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~*kisii ke Ishq meiN....*~ - 15th July 2013, 09:54 AM
Pyaare DostoN... haazir hoon ek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath ... Nosh farmaaiyega....


Kisi ke Ishq me Dil ka safar nahi thaa,
ke mere Raaste uska bhi ghar nahii thaa.

Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.

Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi thaa.

Chaaragar- One who treats patients, Doctor or someone like that.


Muhabbat meiN bani merii bhi BigDee kismat,
MaiN pehle Ishq se, yuN dar-badar nahi thaa.

Nahii Dekhaa chalii Shamsheer* kiskii Mujhpe,
uThaa gir ke , to mere dhaD* pe Sar nahii thaa..!!

Shamsheer- Talwaar, Sword.
dhaD- Body





Shaad...

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15th July 2013, 10:15 AM
Muhabbat meiN bani merii bhi BigDee kismat,
MaiN pehle Ishq se, yuN dar-badar nahi thaa.

Nahii Dekhaa chalii Shamsheer* kiskii Mujhpe,
uThaa gir ke , to mere dhaD* pe Sar nahii thaa..!!

waah! shoiab bhai...bahut khoob...maza aa gaya....dheron daad aapko.....


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16th July 2013, 09:23 AM
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Muhabbat meiN bani merii bhi BigDee kismat,
MaiN pehle Ishq se, yuN dar-badar nahi thaa.

Nahii Dekhaa chalii Shamsheer* kiskii Mujhpe,
uThaa gir ke , to mere dhaD* pe Sar nahii thaa..!!

waah! shoiab bhai...bahut khoob...maza aa gaya....dheron daad aapko.....
bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka Aru bhai.... jaan kkar behad khushi hui ke aapko ye kalaam pasand aa saka..... saath dete raheN......

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16th July 2013, 09:51 AM
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Pyaare DostoN... haazir hoon ek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath ... Nosh farmaaiyega....


Kisi ke Ishq me Dil ka safar nahi thaa,
ke mere Raaste uska bhi ghar nahii thaa.

Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.

Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi thaa.

Chaaragar- One who treats patients, Doctor or someone like that.


Muhabbat meiN bani merii bhi BigDee kismat,
MaiN pehle Ishq se, yuN dar-badar nahi thaa.

Nahii Dekhaa chalii Shamsheer* kiskii Mujhpe,
uThaa gir ke , to mere dhaD* pe Sar nahii thaa..!!

Shamsheer- Talwaar, Sword.
dhaD- Body





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bahut khoob..
well done !...

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aur shoaib saaheb, kaise haiN...?? bade dinon baad in galiyoN meN aana huN, aur aapki ghazal saamne aa gayi, ahcha laga janaab aapko padh kar, bas aakhiri sher kuch jaNcha nahiN.... Baanki ke saare sher dil fareb rahe, mazaa aa gaya padh kar, aage bhi yuNhi apne kalam se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...!!


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17th July 2013, 09:27 AM
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bas aakhiri sher kuch jaNcha nahiN....
Aadaab Taish miyaaN... sabse zyaada aashcharya aapko yahaan dekh kar ho raha hai, aur har baar hota hai jab aaap "BADE DIN BAAD YOONHI" aate hue nazar aate hain...

Waise aapne jis aakhri sher pe nishaaandehi ki hai.. agar waazeh kar denge to behtari hogii.... warna mujhe nahi lagta sher me koi dikkat hai...

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17th July 2013, 11:28 AM
amaaN miyaaN aap ustaadoN ke saath yahi dikkat hai, aap har cheez ko bareeqiyoN, wazn aur jyadti bana dete hain.... mere kehne ka bas ye matlab tha ki
vo sher baaNki ghazal se kamtar sa laga mujhe, aur atpata sa isliye kyuNki shayad mujhpe dhang se khula nahin... agar aap iske saani ko khol deN to badi mehrbaani... baaNki pehli baar padhne meN mujhe baaNki ghazal se kam hi laga sher isiliye kaha tha saaheb... aap khaamakhaN naraaz ho baithe...


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17th July 2013, 11:44 AM
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Pyaare DostoN... haazir hoon ek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath ... Nosh farmaaiyega....


Kisi ke Ishq me Dil ka safar nahi thaa,
ke mere Raaste uska bhi ghar nahii thaa.

Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.

Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi thaa.

Chaaragar- One who treats patients, Doctor or someone like that.


Muhabbat meiN bani merii bhi BigDee kismat,
MaiN pehle Ishq se, yuN dar-badar nahi thaa.

Nahii Dekhaa chalii Shamsheer* kiskii Mujhpe,
uThaa gir ke , to mere dhaD* pe Sar nahii thaa..!!

Shamsheer- Talwaar, Sword.
dhaD- Body





Shaad...
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Bahut hi baddia line
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Utha jo gir ke to dhad pe sar na raha
ye to or bhi mast tha


badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
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20th July 2013, 12:41 AM
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Pyaare DostoN... haazir hoon ek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath ... Nosh farmaaiyega....


Kisi ke Ishq me Dil ka safar nahi thaa,
ke mere Raaste uska bhi ghar nahii thaa.

Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.

Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi thaa.

Chaaragar- One who treats patients, Doctor or someone like that.


Muhabbat meiN bani merii bhi BigDee kismat,
MaiN pehle Ishq se, yuN dar-badar nahi thaa.

Nahii Dekhaa chalii Shamsheer* kiskii Mujhpe,
uThaa gir ke , to mere dhaD* pe Sar nahii thaa..!!

Shamsheer- Talwaar, Sword.
dhaD- Body



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meri khushnaseebi hai diggaj bhai jo aap tashreef laaye.... shukriyaa duaaon se nawaazne ke liye.... shukriyaaa

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30th July 2013, 03:56 PM
Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.

vaise to saare hi sher bahot achhe hain sahab ... par mujhe ye kuch khaas pasand aaya ...
achha laga padh kar aapka kalaam ...
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Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
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vaise to saare hi sher bahot achhe hain sahab ... par mujhe ye kuch khaas pasand aaya ...
achha laga padh kar aapka kalaam ...
Aise hi likhte rahiyega ...
behad mehrbaani huzoor jo aap itne arse baad hamaari bazm me tashreef laaye... behad khushi hui aaj aapko yahan dekh kar... aur us sher ke liye alag se shukrguzaar hoon aapka.... aate rahiyega...

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Bohot khoob janaab, daad kubool kare...

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Duaon ki guzarish,
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behad mehrbaani hai huzoor.................... tashreef laate rahiyegaa...

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Pyaare DostoN... haazir hoon ek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath ... Nosh farmaaiyega....


Kisi ke Ishq me Dil ka safar nahi thaa,
ke mere Raaste uska bhi ghar nahii thaa.

Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.

Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi thaa.

Chaaragar- One who treats patients, Doctor or someone like that.


Muhabbat meiN bani merii bhi BigDee kismat,
MaiN pehle Ishq se, yuN dar-badar nahi thaa.

Nahii Dekhaa chalii Shamsheer* kiskii Mujhpe,
uThaa gir ke , to mere dhaD* pe Sar nahii thaa..!!

Shamsheer- Talwaar, Sword.
dhaD- Body





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Likhte rahiye.


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Kisi ke Ishq me Dil ka safar nahi thaa,
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Usi ko dekh kar chalne lagi theeN SaaNseN,
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Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
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Wo jo bhi thaa, magar Wo Chaaraagar* nahi th
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bahot bahot shukriyaa Shakir bhai............... tashreef laate raheiyegaa...

Shukriyaaa

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