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30th August 2006, 05:11 PM
Adaab ek arse baad...
Hum alag sahi aaj ke daur maiN... par kaise bhooluN maiN wo raaheN... chalte the sath kadam chalti thi sang sanseN...batao kya badla hai is jindgi main... pehle jagte the tere pyar maiN, abbas intzaar maiN kat-ti hai raateN, mil leta tha tujhse tab roobroo, aur ab tasveer se hoti hai bateN.. tabhi mera dil tere liye aaj bhi dhadakta hai... tere naam pe na jane kitna tadapta hai.. kehta hai tujhe jab koi bewafa... roti hai meri aankheN.. haN sach roti hai meri aaNkheN..........  `~``~``~``~``~``~``~``~``~``~``~``~``~``~` Bewafa na wo na MaiN, hum apne karam nibahte rahe… MaiN sehta raha sitam sare, aur wo sitam dhaate rahe… Kis baat ki kahani kahuN, kis baat ke fasaane sunauN… Liktha raha naam jo dil pe, wo dil se sanam mitate rahe… Is gali phir us gali maiN, pairoN par Zulm karte chala.. kehta gaya apna unhe,wo gairoN ko aham*bataate rahe… *Khaas, important person NazroN maiN bache ehsaas uski nishani bana sambahle… Mai roya gham-e-judai pe, wo noor-e-chashm*bahate rahe… * aankhoN ki chamak, Pyaasi raahoN se kya poochuN pata dar-e-mohabbat ka… Rahe sambhalte kaantoN par, wo beraham bichaate rahe… Aasra unka kahaN khuda bhi jo kiye ‘saccha_pyar’ yahaN… Hum mit gaye chahat mai unki, aur wo veham*batate rahe… HaaN bewafa wo kaise, usne bewafai se wafa to ki yaar.. Illat*meri bhi khoob kaho, wafa unse hardam nibhate rahe… *Aadat `~``~``~``~``~``~``~``~``~``~``~``~``~``~` Kunaal -: 30-8-2006 Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: Aur wo VEHAM bataate Rahe....! -
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Bewafa na wo na MaiN, hum apne karam nibahte rahe…
MaiN sehta raha sitam sare, aur wo sitam dhaate rahe… waah kya baat hai............... Is gali phir us gali maiN, pairoN par Zulm karte chala.. kehta gaya apna unhe,wo gairoN ko aham*bataate rahe… NazroN maiN bache ehsaas uski nishani bana sambahle… Mai roya gham-e-judai pe, wo noor-e-chashm*bahate rahe… noore shashm bhai wahh Pyaasi raahoN se kya poochuN pata dar-e-mohabbat ka… Rahe sambhalte kaantoN par, wo beraham bichaate rahe… oye kya baat hai grt Aasra unka kahaN khuda bhi jo kiye ‘saccha_pyar’ yahaN… Hum mit gaye chahat mai unki, aur wo veham*batate rahe… waaaaaaaaaaah maza aa gaya..........aur wo veham*batate rahe HaaN bewafa wo kaise, usne bewafai se wafa to ki yaar.. Illat*meri bhi khoob kaho, wafa unse hardam nibhate rahe… *Aadat kunal sahab aaj maine pahle baar aapko pada hai... pata nahi itne dino se kyoun nahi main aapko pad paya......... kamal ke shayar hain aap ithni saralta se itni gahri baat kahte hai... ki sidhi dil me utar jaye... khaskar ke aapke urdu shawado ko use karne ka tareek behad badiya hai..... aapki is gazal pe dil se meri daad kaboor kigiyega dilip jain  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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30th August 2006, 07:05 PM
bade bhai ko ek baar fir se chote ka aadaab,
bhai ek baar fir se wahi khamosh sa kar dene wala kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.dil ki gehraaiyon ko choo gaya ye kalaam.iske matle ne hi maar dala humko.bas padha aur dil me ghar kar gaya.fir se wahi dil cheer shayri.bahut ahcha laga aapko fir se usi rang me ranga dekh kar.umeed karta hun ki aage v aap yunhi likhte rahenge taki hum jaise nacheezon ko kuch na kuch seekhne ko milta rahe....... aapka CHOTA ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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hi -
30th August 2006, 08:22 PM
kunaal ji bhut acha lagga apko parna...ek alag sa ehsaas hua dil ko kush harkat jaggi raakh ke dheer main...ek chingari c roshan huie....bhut umda qalaam har ek share mukamal gazal hai......bass ji kaya kahu .....tusee chha gaye ho janaab......yeh share bhut umda lage......
Bewafa na wo na MaiN, hum apne karam nibahte rahe… MaiN sehta raha sitam sare, aur wo sitam dhaate rahe… Kis baat ki kahani kahuN, kis baat ke fasaane sunauN… Liktha raha naam jo dil pe, wo dil se sanam mitate rahe… Is gali phir us gali maiN, pairoN par Zulm karte chala.. kehta gaya apna unhe,wo gairoN ko aham*bataate rahe… appka raj....... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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31st August 2006, 12:04 AM
kunal ji,
waah,bahut khoob.bahut pasAnd aaya aapka yeh kalaam.yeh chand sher to bas chuu gaye dilko, Is gali phir us gali maiN, pairoN par Zulm karte chala.. kehta gaya apna unhe,wo gairoN ko aham*bataate rahe… Pyaasi raahoN se kya poochuN pata dar-e-mohabbat ka… Rahe sambhalte kaantoN par, wo beraham bichaate rahe… HaaN bewafa wo kaise, usne bewafai se wafa to ki yaar.. Illat*meri bhi khoob kaho, wafa unse hardam nibhate rahe… najaane kyon bewafa se hi hum dil laga beth te hai?? likhte rahiye. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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31st August 2006, 12:49 AM
Bewafa na wo na MaiN, hum apne karam nibahte rahe…
MaiN sehta raha sitam sare, aur wo sitam dhaate rahe… Kis baat ki kahani kahuN, kis baat ke fasaane sunauN… Liktha raha naam jo dil pe, wo dil se sanam mitate rahe… Kyaa baat hai.... well said... Is gali phir us gali maiN, pairoN par Zulm karte chala.. kehta gaya apna unhe,wo gairoN ko aham*bataate rahe… NazroN maiN bache ehsaas uski nishani bana sambahle… Mai roya gham-e-judai pe, wo noor-e-chashm*bahate rahe… waaaaaaaaah.... Pyaasi raahoN se kya poochuN pata dar-e-mohabbat ka… Rahe sambhalte kaantoN par, wo beraham bichaate rahe… Aasra unka kahaN khuda bhi jo kiye ‘saccha_pyar’ yahaN… Hum mit gaye chahat mai unki, aur wo veham*batate rahe… waaah.... second sher is really very good... HaaN bewafa wo kaise, usne bewafai se wafa to ki yaar.. Illat*meri bhi khoob kaho, wafa unse hardam nibhate rahe… kya baat hai huzoor... Dear Kunal, Ek arse baad tumhe padh raha hoon.... vakayi bahut accha likha hai tumne... ek dhaar si hai shabdon me... really well expressed.... Meri dil se daad kubool karna... aur likhte raho aise hi... ab to sabhi aa rahe hain vaapis... tum mat kho jaana  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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31st August 2006, 12:57 AM
kunaal mujhe lagta ahia mere pm ka asar aap par bhi ho raha hai,
bahut hi khoob aur behtareen likha hai aap ne,padh kar mazaa aa gaya, tumhe vaapas yaha is family mai dekh kar khushi hui. ummid hai vaqt nikaal kar aate rahoge ,aur hame tumhe padhane ka mauka milta rahega dil se daad qabool kare aise hi likhte raho regards manu |
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jo aapne apni nazr-e-karam mujh jaise khak pe ki... meri koshish rehti hai main sade pan maiN shayri karun .. taki kis ko zara si bhi masshakkat na uthani pade ... aapko pasand aayi mere liye ahem baat hai ye .. apna khayal rakhiyega .. stah ki umeed humesha rahegi ... kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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31st August 2006, 03:32 PM
mere bhai kunal !
kaise ho ? bahut dinoN ke baad padha tumhe magar wahi dard mauzood hai jo kabhi pehle hua karta tha ! jo log tumhe kareb se jaante haiN tumhare ashaaroN meiN tumhare juzbaatoN ko bakhoobi samjh sakte haiN ! aur jo nahi jaante haiN unhe bechaini zaroor hoti hogi jaane ki ? khair bahut achha likha hai ! bhai ki tareef Qabool ki jaye ! apna khyaal rakho ! |
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31st August 2006, 07:05 PM
jo bhi hai yaar...likhi bohat dhakad hai!!!well done.sahi main,nice poetry.tc
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31st August 2006, 09:40 PM
Bewafa na wo na MaiN, hum apne karam nibahte rahe…
MaiN sehta raha sitam sare, aur wo sitam dhaate rahe… HaaN bewafa wo kaise, usne bewafai se wafa to ki yaar.. Illat*meri bhi khoob kaho, wafa unse hardam nibhate rahe… Hello My sweet brother Kaise ho kunal  .......aaj tumhara yeh qalam dekh bahut kushi hui....It's really one of the best of ur poetries I have read so far ... the dimension that u have given to this poetry is different and unique....Bewafa na wo na MaiN, hum apne karam nibahte rahe…sach mein such thoughts I have never seen before when any poet writes on words like bewafai...this one is unique in itself....Bahut acha laga itna khoobsurat qakam dekh...apni di ki daad kabul karnaTake care keep smiling Tumhari di |
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1st September 2006, 01:20 AM
Bewafa na wo na MaiN, hum apne karam nibahte rahe…
MaiN sehta raha sitam sare, aur wo sitam dhaate rahe… NazroN maiN bache ehsaas uski nishani bana sambahle… Mai roya gham-e-judai pe, wo noor-e-chashm*bahate rahe… * aankhoN ki chamak, Aasra unka kahaN khuda bhi jo kiye ‘saccha_pyar’ yahaN… Hum mit gaye chahat mai unki, aur wo veham*batate rahe… Dear kunaal, Hope everything is fine at your end. an excellent work... sach me yaar bahut badhiya likha hai. specially liked these above shers... dard bhi aur sachaai bhi, it's always nice to read you. well expressed and it's even better than last time. meri dher saari daad kubul karna aur aaise hi likhte rehna. do take good care of yourself and be happy. |
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1st September 2006, 09:00 AM
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"Sajaane ki karte rahey hum khushi tere labon pe.. Par Tum kaanTon ko gale lagaate rahe... MaangTe rahe duaayein Tere liye o BHAI.. Hum bhi behan ka farz nibhaaTe rahe..." Aap humesha khush rahein yehi dua hai meri...... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Khamoshi hi to zindgi hai... wo to hum ise khamkha hi apni batoN se behlate rehte hai .. khair tumhe pasand aaya mera ye kalaam .. maiN behad khush huN ki tumhe ye accha laga .. aur kya kahuN .. jeete raho .. khush rahoi kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Humari likhai pe yuN gaur-e-nazar farmane ke liye aapka teh dil se shukraguzaar huN maiN ... khayal maiN aledha pan shayad maine humesha aazmane ki koshish ki hai ... main ek rau main beh ke shayri nahi karna chahta .... tumhe acchi lagi .. dil ko sukoon sa ehsaas ho raha hai ... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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2nd September 2006, 01:06 PM
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Phir se dil maiN kuch chubha ...khair ... aapko pasand aaya kalaam teh dil se shukraguzaar huN maiN aapka .... aur rahi baat bewafa se dil lagane ki .. to yaad rakho bewafa se dil koi nahi lagata .. agar kisi ko pehle pata lag jaye banda aisa hai to uske paas bhi na jaye .. wo dil lagata hai ek dil se jo use duniya maiN sabse khoobsoorat lagta hai ... bewafa yahan koi nahi .. kabhi haalaat kabhi majbooriyan .. aur kabhi duniya use bana dete hai .. aap bhi aate rahiye .. aapka apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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2nd September 2006, 01:08 PM
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arse baad likhunka to arse baad hi padhoge na ... haha .. aur teekhi talwaar pe dil rakh ke shayri kehna meri aadat hai ... aapko pata hai ... khair aapki daad sar mathe .. maiN kahin nahi khunga ab ,.. aata hi rahunga ... aapka apna kUnal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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2nd September 2006, 03:39 PM
Abe reply kar raha hai ke danda maar raha hai... Ladh ke aaya hai kya kisi se... Aisa lag raha hai patthar maar raha hai yaa fir train chhoot rahi hai... LOL...
neways...TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd September 2006, 07:58 AM
aap dosto ki nok-jhok padkar dil baag baag ho gaya....
khuda kare aapki ye dosti sada salamat rahe.... aap sabhi purane dosto main kitna pyar hai ye to un photos main bhi jhalkata hai jo aapne yahan post kiye hue the.... well aap sab logo se bahut kuch seekhne ko milega...... dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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wah wah wah -
3rd September 2006, 10:29 AM
kuch log chand lafzo mein
itna kuch keh jate hain ye lafzon ka jaadoo kya hai jo kisi jaadoogar ko nahi ata isi soch mein par jaate jaanti hoon ke mera ye sher appke sher ke saamne kuch nahi magar itna acha likha hai appne ke dil chaane laga mein bhi likhoon bas likhte isi tarhaan logo dil mein likhne khwuahish jagayiye |
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4th September 2006, 06:11 AM
Dear Kunnu...
Aasra unka kahaN khuda bhi jo kiye ‘saccha_pyar’ yahaN… Hum mit gaye chahat mai unki, aur wo veham*batate rahe… Bahut khuub! Sur aur Taal mein dhali yeh ghazal dil mein dard jaga kar bhi ek ajab lutf de gayi...padhkar jo mazza aaya bata nahin sakti...isse kehte hain shayri...har koyi nahin kar sakta...tumhara yeh hunar aasmaan ki unchaayion se bhi duur jaaye...yahi dua hai... tumhari guddo di gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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5th September 2006, 10:54 AM
Mere Bhai Kunnu.............
Bahut khoob ghazal likhi hai.......Matle se le kar maqte tak mohabaat ka junoon ....... HaaN bewafa wo kaise, usne bewafai se wafa to ki yaar.. Illat*meri bhi khoob kaho, wafa unse hardam nibhate rahe… Maqta to behad khoob raha......dil mein ek kheench si utar gaya........ Hum unse wafa nibhate rahe...... wo humse bewafi nibhate rahe..... wafa to dono oor thi ^AMAN^...... yahi ek - dooje ko samjhate rahe......... Khush Raho................. Tumhara apna.................. **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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6th September 2006, 04:43 AM
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Main kabhi kisi ke kehne pe kalam nahi utha sakta ye sach hai ... par tab bhi tumne is kabil samjha ki hume bazm main bulaya kabil e tareef hai ... khair door jane ka matlab ye nahi ki hum is parivaar ke nahi rahe tum aye shukriya aapka apna kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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aapse na kuch chupa hai .. na aap kisi cheez se anjaan hai ... aur mujhe jo nahi jante unki bechaini pe maiN bas khamoshi hi de sakta hun... aap aaye mujhe kitni khushi hai bata nahi sakta .... aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th September 2006, 04:46 AM
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aa gayi tum ... aur tumhara andaaz uff.. sach mujhe hanshi aa hi gayi .... aur kahan ho tum aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th September 2006, 04:49 AM
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sayad ye khayaal hi nahi .... soch ki udaan bhi hai .... jo bas nikle hi nahi dil maiN hai ab tak... yahan inka alag hona laazmi hai i ... shayad mera pyar sabki tarah nahi ... aur kya kahun... aap aay yahi bohat badi baat hai mere liye aapka kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th September 2006, 04:52 AM
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sab theek hi hai ... par bas tum jaise dostoN ki kami hai .... tumhe mere aasaar pasand aaye aur kya kahuN.... tumhari daad sir mathe apna khyal rakhna tumhara apna Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th September 2006, 04:53 AM
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behna tum bas mujhe khamosh kar jaaya karo humesha jaanti ho na ki apni behan se kitna pyar hai mujhe ... tum bhi humesha khush raho tumhara bhai kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th September 2006, 04:55 AM
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waqt ki kami thi tab thodi isi liye aur reply nahi diye the.. aur tumse to mazaak karne mai mujhe maza aata hai kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th September 2006, 04:56 AM
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ye nok jhok ab ki nahi ... sahi kaha aur pillu bhai se to meri purani yaari hai .. wo pehle bande hai jisne mujhe yahan jana.. aur pehle hi bande hai jinse sabse pehle main site ke bandoN main s mila aap aaye accha laga Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: wah wah wah |
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6th September 2006, 04:58 AM
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aapne itni tareef kar di ki humen is layak bhi nahi chora ki aapki tareef kar paye .. kisi ki tareef main kuch bhi kehna badi baat hai aapne itna kaha .. aapka shukragujaar hu main apka apna Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th September 2006, 05:01 AM
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Shayri ki mallika is adne se shayar ke liye iytna kahen to aankhen num ho hi jayengi .. aapne itna kaha dil ki khushi chaar guna ho gayi.. aap aayi main bas natmastak hun aapka apna kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th September 2006, 05:03 AM
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aapka bhai Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th September 2006, 05:02 PM
kunal dost
lafzi takraar per mubni aap ki yeh khoobsurat ghazel, tishnigi, yaasiyet, mohabbat, aur khush guftaari ka ek behtreen majmuua hai. meri bharpoor daad qabool karein. dua go hoon aap ki kaamiyaabi ke liye, khushiyon ke liye. musharrafhusain |
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7th September 2006, 01:09 AM
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dil bas manmooniyat ke shikhar par hai aapko apne galiyare main dekh ke .. khuda aapko salammat rakhe ... main aapki salamti ke liye khuda se duago rahunga aapka bhai Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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8th September 2006, 11:23 AM
ishaaron ko agar samjho veham ko veham hi rehne do
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8th September 2006, 11:43 AM
janab kunal sahab aadaab ,ummeed karta hoon khush honge,har baar ki trah is baar bhi aapne ek behtareen kalaam pesh kiya hai jo ki kaabile tareef hai,main to apne aap ko rok na saka is par daad dene ke liye.......
yoonhi likhte rahiye aur apna khayal rakhiye.... shaad |
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8th September 2006, 10:01 PM
hi kunal
yaar i really like your id sachha pyar...... bahut good si feeling aati hai pad ke......... anyways keep it up...... neha |
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9th September 2006, 05:00 PM
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kya kare dhool dhoke ki humari ankhon main thi... Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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9th September 2006, 05:03 PM
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isteqbaali alfazoN ka behad shukraguzaar huN .. aur dil manmoon hai aapko apne aashiyane maiN paakar .. kalam agar kisi doori kalam ko likhne pe majboor kar de to zaroor usme koi baat aledah rahi hogi .. isi baat ko samajhte hue maiN aapki daad ko teh dil se Nazar-o-taaj karta huN ... aap aaye shukriya .. aapki salamti ke litye duago rahuNga ... aate rahiyega janaab Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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