woh aapni be-waffeai par khoob rokar aaye hai.n -sunita virender 7th share taumar jeeta raha bass usse apna samajh kar, haqkit yeh hai ki wo ajj bhee humse praye hai.n..... 'veer' 8th share hum sochtey thy ki hum bhool chuke hai.n unko, aaj kaya hua, phir aansu palko mai.n aaye hain.... -sunita virender har bar ki tarah ye gazal bhi badi khoobsurati se apne anjam tak pahunch gayi hai...... ab intzar hai agali gazal ka dekhe.n koun shuru karta hai......................  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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28th September 2006, 01:34 PM
nai gazal main urdu tezeeb ke mashoor shayar janaab 'aziz lakhnavi' sahib ke ek share se karne ja raha hoon ......umeed hai app saath doge......raj.......
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28th September 2006, 02:43 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by rajveeer
[B]nai gazal main urdu tezeeb ke mashoor shayar janaab 'aziz lakhnavi' sahib ke ek share se karne ja raha hoon ......umeed hai app saath doge......raj....... 1st share hizar ki raat katne wale, kaya karega gar sehar na huie..... 'aziz lakhnavi' 2nd share uski judai mai hi mar jauNgi, yehi hoga gar sahar na hue..... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th September 2006, 03:40 PM
uski judai mai hi mar jauNgi,
yehi hoga gar sahar na huie..... -sunita virender 3rd share aankh main tairta ek aansu, kab gir gaya khabar na huie...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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29th September 2006, 10:00 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by rajveeer
[B]uski judai mai hi mar jauNgi, yehi hoga gar sahar na huie..... -sunita virender 3rd share aankh main tairta ek aansu, kab gir gaya khabar na huie...... 'veer' 4th share mere naam se woh mashoor ho gaya, aur humey hi khabar na huie... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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29th September 2006, 11:28 AM
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29th September 2006, 11:39 AM
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29th September 2006, 12:57 PM
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hizar ki raat katne wale, kaya karega gar sehar na huie..... 'aziz lakhnavi' 2nd share uski judai mai hi mar jauNgi, yehi hoga gar sahar na hue..... -sunita virender 3rd share aankh main tairta ek aansu, kab gir gaya khabar na huie...... 'veer' 4th share mere naam se mashoor hua wo, aur mujhay hee khabar na huie... -sunita virender 5th share hum bhee pyase hai saki, kyu hum par teri nazar na huie..... 'veer' 6th sher tere jane ke baad bhi veerani hai akele zindagi humse basar na huie.... dilip 7th share sabke haal ki khabar hai tujhe, mere hee haal ki khabar na huie... -sunita virender 8th sher intzar main guzaar di sari umar mere intzar ki fir sahar na huie..... dilip dosto ek bhut achi gazal app sab ki madad se poori huie.......app sabko bhut bhut badhai................ ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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3rd October 2006, 05:19 PM
dosto ajj ek nai gazal shuru karne ja raha hoon umeed hai appka saath milega........
1st share kiya mohabat ka izhaar mere marne ke baad, laya wo tera gawah tere mukkar jane ke baad ..... 'veer' dosto umeed karta hoon app isko mukamal karne me mera saath doge.....appka raj..... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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3rd October 2006, 05:44 PM
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vo alviida kahane lage, humare chale jane ke baad, sametane beitthe hum dil ko, biikhar jane ke baad..... grazie aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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3rd October 2006, 05:53 PM
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vo alviida kahane lage, humare chale jane ke baad, sametane beitthe hum dil ko, biikhar jane ke baad..... 'pooja' 4th share taumar ruk na paya khamosh ashko ka sailaab, sehra bhe nam ho gaya mere ghar jane ke baad..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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[B]6th sher umar talak ek Ahal-e-chaman talashate rahe, mila Koo-e-dost chaman ujaar jane ke baad dilip 7th share barso se mai aapni tanheyo se hi ualjti rahi, saath milla mujhe meri umr beet jane ke baad -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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4th October 2006, 11:21 AM
[B]6th sher
umar talak ek Ahal-e-chaman talashate rahe, mila Koo-e-dost chaman ujaar jane ke baad dilip 7th share barso se mai aapni tanheyo se hi ualjti rahi, saath milla mujhe meri umr beet jane ke baad -sunita virender 8th share barso jise dekhne ki tamana liye hum jeete rahe, wo mila humme kambakth nazar jane ke baad....... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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dosto mai aaj es post par ek mashoor film ki gazal ke mukhdey se shuruyaat kar rahi hu, pls saath dijiyega.
1st share karogey yaad to har baat yaad aayegi, gujratey waqt ki har mauoj thahar jayegi... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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karogey yaad to har baat yaad aayegi, gujratey waqt ki har mauoj thahar jayegi... ------------ Sunita Virender Singh 2nd share mujhe tu jeene ki duaa na de mere sanam, tere bagair na ye ummar guzar payegi....... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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ya khuda bas, maut de-de ab to tu mujhe, warna meri hi zindagi mujhpe sitam dhayegi.... 'pooja' 5th share aftaab ke maathe pe hoga paseena us din, jis din mehnatkash ki taqdeer chamak jayegi..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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tere ashko.n ko kareene se samhalloo.n main jara ye to moti hain, meri bhi kismat sanwar jayegi...... dilip bass issi umeed par jinda hoon main zindagi, kabhi to hoga ujjala kabhi to tanhai simat jayegi..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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tera pyar mere jeeney ka sahara hai, mat pooch tu mujhe sanso se bhi pyara hai..... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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meri kashti ka tu hi sahiil hai aur tu hi kiinara hai, koi gum nahi dubne ka, tujhpe to jiivan vara hai.... di apki matko rani pooja 3rd share dunia ki rangeen mahfillo aur ronko se humey kaya, humney to yeh sarra jivan tanha hi gujara hai...... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th October 2006, 10:48 AM
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dunia ki rangeen mahfillo aur ronko se humey kaya, humney to yeh sarra jivan tanha hi gujara hai...... -sunita virender 4th share tanhai ko bhee tu gungunate huye sunegi ab, gham na kar tere saath mere pyar ka sahara hai.... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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25th October 2006, 11:49 AM
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par tujhe dekh ke ye jeevan maine sawaara hai... sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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25th October 2006, 12:17 PM
4th share
mujhe maaloom nahi ki kya to ab hamara hai par tujhe dekh ke ye jeevan maine sawaara hai... sakhi 5th share hulchal huie muddaton baad meri kabar main, sannato main kisne mujhe pyar se pukara hai.... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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25th October 2006, 12:18 PM
5th share
mujhe maaloom nahi ki kya to ab hamara hai par tujhe dekh ke ye jeevan maine sawaara hai... -sakhi 6th share hulchal huie meri kabar main muddaton baad, sannato main kisne mujhe pyar se pukara hai.... 'veer' 7th share tumne tanhayeo mai.n diya mujhe sahara hai, tu paraya lakh sahi phir bhi mujhe pyara hai... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th October 2006, 01:07 PM
7th share
tumne tanhayeo mai.n diya mujhe sahara hai, tu paraya lakh sahi phir bhi mujhe pyara hai... -sunita virender wah sunita ji appne to kamaal kar diya bhut acha share kaha hai dil khush ho gaya...... 8th share matlabi dunia main sab ko aazma kar dekh liya, sukh main sab apne hai dukh main tu hamara hai..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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26th October 2006, 03:34 PM
dosto mai.n soch rahi hu ki kyu na naye gazal ki shuruyaat mai.n ek mashoor hindi film ke geet se kar du, aap saath dena mera.
1st share aapki nazro ne samja pyar ke kabil mujhe, dil ki eh dhadkan thahar ja mil gaye manzil mujhe... "not mine" - sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th October 2006, 04:30 PM
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2nd sher Kab Se Khaffaa Hoke Bhiii Intazaarr Kar Rahiii Huu Tera, Aa Jao Ab,Kahin Baha Na Le Jaye Ashqo Ka Sahil Mujhe.... grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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26th October 2006, 05:11 PM
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aapki nazro ne samja pyar ke kabil mujhe, dil ki eh dhadkan thahar ja mil gaye manzil mujhe... "not mine" - sunita virender 2nd sher Kab Se Khaffaa Hoke Bhiii Intazaarr Kar Rahiii Huu Tera, Aa Jao Ab,Kahin Baha Na Le Jaye Ashqo Ka Sahil Mujhe.... -pooja 3rd share kushiya tere saath hi ruth kar chali gaye hai door mujse, gahmo ne aapni mahfil mai.n kar liya hai shamil mujhe -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th October 2006, 05:35 PM
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Ujala To Tere Ane Se Tha Mehaffil Me Meri, Biiina Tere Siirff Tariikii Hai Hansil Mujhe.... grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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26th October 2006, 05:48 PM
तीसरा शेएर
ख़ुशिया तेरे साथ ही रूठ कर चली गई है दूर मुझसे, गमों ने आपनी महफ़िल में कर लिया है शामिल मुझे ...... -सुनीता वीरेंदेर चौथा शेएर तेरी सांसो को देता हूँ मैं अपनी सांसो की ज़िंदगी, बता कहाँ जाऊंगा गर तू भी समझेगी क़ातिल मुझे ...... 'वीर' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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