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Banjar zameen se nikla hai - 17th May 2012, 11:40 AM
Arbab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab………..!
Kuch Adnaa Khayalaat Ko Qirtaas-e-Qalam Karnay Ki Koshish Ki Hai….. Ummid Hai Pasand Aaye Gi…..

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Jo Aah-o-Naala Sa Qalb-e-Huzeen Se Nikla Hai
Ye Wo Shajar Hai Jo Banjar Zameen Se Nikla Hai

Dareeda Daman-e-Dil Tha Jahaan Se Ae Logo
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Jo Bazm-e-Yaar Me Shaamil Nahi Aduu Koi
To Phir Ye Teer Bhala Kis Kameen Se Nikla Hai

Wo Jo Hamesha Mere Ashk Punchhti Hee Rahi
Wo Dekho Saanp Usi Aasteen Se Nikla Hai

NA-janay Kitnay Azaabon Se De Gaya Hai Nijaat
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Main Manta Hun Ke AHMAD Hai Qol Ka Pakka
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bhut khub - 17th May 2012, 05:58 PM
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17th May 2012, 06:09 PM
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Arbab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab………..!
Kuch Adnaa Khayalaat Ko Qirtaas-e-Qalam Karnay Ki Koshish Ki Hai….. Ummid Hai Pasand Aaye Gi…..

GHAZAL

Jo Aah-o-Naala Sa Qalb-e-Huzeen Se Nikla Hai
Ye Wo Shajar Hai Jo Banjar Zameen Se Nikla Hai

Dareeda Daman-e-Dil Tha Jahaan Se Ae Logo
Tadap Ke Dard Bhi Dekho Waheen Se Nikla Hai

Jo Bazm-e-Yaar Me Shaamil Nahi Aduu Koi
To Phir Ye Teer Bhala Kis Kameen Se Nikla Hai

Wo Jo Hamesha Mere Ashk Punchhti Hee Rahi
Wo Dekho Saanp Usi Aasteen Se Nikla Hai

NA-janay Kitnay Azaabon Se De Gaya Hai Nijaat
Ye Aik Sajda Jo Meri Jabeen Se Nikla Hai

Main Manta Hun Ke AHMAD Hai Qol Ka Pakka
Ye Aitaraaf Lab-e-Nukta-Cheen Se Nikla Hai

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Bahut sundar bhaayee. Aise hi likhte raho aur jald az jald apne maqaam tak pahuncho yahi meri duaa hai.

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17th May 2012, 08:02 PM
Wo Jo Hamesha Mere Ashk Punchhti Hee Rahi
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18th May 2012, 11:47 AM
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Kya baat kahi hai, waaah maza gaya. Aise hee likhte rahiye, khush rahiye.
Aru Sahab......!

Ghaalibann Aap Pehli Baar Is KHaaksaar Ki Bazm Me Hazir Huay Hain, Aapko Apni Bazm Me KHush Aamdeed Kehta HUn......
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kyaa baat hai shakil bhai....gazab ka khyaal hai.....RAJ.....
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Arbab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab………..!
Kuch Adnaa Khayalaat Ko Qirtaas-e-Qalam Karnay Ki Koshish Ki Hai….. Ummid Hai Pasand Aaye Gi…..

GHAZAL

Jo Aah-o-Naala Sa Qalb-e-Huzeen Se Nikla Hai
Ye Wo Shajar Hai Jo Banjar Zameen Se Nikla Hai

Dareeda Daman-e-Dil Tha Jahaan Se Ae Logo
Tadap Ke Dard Bhi Dekho Waheen Se Nikla Hai

Jo Bazm-e-Yaar Me Shaamil Nahi Aduu Koi
To Phir Ye Teer Bhala Kis Kameen Se Nikla Hai

Wo Jo Hamesha Mere Ashk Punchhti Hee Rahi
Wo Dekho Saanp Usi Aasteen Se Nikla Hai

NA-janay Kitnay Azaabon Se De Gaya Hai Nijaat
Ye Aik Sajda Jo Meri Jabeen Se Nikla Hai

Main Manta Hun Ke AHMAD Hai Qol Ka Pakka
Ye Aitaraaf Lab-e-Nukta-Cheen Se Nikla Hai

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Arbab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab………..!
Kuch Adnaa Khayalaat Ko Qirtaas-e-Qalam Karnay Ki Koshish Ki Hai….. Ummid Hai Pasand Aaye Gi…..

GHAZAL

Jo Aah-o-Naala Sa Qalb-e-Huzeen Se Nikla Hai
Ye Wo Shajar Hai Jo Banjar Zameen Se Nikla Hai

Dareeda Daman-e-Dil Tha Jahaan Se Ae Logo
Tadap Ke Dard Bhi Dekho Waheen Se Nikla Hai

Jo Bazm-e-Yaar Me Shaamil Nahi Aduu Koi
To Phir Ye Teer Bhala Kis Kameen Se Nikla Hai

Wo Jo Hamesha Mere Ashk Punchhti Hee Rahi
Wo Dekho Saanp Usi Aasteen Se Nikla Hai

NA-janay Kitnay Azaabon Se De Gaya Hai Nijaat
Ye Aik Sajda Jo Meri Jabeen Se Nikla Hai

Main Manta Hun Ke AHMAD Hai Qol Ka Pakka
Ye Aitaraaf Lab-e-Nukta-Cheen Se Nikla Hai

AHMAD ALI SHAKIL

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