Try this...for reality!

[$hivani]

hi everyone...this is an attempt to understand as to how people who do not have light in their eyes find this world of ours.....


Dekha nahi hai;
subah ki laali ko,
Na dekha hai kabhi;
us shaam nirali ko.....

Dekha nahi hai;
chaand ki chaandni ko,
Na dekha hai kabhi;
taaron ki roshni ko.....

Dekha nahi hai;
chehre ki sachchai ko,
Na dekha hai kabhi;
nigahon ki gehraayi ko.....

Dekha nahi hai;
masoom si muskaan ko,
Na dekha hai kabhi;
us bachche naadan ko....

Aankhon se to kuch dekha nahi hai humne....
par jeevan ke maiinon ko samjha hai humne...
isse sangharsh kiya hai humi ne...
aur iske har par pal ko JEEYA hai humne!!!!!!

[karan q]

Well itne halke fulke lafzon me apne vichaar rakhne waala sach me nahi dekha thaa lekin ab dekh liya,
shukriya aapka
humare khyaal se this is the bigning of yours... you will write lot batter then this
keep writeing .... one day you will be the best
next time write something on dekha bahoot dekha
or dekh liya
salaam ke saath
izzajat
karan.q

[$hivani]

hello karanji...thank u so much for appreciating me....i write in simple words not because i dont know tough words with deep meaning but because simple words can be understood by all and they touch u more....thanx a lot once again....bye 4 now...take care

[Tanha mukesh]

Shivaniji aapne kitne saral aur asardar shabdo me jeevan ki sachai kahi he.is se pata chalta he ki aap kitna achcha aur satik likhti he.very lovely n heart touching sher.keep it up.
Mukesh

[$hivani]

hi mukeshji...thanx a lot for liking and replying to this one too....