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Thumbs up Do read this!!!! - 29th January 2004, 07:35 PM

ARZ KARTI HOON:


Waqt ki ret (sand) agar;
Yaadon ke seep (shells) chunte reh jaaooge;
"aaj" nikal jayega haathon se;
"kal" khali haath reh jaaoge..........


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29th January 2004, 09:51 PM

Beautiful. Yehi toh samajhte nehi hein sab agar samajh jaaten toh aisi haal na hoti. Likhte rahiyega. Shukriya. Take care. God bless you.


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30th January 2004, 10:26 AM

Well said $hivani,
Kash !! sab ye samjhe..... aise hi likhte rahena...
Have a nice time.....


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oops! - 30th January 2004, 08:13 PM

i made a mistake in this shayri ...the first line goes like this



waqt ki ret SE agar......


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Smile thanx!!!! - 30th January 2004, 08:15 PM

thank you so much shimulji and rakshitji.....you people really encourage me to go ahead and write more....thanx!


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30th January 2004, 08:35 PM

Jee, aisi koi baat nehi hein, kabhi kabhi hojaate hein aise bhi. Lekin padne se khudh ba khudh samajh ajati hein. Aap likhte hi itni achhi ho ke hum keya kare? Aap yunhi likhti rahna. Thanks for your reply. Take care. God bless you.


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thankx anand babu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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shukriya shimulji!!!!!!!!!!!


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