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Tanhaiyon main yaadon ke jangal sulag pade ! - 25th April 2006, 10:35 PM

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aap sabhi ke saamne ek baar fir se hazir hun ek nai gajal lekar ummid karta hun pasand aayegi

Hasne laga tha aankh se aansoo chhalak pade !
Tanhaiyon main yaadon ke jangal sulag pade !

Jin raston pe aap mere saath chale the ..
Un raston pe aaj ham tanha hee chal pade !

Shayad ke unane mujhko abhi yaad kiya hai..
Dil mai na jaane kyun kain arma machal pade !

Kuchh aapki yaadon ke ujaale ubhar gaye
Kuchh Ham charag banke sar-e-shaam jal pade !

Barbaadiyan kuchh is kadar mujhko nigal gai
Bas naam se hee mere pathhar pighal pade !


aap sabhi ka ek gumnam saathi
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26th April 2006, 12:15 PM

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Re: Tanhaiyon main yaadon ke jangal sulag pade ! - 26th April 2006, 04:58 PM

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aap sabhi ke saamne ek baar fir se hazir hun ek nai gajal lekar ummid karta hun pasand aayegi

Hasne laga tha aankh se aansoo chhalak pade !
Tanhaiyon main yaadon ke jangal sulag pade !

Jin raston pe aap mere saath chale the ..
Un raston pe aaj ham tanha hee chal pade !

Shayad ke unane mujhko abhi yaad kiya hai..
Dil mai na jaane kyun kain arma machal pade !

Kuchh aapki yaadon ke ujaale ubhar gaye
Kuchh Ham charag banke sar-e-shaam jal pade !

Barbaadiyan kuchh is kadar mujhko nigal gai
Bas naam se hee mere pathhar pighal pade !


aap sabhi ka ek gumnam saathi
anish_ekshayar


Anish

Dard saaf jhalak raha hai aapke kalaam se….iss par wah nahin karoongi.

Ek achi rachna par daad kabool kijiyega
Apna khayal rakhiyega


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Hi anish

kaise ho bahote dino bade tume hara likha pada bhaote i aacha likha hia hamesha ki tarha nice work keep it up. iwill wait to read more.

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27th April 2006, 12:18 PM

dear shubh jee

sabse pahle to aapka thnx ke aap yanha aaye or meri is rachna ko saraha.. dil se shukriya kabool kijiye, dear shayad aap sahi hain aajkal yanha har kisi ka ek circle ban gaya hai par isase fark nahi padta kyunki agar sirf daad hasil karne ke liye aap gajal likhte hain to aapki shayri shohrat kee mohtaj najar aayegi or usme wo hakikat nahi chhalk pati wo dard wo ahsaas kahin kho jate hain isliye dost aap sirf apni gajlon se is mahfil ko mahkate rahiye khushboo madhosh kar dene wali hogi to log khud b khud khiche chale aayenge kyun sahi kaha na to aap bhi kuchh apni rachnaye dobar is site par bhejen intjaar rahega


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27th April 2006, 12:22 PM

dear wafa jee
thnx ke aapne meri ye rachna padhi or use saraha or iske liye bhi shukriya ke us dard ko mahsoos kiya jo is rachna main ghula hua tha jab shayar ka dard uski shayri main jhalke or use dusra bhi mahsoos kare to uski rachna ko naye ayam mil jate hain naye mayne mil jate hain to meri is rachna ko naye mayne dene ke liye dil se shukriya


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27th April 2006, 12:23 PM

Anish

aapki yeh kaavish behad pasand aayi...ek umda rachna ke liye daad kubuul farmaayiye...


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27th April 2006, 12:26 PM

dear mushkan

tumhe yanha dekh kar mujhe bahut khushi hui tumne to ek dam rishta hee tod liya na koi mail na koi phone kya hua itni jyaada busy to tum nahi hogi ke doston ko yaad karna bhi bhool jao jaldi hee mail karna mera naya mail address hai anish.paliwal@gmail.com or han shukriya ke tum yanha aai or meri rachna ko pasnd kiya mail ka intjaar rahega


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27th April 2006, 12:29 PM

dear parastaar jee

aapko bhi ham yaad hain ab tak or aap aaj bhi meri is rachna ko sarahne yanha aai shukriya ek shayar ko sachhi khushi tabhi hoti hai jab ek behad umda manja hua shayar uski rachana ko sarahe or meri rachna ko aap ne saraha ye to mere liye gorav kee baat hai is hunar ko or behatar karne kee koshish karunga aap hamesha hosla afjai ke liye saath to rahengi na????


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hi - 29th April 2006, 05:20 PM

hi akelijaan jee
thnx ke aap yanha aaye or aapne is rachna ko tareef ke kabil samjha hamare ahsaason ko khubsurat banane main aapka bhi haaath hai kyunki kyunki koi bhi rachna padhne wale ko bhi achhi lagni chahiye warna usme alfaj bekar hee rah jate hain mahsoos karne wala na ho to ahsaas mar jaate hain bemayne rah jaate hain hai na????


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29th April 2006, 07:36 PM

Anish bhaaii...


Bohat umda likha hai aap ne.. Matle par kaafiya durust kereNge to aur ravaani nazar aayegii....

Daad kabool kareN

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anish ji aapne apne dard ko bhaut khoob anzaaz mai likha hai saaf saaf padhne wala mahsson kar sakta hai

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30th April 2006, 10:26 AM

Hasne laga tha aankh se aansoo chhalak pade !
Tanhaiyon main yaadon ke jangal sulag pade !

Jin raston pe aap mere saath chale the ..
Un raston pe aaj ham tanha hee chal pade !

Shayad ke unane mujhko abhi yaad kiya hai..
Dil mai na jaane kyun kain arma machal pade !

Kuchh aapki yaadon ke ujaale ubhar gaye
Kuchh Ham charag banke sar-e-shaam jal pade !

Barbaadiyan kuchh is kadar mujhko nigal gai
Bas naam se hee mere pathhar pighal pade !


Hi Anish,

Bahut hi khoobsurat aashaar pehs kiye hain aapne... Really very well expressed.... Aise hi kucch kucch likhte rhaiye... aur share karte rahiye... khayal rakhiyega apna...


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30th April 2006, 12:47 PM

hi anjana rahi jee
thnx ke aapko mera likha pasand aaya or aapne iske liye meri hosla afajai kee shukriya


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30th April 2006, 12:50 PM

hi shrdh
shukriya aapne is rachna ko saraha aap jaise doston ke liye hee aaten hain yanha aap jaise umda shayaron ke beech ham bhi apni rachna likh bhejte hain taki aap unhe or umda bana sake


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hi pulkit
thnx for reply me aapko ye gajal pasand aai to meri ye gajal bhi sarthak ho gai dost tumhe bahut din baad dekhkar khushi hui halanki main aajkal yanha kam hee aa pata hun par jab aata hun to aap doston ke yanha hone kee ummid rakhta hun aapne hamesha meri hosla afjai kee hai shukriya kabool kijiye dil se


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Re: Tanhaiyon main yaadon ke jangal sulag pade ! - 2nd May 2006, 07:58 PM

Dear anish,

Itne din baad sahi, kuch tumhari aur se parh ke achha laga, waise to sabhi sher mujhe pasand aaye par yeh do sher khaas hai, aaise hi aate raho aur likhte raho.

Hasne laga tha aankh se aansoo chhalak pade !
Tanhaiyon main yaadon ke jangal sulag pade !

Kuchh aapki yaadon ke ujaale ubhar gaye
Kuchh Ham charag banke sar-e-shaam jal pade !


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anish ji maine pahle kabhi aap ke kalaam ko padha nahi,aaj padha to sach mai tasali hui aap ko padh kar, bahut dil se likhte hai aap,
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hi anish ,its really great ,u hv donw well i like it ,keep it up .



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Re: Tanhaiyon main yaadon ke jangal sulag pade ! - 9th May 2006, 05:18 PM

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aap sabhi ke saamne ek baar fir se hazir hun ek nai gajal lekar ummid karta hun pasand aayegi

Hasne laga tha aankh se aansoo chhalak pade !
Tanhaiyon main yaadon ke jangal sulag pade !

Jin raston pe aap mere saath chale the ..
Un raston pe aaj ham tanha hee chal pade !

Shayad ke unane mujhko abhi yaad kiya hai..
Dil mai na jaane kyun kain arma machal pade !

Kuchh aapki yaadon ke ujaale ubhar gaye
Kuchh Ham charag banke sar-e-shaam jal pade !

Barbaadiyan kuchh is kadar mujhko nigal gai
Bas naam se hee mere pathhar pighal pade !


aap sabhi ka ek gumnam saathi
anish_ekshayar




Anish ji apki ghazal ka bhi jawaab nahi..... kitna kucch keh deti hai apki ghazale

"Jin raston pe aap mere saath chale the ..
Un raston pe aaj ham tanha hee chal pade !

Shayad ke unane mujhko abhi yaad kiya hai..
Dil mai na jaane kyun kain arma machal pade !

bas yu hin likhte rahiye

der se reply diya hai maafi


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hi - 15th May 2006, 03:20 PM

dear Parul

tumhe yanha dekh kar khushi hui tumhe ye gajal pasand aai mujhe achha laga main nahi janta ke ye gajal kitni achhi lagi par agar wastv main aisi hai jo tum sabhi ke dil ko bhaye to meri gajal sarthak hai warna mere dil ke armaano kee tarah ye bhi bhujhi hui see ek rachana jaisi hai


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dear acharya jee

aap ne mujhe pahli bar padha chaliye aap hamari is mahfil main aaye to dear dil se shukriya kabool kijiye ke aap yanha aaye or hamari hosla afjai kee thnx


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dear aru
thnx for reply apka dil se aabhari hun ke aap yanha aaye or is rachna ko daad ke kaabil samjha


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15th May 2006, 03:38 PM

dear shweta
sorry kahne jaroorat nahi hai or shukriya ke tumne fir se meri ek or rachna ko tareef ke kabil samjha dear thnx a lot for coming here and reply me pata hai aap dost jab meri kisi gajal ko padhkar apne dil se kahte hain wah to meri us rachna ko naye arth mil jaate hain in rachnao ko ya yun kaho dil se nikle in alfajon ko ek naya arth dene ke liye shukriya


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Re: Tanhaiyon main yaadon ke jangal sulag pade ! - 15th May 2006, 05:59 PM

Shayad ke unane mujhko abhi yaad kiya hai..
Dil mai na jaane kyun kain arma machal pade !

Kuchh aapki yaadon ke ujaale ubhar gaye
Kuchh Ham charag banke sar-e-shaam jal pade !

Barbaadiyan kuchh is kadar mujhko nigal gai
Bas naam se hee mere pathhar pighal pade !


kya baat hai...!!
anish bhai..ek baar phir aapki kalam se ek jaandaar gazal...bahoot bahoot shukriya janaab apni itni sundar rachna se rub-ru karwane ke liye ..meri daad kubool kijiye
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anishjee,
hum aapki shayree se waquif to nahee,par jab padhaa

"barbaadiyan kuchh kadar mujko nigal gayee,
bas naam se hee mere pathhar pighal pade.

to aapko daad dene chale aaye.aapki gazal is mehfil ko
mehka gayee. Daad kubuul kijeeye.......shukriya..intezar
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6th September 2006, 11:52 AM

hi manoj jee
sorry maine aaj itne dino baad apke post ka reply diya par main aaj bahut dino baad aaya hun is mahfil main aapko dekhkar ek baar fir khushi hui ke is rachana ko bhi aapne saraha or maine pahle socha tha shayad ye rachna itni achhi nahi ban padi hai kyunki manoj jee kee daad nahi mili par ab main santusht hun thnx for reply me





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Re: Tanhaiyon main yaadon ke jangal sulag pade ! - 6th September 2006, 01:59 PM

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dear friends
aap sabhi ke saamne ek baar fir se hazir hun ek nai gajal lekar ummid karta hun pasand aayegi

Hasne laga tha aankh se aansoo chhalak pade !
Tanhaiyon main yaadon ke jangal sulag pade !

Jin raston pe aap mere saath chale the ..
Un raston pe aaj ham tanha hee chal pade !

Shayad ke unane mujhko abhi yaad kiya hai..
Dil mai na jaane kyun kain arma machal pade !

Kuchh aapki yaadon ke ujaale ubhar gaye
Kuchh Ham charag banke sar-e-shaam jal pade !

Barbaadiyan kuchh is kadar mujhko nigal gai
Bas naam se hee mere pathhar pighal pade !


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hi anish ji

badi hi umda shayri hai aapki .... aaj jab ye shayri top per aayi or main e aapko pahli baar pada... yakeen maniye bada accha laga or aapko daad dene k liye reply karne baith gaya....

bade hi khoob surat ehsaso ko apne lafzo se sajaya hai aapne bada gahra dard pesh kiya hai aapne dil se meri daad kaboor farmaiye.....

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hi - 10th September 2006, 06:26 PM

dear dilip jee
aapko mere ye ahsaas pasand aaye iske liye shukriya kabool kijiye aap jaise kuchh doston ke liye he is mahfil main pahli baar aaya tha aap jaise doston kee sohbat ne hame bhi shayar bana diya ......... jo likh pata hun us sab kee prerana yanhi se mujhe milti hai yanha ke sabhi doston ke tarah aap kee hosla afjai mili iske liye sukriya apne dard ko pesh kiya karta hun jaisa ban padta hai bhej deta hun ke aap sabhi ise parkh saken ek baar fir se shukriya ke aapne reply kiya or meri is rachna ko dil se kaboola


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