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18th June 2015, 11:35 AM
meri kalam se ek aur poetry.....
zurrat teri he kabile tareef dil-e-gustakh is bewafa aalam me mukkamal muhobatt dhoondne chala he.. tere ashkon se ye khudgarz zamana.. apni tapan mitayega! tughe bikharta hua sametenge bhi to... ek foonk se udane ko... tughe denge tassaliyon k nuske ye... kahenge waqt pade to tere kam ayenge... aye dil meri na mane to azma k dekh lena.. tere jaise khilaune inhone khele aur tode bahut he... he elm he mughe k tu he subhah ka bhula .... sham ko mere hi dar pr ayega... pr aagah krti hun tughe isliye me.. k tughe toota dekh mughse na raha jayega!!! |
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18th June 2015, 11:56 AM
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Akshara ji, welcome to SDC family. Aap ne aate he khoob ubalte huye ehsasaat se ru-baru karwaya hai. Aap ke kalam meiN sulagte huye jazbaat dikhte haiN. yuNhi bar-qaraar rakheiN iss aag ko.. aate rahiye. **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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18th June 2015, 12:07 PM
Waaah!!...bahut khoob ehsaas...likhti rahiye akshra....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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18th June 2015, 12:38 PM
waahhhhh kyaa baat hai bahut khoob Akshara jii.............
likhtii rahen khush rahen... Shaad.... |
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18th June 2015, 11:22 PM
shukriya aap sabhi ka..........asha he me yun hi likhti rahun aur aap logon ki tareefon ki inayat mughpr barasti rahe!!
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