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vo shakhs tanha dekhai deta -
28th March 2005, 06:31 PM
bas kuch likha hai shayad aapko pasand aaye
Samunder Ki Gehraiyo me Utar ke to Dekho
ek aur naye ittefaq se guzar ke to dekho
Lehro ki Awaaz bhala kehti hai kya?
Kabhi Un me Jakar simat kar to dekho
Sahil ke kinare par khamoshi hai bahut
Dil ki dhadkan se ye puch kar to dekho
Wo jo ek shakhs tanha dekhai deta hai
Kaho us se jaakar zara sambhal ke to dekho
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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28th March 2005, 11:43 PM
jubin
nice one.
sonal
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29th March 2005, 02:44 AM
Wah Jubin Wah.... Mazza aa gaya aap ki yeh rachna parhkar... well said! keep writing buddy*
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29th March 2005, 08:46 AM
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jubin
nice one.
sonal
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thank u sonal
keeeeeeeeeeep readingggggg
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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29th March 2005, 08:47 AM
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Wah Jubin Wah.... Mazza aa gaya aap ki yeh rachna parhkar... well said! keep writing buddy*
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parul ben thanks u
bas maja karine majama rejho
tamaro-jubin
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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Re: vo shakhs tanha dekhai deta -
30th March 2005, 10:27 AM
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Originally posted by dard_thesorrow
bas kuch likha hai shayad aapko pasand aaye
Samunder Ki Gehraiyo me Utar ke to Dekho
ek aur naye ittefaq se guzar ke to dekho
Lehro ki Awaaz bhala kehti hai kya?
Kabhi Un me Jakar simat kar to dekho
Sahil ke kinare par khamoshi hai bahut
Dil ki dhadkan se ye puch kar to dekho
Wo jo ek shakhs tanha dekhai deta hai
Kaho us se jaakar zara sambhal ke to dekho
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This is more like it. A flow in writing. Carry on ....
Thanks
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Re: Re: vo shakhs tanha dekhai deta -
30th March 2005, 10:37 AM
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Originally posted by Rohin
This is more like it. A flow in writing. Carry on ....
Thanks
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thanks u rohin sahab
thanks for the tips
i'm glad ki maine is baar aapko niraash nahi kiya
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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hi -
30th March 2005, 11:08 AM
Good one yaar....
Keep writing....
Ajmal
Dil to kya Cheez hai, Hum Rooh mein Utre Hote...
Tumne Chaha hi nahin Chahne Walon ki Tarha...
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Re: hi -
30th March 2005, 06:04 PM
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Good one yaar....
Keep writing....
Ajmal
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thanks for the compliments ajmal
keeeeeeep reading......
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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31st March 2005, 04:25 PM
Bahut gahra likh diye ho bhaiiiiiya.........
sambhalna vakai mushkil kaam hai.......
lagta hai jigar pe khaye ho......dard to hoga bhaiye......
haste rahiyo...hamari rachna bhi padhte rahiyo....haste rahoge....
hey jubin....dard ko bhi thode halke andaaz me le lo yaar....take jina mushkil na ho jaye....
love is part of life....not heart of life.....thats wht i have learnt dost..
"Haseeno se to sahab salamat door ki achchhi.....
na unki dosti achchhi...na unki dushmani achchhi..."
thode me zyada samajna dost........varna kashti vahaan doobegi jahaan pani hi nahi hoga...........
Dard ki ek hadd vo bhi hoti hai.....jab aadmi dil khol ke has sakta hai......boojo to jane.......
Dard se mera daaman bhar de ya allah...
fir chaahe deewana kar de...ya allahh...
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31st March 2005, 06:48 PM
thanks ashish thanks for the support
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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3rd April 2005, 08:32 AM
very well written, and full of dard, jubin ji, itna dard dil main nahin rakhte, its not good, look for the positive things in life, agar kisi ek nain bewafayee ki tho there are still others that are pining for YOUR love, and you havent noticed them, and i will say again look for the positive things
phir bhi, jab maine yeh post parhi tho i was amazed, you write very well
take care
mukhra
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3rd April 2005, 10:18 PM
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very well written, and full of dard, jubin ji, itna dard dil main nahin rakhte, its not good, look for the positive things in life, agar kisi ek nain bewafayee ki tho there are still others that are pining for YOUR love, and you havent noticed them, and i will say again look for the positive things
phir bhi, jab maine yeh post parhi tho i was amazed, you write very well
take care
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mukhra ji khushi to hamare liye ab bas ek khayaal ban kar reh gaya hai
khair chodiye
aur mukhra ji ab sharminda mat kijiye
thanks for the compliments........
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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9th April 2005, 11:32 AM
JUDAI KA RANG JO KHUDA DEKH LE
KASAM SE HAR RANG KO WO MILAN ME BADAL DE
FIR SOCHTA HAI MILAN KE LIYE JUDAI HAI JAROORI
HAS KE KAHTA HAI WO,
MILAN SE PAHLE JUDAI DEKH LE!!!!!
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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9th April 2005, 12:08 PM
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JUDAI KA RANG JO KHUDA DEKH LE
KASAM SE HAR RANG KO WO MILAN ME BADAL DE
FIR SOCHTA HAI MILAN KE LIYE JUDAI HAI JAROORI
HAS KE KAHTA HAI WO,
MILAN SE PAHLE JUDAI DEKH LE!!!!!
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JUBIN Kia Arz KaRooN :
Arz Kia Hai :
Seh LooN Ga TeRi JuDaYi Ke AzaaB SaRe
Aik LaMhe MaiN BiKhaR GaYe KhuWaaB SaRe
TeRi Hi DoSti MaiN MiLe HuM Ko
MuHaBbat Ke BaDle MaiN SaRaaB SaRe
TuJhe ChaHa To SaB Ko Bhool GiYa Tha
RooTh GaYe MuJh Se MeRe AahBaB SaRe
TeRe BaD LoG DeeWanNa KehNe LaGe
BhooL GiYa MaiN MehFil Ke ADaB SaRe
Tu To MuJhe Bhool Ke Buhat KuSh Hai LaKiN
YaaD Hai MuJhe JuDaYi Ke ASBaB SaRe
Aik KaNta Kia ToD Ke AlaG Kia HuM Ne"AsGheR "
Toot Ke BiKhaR GaYe DaaLi Se GuLaB SaRe.................
ApNa AsGheR........
Where we live is home, Home that our feet may
leave, But not our hearts.
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9th April 2005, 12:24 PM
ashger sahab
ab kya kahu aapke baare me bahut khooooob likha hai
aise hi likhte rehna
Tu To MuJhe Bhool Ke Buhat KuSh Hai LaKiN
YaaD Hai MuJhe JuDaYi Ke ASBaB SaRe
Aik KaNta Kia ToD Ke AlaG Kia HuM Ne"AsGheR "
Toot Ke BiKhaR GaYe DaaLi Se GuLaB SaRe.................
my fav lines
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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10th April 2005, 04:40 PM
"wo jo ek shakhs tanha dekhai deta hai
Kaho us se jaakar zara sambhal ke to dekho"
kash etna aasan hota samhal na.........
well nice one....
JUDAI KA RANG JO KHUDA DEKH LE
KASAM SE HAR RANG KO WO MILAN ME BADAL DE
FIR SOCHTA HAI MILAN KE LIYE JUDAI HAI JAROORI
HAS KE KAHTA HAI WO,
MILAN SE PAHLE JUDAI DEKH LE!!!!!
aap ka to jawab hi nahi jubin ji kya tariiff kare aap ki hum koi alfhaz nahi humare pass to.......
take care
"tum na jane kis jaha main kho gaye"
khushiiiiiiiiiiiii
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10th April 2005, 04:43 PM
khushi ji
mere jazbaat ko samajhne ke liye aapka dil ki gehrai se shukriya
thanks for the compliments......
keeeeeeeeeeeep reading.............
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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10th April 2005, 05:01 PM
bhaiya aapne to bahut ahccha likha par iske bare me aapka kya khayal hai.
samander me utarne wale doob jate hain,
itefaqoon se gujarne wale oob jate hain.
lehreen khud hi simat ti nahi,
usme simte to kaise.
dhadkan to khud hi khamosh nahi,
unse hum kisi ki khamoshi ka karan pooche to kaise.
jo khud hi tanha hain use samhalne ko kahen kis se.aur kaise.
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10th April 2005, 05:05 PM
bahut accha hai
khoob gehrai hai
saralta hai
acchahai likhte raho......
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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