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3rd August 2004, 05:55 PM
larajh gaye man mere, jab geet gun-gunaye tune kuchh bhule bisare pal manas patal per khich laaye tune kuchh khamoshiya mere pyar ki kuchh dhadakan ejhaar ki bahar phir phulo ki geet sawan ke jhulo ki khich laaye tune jab muskuraye tune.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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3rd August 2004, 07:29 PM
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bahut hi khoob likha hai apne likhte rahiye sonal |
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3rd August 2004, 09:46 PM
Akant ji,
Kya hai na ab to aapki rachnayein aur bhi jeewant lagti hai.... pehle se jyada behtar..kyuki pehle to aap shayad apni imaginations se likhte hai....magar ab aap har lafj ko mehsoos karke likhte hai na..... daad ke saath, aapki dost, pari  |
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4th August 2004, 03:15 AM
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Akant ji,
Aise hi likhte rahiye! Khush rahiye! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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4th August 2004, 12:36 PM
Akant ji...
kya kahein hum?? Jise itne pyaar se saraaha tumne.. Hau shukr us adaa ka jo lubhaaya tumhe. bohat sundar hai aapki ye rachna.. rachna itni pyaari hai.. to iski preRna kitni pyaari hogi..!! Yunhi likhte rahiye.. pyaar ke meethe meethe bol!  |
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4th August 2004, 04:33 PM
akant dost,
khubsurat rachna....... humesha ki tarah tumhare ahesaas pasand aaye.... meena |
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4th August 2004, 05:00 PM
Sonal ji,
shukriyah janab... aapko rachana pasand aayi.. aur aapne apane alfaz diye hum to dhany ho gaye... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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4th August 2004, 05:06 PM
Pari ji,
hanji ab to rachana mein jaan aani hi chahiye.. pahale vah imagination hi kaafi had tak hua kerti thi.. per ab kuchh reality bhi hoti hai... aisa mujhe bhi lagata hai.. aapki daad ke liye bahut bahut dhanyvaad... "hum to bahutai khush huye hain" es rachan ko online achanak hi likh diya tha.. pata hi nahi chala ki main likh raha hoon.. per likh diya tha..esliye aap ke saamane pahunch gayi. khush rahiye ji hamesha hi... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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4th August 2004, 05:13 PM
Priya ji,
kaisi hain aap? ummid hai ki aap achchhi hi hongi. meri creation aapko pasand aayi..sachchhi dil ko achchha laga..aapka bahut bahut dhanyvaad.. yah rachana bas reply likh raha tha kisi thread per usi dauran man mein ban gayi ..bas likh diya tha ese.. abhi man kerta hai ki ese aur badha ker likhu per mood bahut kam concentrate rahata hai.. esliye aage baad mein kabhi shayd likhu.. aap khush rahiye..yahi dua hai.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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4th August 2004, 05:23 PM
Afshan ji,
are kuchh to kahiye jii... haa vo ada to bahut pyari hai.. jaanti hai afshan ji.. aapki hi rachana per main reply likh raha tha jo geet vali aapki rachana hai.. uske reply likhate samay man mein bhav aaye unhe bas utar diya tha.. yah sach hai ki prerna vahi se mili hai jaha aapki najar prerna ko dhundh rahi hai ya kahiye ki dekh rahi hai... ek pryas hai ek jagriti hai ki lamho ko kaid kerta chalu.. kuchh lamhe apane etihas ke namune ban jaate hain na esliye hi.. aate rahiyega aur muskurate rahiyega. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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5th August 2004, 01:48 PM
Meena ji,
aap kaisi hain? aap ki tabiyat ab achchhi to rahati hai na? well yah kavita to bas afshan ji ke thread per reply likhate samy ban gayi thi.. bas post ker diya tha.. aapko achchha laga...khushi mili.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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5th August 2004, 03:52 PM
wow.. humaara wo thread itna kaam aayega hume khabar na thi!
 .. Lekin aisa hota hai.. aapko yaad hai, aapki ek kavita paR kar humne 'Kaise koi bhulaaye' likh di thi?? Aise bhi hota hai.. kabhi kuchh is tarah dil chhu jaata hai ki apne khayaal parwaaz karne lag jaate hain.. Umeed hai ki aake khayaal yunhi parwaaz karte rahenge.. |
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6th August 2004, 12:26 PM
ha Afshan ji,
ab to khabar ho gayi na........... mujhe achchhi tarah yaad hai.. aapki vah post .. aapne meri post per reply kerke bataya tha ki aapne kuchh likha hai.. kabhi kabhi padhate padhte bhi bahut achchha mood ban jata hai aur ek naya kalam bahar aa jata hai.. khush rahiye ji, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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6th August 2004, 12:48 PM
kuchh khamoshiya mere pyar ki
kuchh dhadakan ejhaar ki bahar phir phulo ki geet sawan ke jhulo ki khich laaye tune love ki behatarin anubhuti... bahut achchhi lagi aapki yah line...keep writting.. ANKIT That tale of sadest thought.... |
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6th August 2004, 05:06 PM
Ankit ji,
aapko achchha laga.. aapane reply diya main abhari hoon aapka.. aate rahiyega... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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