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Love sitting amonst virgin friends - 30th March 2008, 11:18 PM

Here I sit amongst my virgin friends
Contemplating how immoral have i become
Since my love thou deserted me
I often think when was the last time
I told myself
come on dude pack up
U have come a long way
down the wrong path
when was the last time i told myself
about the abyss in which i continue to fall
the pondering comes to a hault
when one friend asks
when did u lose your virginity
" the day i lost her" I replied
today I am reminded again
once i too was a man full of compassion and love
enjoyed everything with delight
once again i am reminded that
i too loved a girl true to my heart.
   
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Here I sit amongst my virgin friends
Contemplating how immoral have i become
Since my love thou deserted me
I often think when was the last time
I told myself
come on dude pack up
U have come a long way
down the wrong path
when was the last time i told myself
about the abyss in which i continue to fall
the pondering comes to a hault
when one friend asks
when did u lose your virginity
" the day i lost her" I replied
today I am reminded again
once i too was a man full of compassion and love
enjoyed everything with delight
once again i am reminded that
i too loved a girl true to my heart.

Hmmm... Interesting thought... Nicely expressed... Do keep writing...


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