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"NA JANE KAUNSE AAKHRI PAL ME MERI MAUT LIKHI HAI..."a shayri for her...with u always
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"NA JANE KAUNSE AAKHRI PAL ME MERI MAUT LIKHI HAI..."a shayri for her...with u always - 12th November 2006, 09:37 AM

main to kab ka chala gaya hota is duniya mese,
lagta hai ye zindagi ab tak usike liye yaha ruki hai....

jab bhi sochta hu main hamari judai ke bare me,
bichad jane ke dar se ye ankhen nam jhuki hai........

samjh me nahi aata kya karunga main uske bin,
is khayal se hi mere dilme dard ki lehren uthi hai....

mili wo mujhe to sari zindagi sawar jayengi meri,
na mili to samjhunga k kismat hi mujhse ruthi hai....

hum dono mile ya na mile is janam me kabhi,
pyaar salamat rahe ye bat maine usse sikhi hai....

pata nahi mujhe kab aa jayengi maut karib mere,
na jane kaun se aakhri pal me meri maut likhi hai.....





A SHAYRI FOR HER.......................................



na jane kaun se aakhri pal me meri maut likhi hai.....


*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...

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12th November 2006, 01:58 PM

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main to kab ka chala gaya hota is duniya mese,
lagta hai ye zindagi ab tak usike liye yaha ruki hai....

jab bhi sochta hu main hamari judai ke bare me,
bichad jane ke dar se ye ankhen nam jhuki hai........

samjh me nahi aata kya karunga main uske bin,
is khayal se hi mere dilme dard ki lehren uthi hai....

mili wo mujhe to sari zindagi sawar jayengi meri,
na mili to samjhunga k kismat hi mujhse ruthi hai....

hum dono mile ya na mile is janam me kabhi,
pyaar salamat rahe ye bat maine usse sikhi hai....

pata nahi mujhe kab aa jayengi maut karib mere,
na jane kaun se aakhri pal me meri maut likhi hai.....





A SHAYRI FOR HER.......................................



na jane kaun se aakhri pal me meri maut likhi hai.....
Hmmm...! Acha lagaa aap ka yaha kalaam, Dhaval Ji...! Ehsaas-e-Dard ki bayaani aapne thik tareeke se kiya hai...!

Aap ko parhne ka awasar younhhi dete rahiyega...!

Jai Shri Krishna...!



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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12th November 2006, 04:58 PM

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main to kab ka chala gaya hota is duniya mese,
lagta hai ye zindagi ab tak usike liye yaha ruki hai....

jab bhi sochta hu main hamari judai ke bare me,
bichad jane ke dar se ye ankhen nam jhuki hai........

samjh me nahi aata kya karunga main uske bin,
is khayal se hi mere dilme dard ki lehren uthi hai....

mili wo mujhe to sari zindagi sawar jayengi meri,
na mili to samjhunga k kismat hi mujhse ruthi hai....

hum dono mile ya na mile is janam me kabhi,
pyaar salamat rahe ye bat maine usse sikhi hai....

pata nahi mujhe kab aa jayengi maut karib mere,
na jane kaun se aakhri pal me meri maut likhi hai.....





A SHAYRI FOR HER.......................................



na jane kaun se aakhri pal me meri maut likhi hai.....





acha likha hai dhaval mager itni mayoosi kion bhai achi umeed rakhni chahiye janab jo hoga acha hoga keep writing n be happy


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12th November 2006, 08:33 PM

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main to kab ka chala gaya hota is duniya mese,
lagta hai ye zindagi ab tak usike liye yaha ruki hai....

BAHOT KHUUB LIKHA HAI....

jab bhi sochta hu main hamari judai ke bare me,
bichad jane ke dar se ye ankhen nam jhuki hai........

KOI JUDAAI NA AYE AAPKE AUR USKE BICH.YE DUAA HAI APKI DOST KI.

samjh me nahi aata kya karunga main uske bin,
is khayal se hi mere dilme dard ki lehren uthi hai....

VO JUDAA HOGI TO AAPKE DIL ME LAHAR UTTHEGI NA..VERY BEAUTIFUL SHER

mili wo mujhe to sari zindagi sawar jayengi meri,
na mili to samjhunga k kismat hi mujhse ruthi hai....

APKI KISMAT SAATH DEGI APKA.

hum dono mile ya na mile is janam me kabhi,
pyaar salamat rahe ye bat maine usse sikhi hai....

NAA MILKE BHI MILL JAYE JO PREMI VAHI PYAAR HOTA HAI SACCHA...DONT WORRY KUCH NAHI HOGA. JO HOGA ACHHA HOGA.

pata nahi mujhe kab aa jayengi maut karib mere,
na jane kaun se aakhri pal me meri maut likhi hai.....

HEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY.......!!! YE MARNE KI BAAT KYU KAR DI BIICH ME HA...U MAKE ME ANGRY...HA...... ........





A SHAYRI FOR HER.......................................

APKI "HER" HUMESHA APKE SAATH RAHE YE UPAR VALE SE FARIYAAD HAI...

na jane kaun se aakhri pal me meri maut likhi hai.....
APNE PURI NAZAM BAHOT SUNDAR LIKHI HAI. UNHI LIKHTE RAHIYE. BE HAPPY.....ALL'WAYS.OK

GRAZIE

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14th November 2006, 10:20 AM

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Hmmm...! Acha lagaa aap ka yaha kalaam, Dhaval Ji...! Ehsaas-e-Dard ki bayaani aapne thik tareeke se kiya hai...!

Aap ko parhne ka awasar younhhi dete rahiyega...!

Jai Shri Krishna...!

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apna khayal rakhiye

khus rahiye

jai shreee krishna .....

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acha likha hai dhaval mager itni mayoosi kion bhai achi umeed rakhni chahiye janab jo hoga acha hoga keep writing n be happy
koi to ho ji kais hai aap?

hanji sach kaha aapne kabhi kabar mayusi ho jati hai par ye mayusi kuch pal ki hi hoti hai

aapko meri ye rachna pasand aayi bahot hi khusi hui mujhe bas aise hi is dost ka sath dete rahhiyenga

khus rahiye
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APNE PURI NAZAM BAHOT SUNDAR LIKHI HAI. UNHI LIKHTE RAHIYE. BE HAPPY.....ALL'WAYS.OK

GRAZIE

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bahot khusi hui k aapko meri ye peshkas itni pasand aayi main aise hi likhta rahunga

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Dhaval Ji!

pata nahi mujhe kab aa jayengi maut karib mere,
na jane kaun se aakhri pal me meri maut likhi hai.....


Bahuj sunder! Kehvu padey!!
Rajan!!


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Dhaval Ji!

pata nahi mujhe kab aa jayengi maut karib mere,
na jane kaun se aakhri pal me meri maut likhi hai.....


Bahuj sunder! Kehvu padey!!
Rajan!!


RAJAN JI KEM CHHO?

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tamne aa mari rachna pasnd avi mane khub j khusi thayi chhe bas hu amaj lakhto rais tame aa mitr no sath apta rejo hamesha

khus raho

jai shree krishna

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