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hum toh aapke hamesha se hi maskuur hai..... bus yu.n hi hausla badhaate rahiye, khush rahiye, aabaad rahiye ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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25th July 2014, 11:05 AM
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ek gehrii soch, jabeen bhii toh aaftaab hai toh kyuN na suaao.n jaise bal padhe jaaye.... waaaaah waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh bahot khub.............. daad hi daad aapko, Zarraji duao.n ke saath ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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25th July 2014, 02:32 PM
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25th July 2014, 11:22 PM
Dedicated to them who work hard day and night, break their backs
to support their families, who do not live for themselves but for their families:- kaam meiN ho jate haiN magan masrofiyat se ho jati hai thakan qabil-e-tehseen haiN jo nahi laatay, jabeeN per halki si bhi shikan! tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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26th July 2014, 02:53 PM
Zarraji,
hum toh aapke hamesha se hi maskuur hai..... bus yu.n hi hausla badhaate rahiye, khush rahiye, aabaad rahiye [/QUOTE]Ji bilkul ... ise main apni khushkismati samajhta hoon ki aap jaise hum khayaalon aur nek dil logon se hum sukhan hone ka mauka mil raha hai mujh ko. Aur yakeen maaniye Aadeil bhai, aap se hum sab ko BAHAUT kuchh seekhne ko mil raha hai, jis ke liye aap ka jitna bhi shukriya ada kiya jaaye kam hoga. mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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26th July 2014, 02:56 PM
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26th July 2014, 03:06 PM
zabaan ishq ke muNh meiN kidhar huwa karti
bas ik jabeen hi hoti hai jo jhuka karti khata bhi yaar ki lagti hai jaise shokh ada kami bhi yaar ki yakta* usey kiya karti * unique -zarraa (SDC meiN pesh kari huwee nazm "mohabbat ke 3 raNg" se) mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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26th July 2014, 09:46 PM
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26th July 2014, 09:49 PM
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27th July 2014, 01:45 AM
dostoN .... lafz "jabeen" par ghaur karne ka aakhiri din hai ye ... aglee midnight tak hum is lafz par rahenge ... phir nay a lafz
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27th July 2014, 04:21 AM
wo siyah* gesoo wo taabindaa* jabeeN wo surkh lab
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lafz "jabeen"par members ke qalaam .... -
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lafz "jabeen" par members ke khud ke qalaam ....
Mah me'n to daagh hai nazro'n se bachaane Ke liye Mahjabee'n tu bhee lagaa le mujhe kaajal ki tarah Ufaq na de umr-e-daraazii kii duaaae.n maah-e-shab baa-waqt jabiin-e-pur-shikan bhii umr ka ehsaas dilaataa hai Aadeil biin-e-khaaksii me.n ek jabiin-e-sang bhii aisa yahaa.n nazr-e-qafas jaa.n aur safhaa-e-dahr dikhaataa hai Aadeil jabiiN ghista rahaa aage saraab-e-rahmat-e-parvar siyaah-ruu jab huaa to raakh chehre pe lagaataa hai Aadeil bhale ibn-us-sabiil hi ibn-e-maryam ko banaataa hai jabii.n-saaii me.n hi aksar wo khud kulfat le aataa hai Aadeil jabiiN dekhe Safiiraan-e-haram ke baa-hayaa jhuke ye to achchhaa Safiiraan-e-chaman hi sub.h laataa hai Aadeil Firaaq-e-aysh-o-ishrat meiN qatl-e-imaaN hua Ibn-e-adam khudse kyuN bad-gumaN hua Sar nezoN se hue juda maidaan-e-qarbala Ghaaeb har jabeen se aj kyuN sajde ka nishaaN hua N@zneen fusooN-e-ishQ ne jab deewanaa banaya zeest ko ik bewafaa ne tamashaa banaya haal kia biyaaN ho, hum jese be-haal ka rasan-e-daar khud unhoN ne apnaa banaya kabhi ho jaati hai niyyat kharab, beech bazaar haan! bosa-e-rukhsar ne humaiN ruswaa banaya phir chaaye khalwatoN ke baadal chaar soo us sung ne jab bar-mala muqadammaa banaya zindaaN meiN zikr-e-yaar ke siwa kuch na kiya ussi mah-e-jabeen ke charche, jis ne paglaa banaya Hassan bal shuaaoN ke se parhe jaayeiN ke jabeeN bhi to aaftaab hai ye Zarraa kaam meiN ho jate haiN magan masrofiyat se ho jati hai thakan qabil-e-tehseen haiN jo nahi laatay jabeeN per halki si bhi shikan Hassan zabaan ishq ke muNh meiN kidhar huwa karti bas ik jabeen hi hoti hai jo jhuka karti khata bhi yaar ki lagti hai jaise shokh ada kami bhi yaar ki yakta usey kiya karti Zarraa wo siyah gesoo wo taabindaa jabeeN wo surkh lab tere sab jalwe ayaaN hote mere jaane ke baad Zarraa aap sabhi shora ka shukriya jinhone seeekhne ke sisile ko apne khoobsurat aashaar se aage bardhaaya. is baar Aadeil sahab ne pooree ghazal keh di jis ke har sher meiN lafz "jabeen" ka khoobsurat istemaal huwa hai. Hassan sahab ne fusoon-e-alfaaz ke safar par ghazal kahi jis ke aashaar mein, ab tak yahaan par jitne bhi alfaaz par ghaur kiya gaya hai, un sab ka khoobsurat istemaal kiya gaya hai. aur un sabhi doston ka bhi shukriya jinhone hamaari hausla afzaayee ki aur jinhone is koshish ko apna waqt diya. duaon ke saath Zarraa mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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28th July 2014, 12:23 AM
dostoN ... is baar ka lafz hai .... MIZHGAAN .....
ye lafz thorha sa uncommon zaroor hai, par hai bahaut hi haseen .... aur ye behad khoobsurti se shayari mein istemaal huwa hai, jaisa ke hum aage dekheNge. "mizhgaan" means "eyelashes" ya "palkeiN" is ke pronounciation par 2 baateiN kehna chaahooNga .... jaisa ki "n" se khatm hone waale kayee alfaaz meiN hota hai, ise "mizhgaan" keh sakte haiN (ending in "n") ya "mizhgaaN (nasal sound attached to "ghaa")* "mizhgaan"/"mizhgaaN" meiN "zh" ka pronounciation main alfaaz meiN bayaan naheeN kar pa raha hooN, to is ki ek "audio misaal" pesh kar raha hooN, ek YouTube link ke zariye. is link meiN Ghulam Ali ki gaaye ghazal hai jo Mirza Ghalib ki hai, jis ka matla hai "sad jalwa ru-ba-ru hai jo mizhgaaN uthaaiye". is meiN aap is lafz ka pronounciation, khaas taur se "zh" ke sound, note kijiye. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hBF2s...e_gdata_player to ab hum lafz "mizhgaan" par ghaur kareNge, koyee sher, qit'ta, nazm, rubaayee ya aur kuchh jise shayari kaha ja sake, keh kar. behr ki koyee bandish naheeN hai, n hi aashaar par koyee gintee, jitne chaaheiN aashaar kaheiN ......... more the merrier lafz "mizhgaan" se talluq rakhte huwe jo expressions dekhne ko milte haiN, un meiN se kuchh is tarah se haiN ... mizhgaan ki jumbish means movement of eyelashes jo palakeiN jhapkaane ki taraf ishaara karta hai mizhgaan uthaana dekhne ki taraf ishaara karta hai mizhgaan kholna band aankheiN ko kholna ki taraf ishaara karta hai mizhgaan ka geela hona ya nam hona ya tar rehna rone ki taraf ishaara karta hai shayari ke saath saath SDC style guftagoo bhi jaaree rakkheNge, seekhne sikhaane ke maqsad se. members se darkhwaast hai ki is lafz par apne khayaalaat aur ilm bhi baaNtte raheiN aur is ki nuances aur is ki usage par roshni daaleiN, jis se hum sab saath saath seekh sakeiN.* ab is lafz par ustaad shora ke kuchh khoobsurat aashaar ka lutf lete haiN ... bas ai "meer" mizhgaaN se poNchh aaNsuoN ko tu kab tak ye moti pirota rahega -meer taqee meer kin neeNdoN ab tu soti hai ai chashm-e-girya naak mizhgaaN to khol shahar ko sailaab le gaya -meer taqee meer mizhgaan-e-tar ko yaar ke chehre pe khol "meer" is aab-khasta sabze ko tuk aaftaab de -meer taqee meer sad jalwa ru-ba-ru hai jo mizhgaaN uthaaiye taaqat kahaaN ke deed ka ehsaaN uthaaiye -ghalib dil-o-mizhgaaN ka jo muqadma tha aaj phir us ki rubakaaree hai -ghalib naheeN dil meiN mere wo qatra-e-khooN jis se mizhgaaN huwee n ho gul-baaz -ghalib karte haiN apne zakhm-e-jigar ko rafoo hum aap kuchh bhi khayaal-e-jumbish-e-mizhgaaN naheeN raha -momin is lafz par ghaur karne ka silsila hum agle 5 *din tak chalaayenge, *yaani Friday,*1st August, 10:00 PM India time ya 4:30*PM GMT. to ab intezaar kis baat ka ! lafz-e-mizhgaan ke saamne mizhgaan kholiye aur usey apne khoobsurat aashaar mein le aaiye, ki jidhar bhi mizhgaan uthe lafz-e-mizhgaan hi nazar aaye * duaoN ke saath zarraa mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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28th July 2014, 01:01 AM
Lafz...mizhgaa.n
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28th July 2014, 03:00 PM
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28th July 2014, 03:02 PM
ye link hai mirza ghalib ki ek azeem ghazal ka jis ke 3 aashaar meiN lafz "mizhgaan" ka hairatanghez istemaal kiya hai unhoneiN
http://www.columbia.edu/itc/mealac/p...ndex_233.html? is meiN "mizhgaan" par kya khoob jumle Ghalib sahab ne farmaaye haiN ... daawat-e-mizhgaan = feast for eyelashes (jigar ke tukrhoN ki) khaama-e-mizhgaan = pen of eyelashes (jis meiN khoon-e-dil bhara huwa hai) dashna-e-mizhgaan = dagger of eyelashes (jise surme se tez kiya hai) mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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28th July 2014, 04:17 PM
mushtaaq*-e-deed*-e-jalwa ye aaNkheiN theeN hum ne par
mizhgaaN ko us ke husn ka chilman* bana diya -zarraa mushtaaq = longing for, deed = sight, chilman = curtain mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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29th July 2014, 10:27 AM
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baDi khubsurti se aapne haqiqat ko bayaan kii hai.. behad hi khubsurat tehriir hai dilse dheroN daadQuote:
Ji bilkul ... ise main apni khushkismati samajhta hoon ki aap jaise hum khayaalon aur nek dil logon se hum sukhan hone ka mauka mil raha hai mujh ko. Aur yakeen maaniye Aadeil bhai, aap se hum sab ko BAHAUT kuchh seekhne ko mil raha hai, jis ke liye aap ka jitna bhi shukriya ada kiya jaaye kam hoga.[/QUOTE] aapkii zarra navaazi ke liye aapka masquur hooN, Zarrasaab Quote:
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Zarrasaab, aapkii shokhi-e-lafz ka kya kehna, janaab............. baar baar aapkii tehriiroN ko padhne ka dil karta hai -- Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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29th July 2014, 11:13 AM
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laajawaab.. aalatareen bayaanaat, Ufaqsaab.. kya khubsurat kaarigarii hai..... lafz-e-mizgaa.n ko aapne bakhubii nibhaayaa hai dili daad... --Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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29th July 2014, 11:17 AM
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iis sher kii jitnii bhii tariif kii jaaye, kam hongiiii......... mizgaaN ko aankhoN kaa chilman banaa kar ek nayii soch qaayam kii hai..... behad hi khubsurat sher hai, jaanib se dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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29th July 2014, 11:29 AM
lafz-e-mizhgaa.n pe hamaarii kosish....
nok-e-mizhgaa.n* pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n* gham jo manaate rehte *nok-e-mizhgaa.n = tip of eyelashes *tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n = under the hidden eyelashes ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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29th July 2014, 03:34 PM
mizhgaan-e-tar* kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim* rahe
lekin saraab-zaar* nazar se adiim* rahe *mizhgaan-e-tar = wet eyelids *niyaaz-e-qadiim = long-term wish *saraab-zaar = like mirage *adiim = deprived of ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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29th July 2014, 11:38 PM
In mohabbat bhari daad ka tah e dil se ehsaanmand hooN Aadeil bhai
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waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh..... Zarrasaab, kya khub qitah pesh kiya hai................ jaise ek rang-e-tehriir ho... bazm ko aapne sajaa diyaa wooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!! Zarrasaab, aapkii shokhi-e-lafz ka kya kehna, janaab............. baar baar aapkii tehriiroN ko padhne ka dil karta hai -- Adil[/QUOTE] mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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29th July 2014, 11:40 PM
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29th July 2014, 11:43 PM
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29th July 2014, 11:46 PM
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30th July 2014, 09:16 AM
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yuN hi pyar barqaraar rakhiye duaaoN ke saath, Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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30th July 2014, 04:45 PM
teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha -zarraa (kham = curl, ghamza = a flirtatious glance) mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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30th July 2014, 04:58 PM
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Zarraasaab, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!! laajawaab, kya sher kahaa hai..... mizhgaaN ke kham, ek yaktaa khayaal.... dheroN dheroN daad meri jaanib se...... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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31st July 2014, 09:36 AM
Naaz, this is dedicated to you
shokHii-e-tifl* si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii detii tujhe lutaane ijaazat ye mehfile.n *tifl = child ~Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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31st July 2014, 09:44 AM
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...........................ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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31st July 2014, 12:18 PM
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ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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Adil this is so beautiful am so touched....thank you sooooo much dear |
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