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To main ne dekha (aik tarhee ghazal) - 5th October 2013, 01:14 PM
Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab…!Dosto…! Janab Muneer Niyazi Sahab Ke Misra "Nazar Se Dil Ka Ghubaar Utra TO Main Ne Dekha" Par Meri Aik Kaawish Pesh Hai…Apni Besh-Qeemat Raaye Se Zaruuuur Nawaaziye Ga….



NAZAR SE DIL KA GHUBAAR UTRA TO MAIN NE DEKHA


Muhabbaton Ka Bukhaar Utraa To Main Ne Dekha
Bahaar Rut Ka Khumaar Utraa To Main Ne Dekha


Tumharay Seenay Ka Karb Sara Jo Mere Dil Me
Qataar Andar Qataar Utra To Me Ne Dekha


Wo Chaand Jo Meri Hasraton Ka Raha Hai Mehvar
Wo Mere Aangen Ke Paar Utra To Main Ne Dekha


Yaqiin Nahi Tha Mujhay Muhabbat Ke Moajazon Par
Magar Jo Dil Me Qaraar Utra To Me Ne Dekha


Tumharay Aanay Se Mere Weeran Dil Me JanaN
Jo Phir Se Rang-e-Bahaar Utra To Main Ne Dekha


Bahot Se Apne The Aasteenon Ke Saanp Hee Bass
Nazar Se Dil Ka Ghubaar Utra To Me Ne Dekha



AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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5th October 2013, 07:32 PM
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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab…!Dosto…! Janab Muneer Niyazi Sahab Ke Misra "Nazar Se Dil Ka Ghubaar Utra TO Main Ne Dekha" Par Meri Aik Kaawish Pesh Hai…Apni Besh-Qeemat Raaye Se Zaruuuur Nawaaziye Ga….



NAZAR SE DIL KA GHUBAAR UTRA TO MAIN NE DEKHA


Muhabbaton Ka Bukhaar Utraa To Main Ne Dekha
Bahaar Rut Ka Khumaar Utraa To Main Ne Dekha


Tumharay Seenay Ka Karb Sara Jo Mere Dil Me
Qataar Andar Qataar Utra To Me Ne Dekha


Wo Chaand Jo Meri Hasraton Ka Raha Hai Mehvar
Wo Mere Aangen Ke Paar Utra To Main Ne Dekha


Yaqiin Nahi Tha Mujhay Muhabbat Ke Moajazon Par
Magar Jo Dil Me Qaraar Utra To Me Ne Dekha


Tumharay Aanay Se Mere Weeran Dil Me JanaN
Jo Phir Se Rang-e-Bahaar Utra To Main Ne Dekha


Bahot Se Apne The Aasteenon Ke Saanp Hee Bass
Nazar Se Dil Ka Ghubaar Utra To Me Ne Dekha



AHMAD ALI SHAKIL

Ahmad Shakil bhai ko khaaksaar ka aadaab.... Muddat hui thi aapki ghazal se mehroom thaa, aaj aaapne yeh tohfaa pesh kar ke mujhe masarrat haasil karne ka sabab diyaa hai... aapki ghazal ek nayaab kaarigari hai... har sher itna lutfandoz hai, itni gahraai samete hue hai ke bayaani ke baahar ki baat hai..... meri jaanib se behad daad ka nazraana peshe aqeedat hai aur behad mubaarak ho aapko .....

jis ghazal ki zameen par aapne ye kalaam baandha hai wo meri kuch chand pasandeeedah ghazlon me ek hai......

"Chaman me range bahaar utraa to maine dekhaa...."

aapki ghazal ka har sher muqammal hai aur behad ummdah hai... mujhe chand sher jo behad se behad pasand aaye wo neeche likh raha hoon..


Wo Chaand Jo Meri Hasraton Ka Raha Hai Mehvar
Wo Mere Aangen Ke Paar Utra To Main Ne Dekha


Tumharay Aanay Se Mere Weeran Dil Me JanaN
Jo Phir Se Rang-e-Bahaar Utra To Main Ne Dekha

ek baar fir se bahot si daad... aaate raheN, likhte raheN....

Shaad....

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7th October 2013, 12:12 PM
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Ahmad Shakil bhai ko khaaksaar ka aadaab.... Muddat hui thi aapki ghazal se mehroom thaa, aaj aaapne yeh tohfaa pesh kar ke mujhe masarrat haasil karne ka sabab diyaa hai... aapki ghazal ek nayaab kaarigari hai... har sher itna lutfandoz hai, itni gahraai samete hue hai ke bayaani ke baahar ki baat hai..... meri jaanib se behad daad ka nazraana peshe aqeedat hai aur behad mubaarak ho aapko .....

jis ghazal ki zameen par aapne ye kalaam baandha hai wo meri kuch chand pasandeeedah ghazlon me ek hai......

"Chaman me range bahaar utraa to maine dekhaa...."

aapki ghazal ka har sher muqammal hai aur behad ummdah hai... mujhe chand sher jo behad se behad pasand aaye wo neeche likh raha hoon..


Wo Chaand Jo Meri Hasraton Ka Raha Hai Mehvar
Wo Mere Aangen Ke Paar Utra To Main Ne Dekha


Tumharay Aanay Se Mere Weeran Dil Me JanaN
Jo Phir Se Rang-e-Bahaar Utra To Main Ne Dekha

ek baar fir se bahot si daad... aaate raheN, likhte raheN....

Shaad....
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11th October 2013, 08:25 PM
Ahmad ji aadaab ... ek arsy ke baad aap ke qalaam ko padhne ka lutf haasil hua hai .... aur us par ye ek shaandaar aur pur jamaal peshkash, jismein rawaangee hai khuloos hai husn hai... saare aashaar ek se badh ke ek lage .... meri jaanib se beshumaar daad aap ko ... duaon ke saath ... Zarraa
   
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Ahmad bhai..........bahut khoob likha aapne, sabhi ahsaas acche lge.

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