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8th July 2004, 01:24 PM
Meri Mohabbat Teri Jafa, Saaath Dono Ki Nibhaayi Ham Ne..
Ye Soch Ke Teri Jafa Zaahir Hogi.. Mohabbat Apni Chhipaayi Ham Ne... Ham Sochte The Tum Doge Har Pal Saath Mera, Soch Kar Ye Chhoodh Di Apni Hi Parchhayi Hum Ne... Jab Jaana Tere Ghar Mai Chiraag Jaltaa Nahii, Apne Mehfil Mai Shama Bhi Na jalaayi Ham Ne... Khuda Ko Khwaabh Mai Bhi Na Dekhaa Kabhii, Teri Hi Ulfat Samjhi Thi Khudaayi Ham Ne... Khabar Mili Ki Tere Haathon Mai Kisi Aur Ki Mehndi Saj Gayii, Ye Sun Kar Apni Maiyat Khud Hi Sajaayi Ham Ne... Mat Soch Ki Abhii Din Aa Pahunchaa Meri Mout Kaa, Tere Thukraane Ke Baad Hi Raah~E~Kaza Apnaayi Ham Ne... Fariste Aa Ke Puche Meri lehad Pe Barbaadii Ki DaastaaN, Meri Wafa To Dekh Teri Jafa Bhi Na Bataayi Ham Ne... Jafa-Tyranny Of A Beloved, oppression, injustice ulfat-Mohabbat Maiyat- zanaazaH lehad-Kabar -MayanK |
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Khub...dard~e~dil bayan kiya hain aapne. Daad kubool kijiyega. Dilse shukriya bhi kubool kijiyega...younhi likhte rahiyega. Achha laga jo aap yeaha wapas aa gaaye hain aur phirse likhrahe hain...Khushi houi. "Tumharein liye hain baharon ke mousam Na aaye kabhi Zindegi mein koi gham Humara hain keya yaar Hum hain deewane Humari tadap ko koi bhi na jaane Mile na tumhein Ishq mein bekarari sada khush rahon tum Duwa hain humari"....... Haan, maine bhi Pyaar kiya hain...film ki naam yehi hain. Humein jinse Pyaar hojaata hain unke khushi ke liye keya kuch nahin karjaate.......Pyaar haan, yeh Pyaar hi tou hain. Ek gana hain: Bhagwan ik kusoor ki itni badi saza Duniya teri yehi hain tou Duniya se main chala~Duniyake zaleemon ne chalayi woh andhiya~saarein charaag bujhgaaye Main dekhta hi raha, Singer: Mohd. Rafi Jee, aur mujhe bohot hi achha lagta hain yeh gana. Main theek houn...(Jiyada kehgaayi ho tou mujhe mafh kardijiyega, waise bhi aaj kal main younhi likhdeti houn aur kabhi kabhi tou mujhe khudh nahin pata hota hai ke kyun)...Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.
 Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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8th July 2004, 04:08 PM
hello mayank ji,,,
apne jis andaz se apne mohabat ke derd ko bayan kiya hai,,uskey liye mere pass shabd nahi hai,,per ye bhi ek haqeeqat hai ,ki dil bhi un derd ke sath khud ko jorta hai,,jo sach me hi kahin apne jaise lagey aur,,gehra ehsas kera jayein....apke ye ashrar bahut pasand aye... Meri Mohabbat Teri Jafa, Saaath Dono Ki Nibhaayi Ham Ne.. Ye Soch Ke Teri Jafa Zaahir Hogi.. Mohabbat Apni Chhipaayi Ham Ne... Ham Sochte The Tum Doge Har Pal Saath Mera, Soch Kar Ye Chhoodh Di Apni Hi Parchhayi Hum Ne... Jab Jaana Tere Ghar Mai Chiraag Jaltaa Nahii, Apne Mehfil Mai Shama Bhi Na jalaayi Ham Ne... Khuda Ko Khwaabh Mai Bhi Na Dekhaa Kabhii, Teri Hi Ulfat Samjhi Thi Khudaayi Ham Ne... Khabar Mili Ki Tere Haathon Mai Kisi Aur Ki Mehndi Saj Gayii, Ye Sun Kar Apni Maiyat Khud Hi Sajaayi Ham Ne... ... Fariste Aa Ke Puche Meri lehad Pe Barbaadii Ki DaastaaN, Meri Wafa To Dekh Teri Jafa Bhi Na Bataayi Ham Ne... really too much heart touching..... |
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Re: Meri Mohabbat Teri Jafa, Saaath Dono Ki Nibhaayi Ham Ne.. -
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Poori nazm bahut hi khoobsoorti se pesh ki aapne. Bas ek baat kehna chaahungi.... Zindagi mein kabhi khushi milti hai.. kabhi dher se gam.. Kabhi aansoo milte hain... to kabhi tanhaai... Lekin sab humesha ke liye nahi rehte.. Mausam ki tarah zindagi bhi badalti rehti hai.. Pyar sabhi karte hain... kisi ka mukkammal ho pata hai, kisi ka nahi... Jo pa lete hain, woh to jaise jannat mein rehte hain.. Lekin jo nahi paate.. woh is tarah kabristaan jaane ki baatein kyun karte hain??? Aapne bhi apne last vaalo 2-3 sheron mein yahin likha hai... Dost, agar tum kabristaan jaaoge.. to kya tumhari mohabbat ko dukh nahi hoga... theek hai ek min ke liye maan leti hun, ki shayad unhe tumse mohabbat nahi... lekin tumhari mohabbat mein to koi kami nahi... to phir agar rehna hi apni mohabbat ki yaadon mein.. to woh sab yaad rakho jab tum unke saath khush the muskuraate the... us vakt ko jab bhi yaad karoge muskuraaoge... Lekin woh vakt jab tumhe gam aur dard mila.. use bhula do.. main jaanti hun mumkin nahi hai par koshish karne se sab haasil ho jata hai.. Chalo aise soch liya karo ki woh tumhare the hi nahi... woh to kisi aur ki amanat thi.. lekin us amanat ne kuch vakt ke liye tumhe bhi dher saari khushiyan di... Kisi ek ke rukne se zindagi nahi rukti... aage badho... khushiyan tumhara intzaar kar rahi hain.... Aur yeh baat sirf aapke liye nahi hai Manish ji, yeh baat har pyar karne vaale ke liye hain... If u love someone, let him go, If he comes back to you, then he's yours, otherwise he was never meant to be." Khush rahiye! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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10th July 2004, 11:16 AM
Shimul ji..
Aadaab! Kaise haiN aap? Bahut khushi huyi aap ko ek arse ke baad apne page par dekh kar... In fact ham to ye soch rahethe ki aap ham se kahiiN naaraaz tou nahi hai... Chaliye ye baat tou clear huyi ki aap naaraaz nahi haiN.. Aap ko yah ghazal pasand aayi tou hame behad achchhaa lagaa.. Aap ki housla afzaayi ke liye tah~e~dil se sukriyaa.. Apna khayaal rakhiegaa... MayanK |
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10th July 2004, 11:18 AM
Swati ji...
Hi! Aap ko yah qalam pasand aaya iss ke yah jaan ke bahut khushi huyi.. Housla afzaayi ke liye bahut bahut sukriyaa.. Aap ka likhaa hua qalam bhi hame behad pasand aata hai.. Bhale hi hame reply karne ka mouka na bhi mile par aap ka qalam padh kar dil se daad hameshaa nikalti hai.. Umeed hai aap ka saath barkaraar rahegaa... Apna khayaal rakheN.. aur likhte raheN.. MayanK |
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dard bhari shayri -
10th July 2004, 12:34 PM
Namaskar Mayank Ji
Apki shayri padi bahut dard bhari hay.Zindagi dard ka doosra naam na hoti to kya hoti.Jo shayri Dil se likhey na jati to kya shayri hoti.Mughey apki shayri padkar ek Harivansh Rai Bachan ki kavita yaad aa gayee jo kabhi bachpan mein pade thi ........Jeevan Nahi mara karta hay..........Chahey kitna bhi dard ho Jab Aap kissey ke chehrey ko ek Muskurahat dein fir dekhiyega Dard kaise chala Jayega. Muskurate Rahiye |
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10th July 2004, 01:46 PM
Chaahat ji...
Aray aap to teacher ki samjhaane lag gayi....!!!! lolZ:d Aap ne mere baare mai itna sochaa...Bahut achchhaa laga aap ka likhaa ye message padh kar... Ye sab puraani baateN ho chuki hai chaahat ji... Aur ye ghazal bhi puraani hi hai... Aur filhaal mera marne ka koyi iraadaa nahi hai..  Aur jina marna tou uparwale ke haath mai hai.. wo jab bhi bulaayegaa hame jaana padegaa..Zindagi ki koyi koyi nischitta tou hoti nahi.... Pata nahi koun abb hamaare saath hai aur kab door ho jaaye...Aur rahi baat mere pyaar ki tou...hamaaraa milna..Naa-moom-kiim hai.... ye tou dil ke wo gham hai jo kabhi kabhi ubhar aati hai.. Kuch pal ki khusiyaaN aur umar bhar ka..... Kher...aap ne likha hame behad achchhaa laga...Khush rahiye.. MayanK |
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10th July 2004, 02:08 PM
Mayank….har sher apni ek kahani keh raha hai….behad khoosurati se dard jahir kiya hai ….bahut khoob..dil se nikli daad kabool kijiyega.
Fariste Aa Ke Puche Meri lehad Pe Barbaadii Ki DaastaaN, Meri Wafa To Dekh Teri Jafa Bhi Na Bataayi Ham Ne.….wah ..kya khoob kaha… tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon (NM) |
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10th July 2004, 08:20 PM
Sukanya ji..
Zindagi dard ka doosra naam na hoti to kya hoti. Shayri jo Dil se likhey na jati to kya shayri hoti. waah bahut khoob kaha hai aap ne aur Haribansh Ray bachan jo Kavita likhi hai aap ne wo bhi bahut achchhi lagii.. Tah~e~dil se sukriya isse ham sab ke saath share karne ke liye.. Housla afzayi ke liye bhi bahut bahut sukriyaa.. Umeed hai aage bhi aap ka saath milta rahegaa... MayanK |
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10th July 2004, 08:22 PM
Roopaalii ji...
Aap ko yah sher pasand aayi yah jaan kar bahut achchha lagaa...Humesha ki tarah iss baar bhi aap yah hosla afzaayi ke liye sukriyaa..Umeed hai saath barkaraar rahegaa... Take care... Mayank |
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Shukriya -
10th July 2004, 08:40 PM
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Bahut Acha laga Apka reply sunkar.Aapke aur Vipin Ji ki Shayri sabse Alag hoti hay.Lafz bhi kam padtey hain aapke tareef karne kay liye. Aise shayri likho Jo zamana dekey, Jo dard se door le jaye woh Zamana Sochey, Aisey hi Dua kartey hain aap is se bhi jyada Acha likhein. Muskurate rahiye |
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11th July 2004, 09:40 AM
dear mayank
hamesha se aapka likha padti aa rahi hu kaafi time pehley aapne meri raaye maangi thi apni ek kahani me...that days i was too upset and the reply i wrote i alwys thought was rude.....but kuch dil ki kasak thi ki kya kaha jaanaa hi nahi....hamesha socha tumhe uska reply karu par...bas...kabhi waqt kabhi khud hi haaath tham gaye.....par dost..i must say that..i luv ur work....the pain their is in it..pyar karne wale hi samajh saktey hai..aur yahi sacha pyar hai ki ...teri jafa kibaat bhi ki na humney.....great piece of work...there is a lot of pain inside ur hrt as i can see....i wish u the best....u r a master of writing and today i salute u for it Meri Mohabbat Teri Jafa, Saaath Dono Ki Nibhaayi Ham Ne.. Ye Soch Ke Teri Jafa Zaahir Hogi.. Mohabbat Apni Chhipaayi Ham Ne... Ham Sochte The Tum Doge Har Pal Saath Mera, Soch Kar Ye Chhoodh Di Apni Hi Parchhayi Hum Ne... Khuda Ko Khwaabh Mai Bhi Na Dekhaa Kabhii, Teri Hi Ulfat Samjhi Thi Khudaayi Ham Ne... in lines ka kuch jawaab hi nahi hai dost..jaise aapka jawab nahi hai. Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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11th July 2004, 08:00 PM
sukanya ji...
Housla afzayi ke liye bhaut bahut sukriya...Yah to aap ki meharbaani hai jo aap is naachiz ka likha qalam pasnad karte haiN.. MayanK |
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Luv-Priya Ji... Bahut khooB! Itna izzat diya aap ne...Such..Bahut bahut khushii huyi aap ka yah reply padh kar...aur uss se bhi jyaada khushii huyi yah jaan kar ki aap hamaarii likhii huyi har qalam padhte haiN... Kisi ke qalam ka iss se jyada kya kimat ho sakti hai ki log uss ka kaam pasand kareN.... Mai pahle jab aap ko kuch likhaa huaa padhta thaa tou aap ko ek elderly lady samajh raha thaa kyun ki aap ke qalam mujhe anubhav nazar aa raha thaa.. Lekin aaj aap ka profile dekhaa tou...Pata chal ki aap tou bahut chhoti haiN...Itna izzat diya aap ne ehsaan rahegaa ham par... Dhersaare pyaar ke saath ab izaazat...Apna khayaal rakheN.. MayanK |
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Aakhir Teacher ko bhi pata chalta rahe ki student ko kitna samjh aa raha hai.. lolz... Khush rahiye ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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13th July 2004, 10:56 AM
Mayank Sahib...
aane mein deri ke liye kshma chahti hoon...lekin aapki yeh post aate jaate bahut baar padhi...aap tau waise hamesha hee badhiya kalaam pesh karte hain...aur iss kalaam mein bhi wahi dard wahi mohabbat rubaroo hai...mujhe yeh dono sher bahot hee pasand aaye... Jab Jaana Tere Ghar Mai Chiraag Jaltaa Nahii, Apne Mehfil Mai Shama Bhi Na jalaayi Ham Ne... just loved it... Khuda Ko Khwaabh Mai Bhi Na Dekhaa Kabhii, Teri Hi Ulfat Samjhi Thi Khudaayi Ham Ne... kya baat hai...yeh gumaan bahut se pyaar ke saudaayion ko hota hai..hai na... sada yoonhi likhte rahein...aur apna khayaal rakhein... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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13th July 2004, 07:28 PM
Hi Chaahat...
Is teacher ko samjhaate samjhaate khud hi ghanchakkar ban jaaogii...Kyun ki yah teacher ko pata hai ki uss ka student kitna samjhta hai aur kitna samjhaane ki kosish karta hai ...  MayanK |
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13th July 2004, 07:29 PM
Parastaar sahibaa....
Namsakaar Kshyama kisliye??? Ye ti aap ka badappan hai ki aap is nachiz ka likha huaa padhne ke liye apne kimti paloN mai se kuch pal nikal leti hai..aur reply bhi karti haiN...  aap ko yah qalam pasand aayaa iss ke liye tah~e~dil se sukriya...In fact hame intezaar bhi thaa ap ke reply ka... Humeshaa ki tarah iss baar bhi housla afzaayi ke liye bahut bahut bahut bahut sukriyaa...Khuda Ko Khwaabh Mai Bhi Na Dekhaa Kabhii, Teri Hi Ulfat Samjhi Thi Khudaayi Ham Ne... Such kaha hai aap ne... Yah gumaan tou har mohabbat karne waloN ko ho hi jaata hai.. Apna khayaal rakheN... MayanK |
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31st July 2004, 05:04 PM
Mayank Ji....
Kya baat hai......bahut accha kaha hai aapne.... aise hee likhtey rahiye...Sir 
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2nd August 2004, 11:03 AM
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Kaise haiN aap? Aap ko yah qalam pasand aaya khushkismati hamaarii.. .. bahut khushi huyi aap ko yahaan dekh kar, housla afzaayi ke liye bahut bahut sukriyaa. Umeed hai aage bhi aap ka protsahan miltaa rahegaa.. Take care..MayanK |
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25th October 2004, 01:25 PM
Mushkan ji..
Kaisi haiN aap? Maaf chaahunga kyuN ki reply karne mai kaafi deri ho chuki hai.. Aap ko hamaara likha hua kuch pasand aaya yah tou hamaari khush kismati hai.. Apna khayaal rakhiye.. MayanK |
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25th October 2004, 08:53 PM
Hello Anjanji
bahote khube likha hia padte hi ajise laga ki kai dinose chupe ansoon in ankho se bahare nikle pade very nice Mushkan |
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28th October 2004, 09:25 AM
Meri Mohabbat Teri Jafa, Saaath Dono Ki Nibhaayi Ham Ne..
Ye Soch Ke Teri Jafa Zaahir Hogi.. Mohabbat Apni Chhipaayi Ham Ne... waise to puri nazm hi bahut acchi hain..par yeh first para hume kuch apna sa laga...bahut sacchai hain puri nazmmein..dil se daad kubool kijeye... door se tha woh kai chehro mein paas se koi bhi waisa na laga bewafai bhi usi ka tha chalan, fir kisi se yeh shikayat na hui.. -----nida fazli------- mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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28th October 2004, 02:16 PM
Mayank ji...dairi k liye maafi chahti hu..
dard kitna hai...dil tees se bhar uthhta hai...aur koi bol hi mukh se nahi nikalte...ha.n. ek thandi aah jaroor nikalti hai...dard bhari daad hi maun roop se kabool kare... chalti hu.. udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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28th October 2004, 02:56 PM
Manayk ji..... kutch phir se yaad aa gaya apka ye likha hua pad kar
" Jab Jaana Tere Ghar Mai Chiraag Jaltaa Nahii, Apne Mehfil Mai Shama Bhi Na jalaayi Ham Ne... Ham Sochte The Tum Doge Har Pal Saath Mera, Soch Kar Ye Chhoodh Di Apni Hi Parchhayi Hum Ne... Khuda Ko Khwaabh Mai Bhi Na Dekhaa Kabhii, Teri Hi Ulfat Samjhi Thi Khudaayi Ham Ne..." Isi tarah humne bhi kisi ko chaha tha... uski ik muskaan ke liye har pal jiya tha.... lekin....... Kutch nahi raha ab kehne ko. **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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30th October 2004, 01:28 PM
Mousam ji..
Kaisi haiN?yah pure ghazal mai se aap ko kuch kuch ek sher apne mehsoosh huye jaan kar khushi huyi.. Aap ki taareef hame tah-e-dil se kabool hai.. Ek baar fir se tah-e-dil se shukriya housla afzaayi ke liye aur Nida Faazli ji ka ek khoobsoorat sher yahaaN pesh karnme ke liye.. MayanK |
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30th October 2004, 01:34 PM
Sunita Ji..
Kaisi HaiN aap? Aap ne jis dhang se reply kiya hai wo wakayi kaabil e taareef hai.. Aap ki moun daad bhi hame tah-e-dil se kabool hai..Bahoot bahoot shukriya is qalam ko pasand karne ke liye.. MayanK |
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30th October 2004, 01:44 PM
Aman saahab..
Kaise haiN aap? Pahli baar aap ko yahaaN apne page par dekh ke bahooot khushi huyi.. HAm ne bhi aap ka likha huaa qalam padha thaa.. kaafi behtar likha tha aap ne.. Insaan agar jo sab chaahe usay mil jaaye tou fir gham hi kya?? Ek baar fir se tah-e-dil se shukriya se is qalam ko pasand karne ke liye.. Apna khayaal rakhiyegaa aur yuN hi aate rahiyegaa.. Aap ka dost.. MayanK |
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Re: Meri Mohabbat Teri Jafaa, Sang Dono Ki Nibhaayi Ham Ne.. |
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Re: Meri Mohabbat Teri Jafaa, Sang Dono Ki Nibhaayi Ham Ne.. -
18th December 2005, 05:43 PM
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kya boloon.... bas itna hi.... bahut hi pyara likha hai... likhte rahiye jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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18th December 2005, 09:05 PM
bhai saab kabhi to kuch bolne ke liye rakho
kuch alfaaz chodge to kuch kahenge wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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18th December 2005, 09:09 PM
in short bohot barhiya
sukoon Dil jab bhi pukaare bula leejiye Ae dost hum door ziyaada nahin aap se, Bus apni palkon ko mila leejiye |
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18th December 2005, 11:20 PM
Kya baat hai mayank...kal hi aapse meine kaha ke kuch likkho aur aapne likh bhi diya...aapne meri baat rakh li jaanke khushi horahi hai bahaut.
waah waah..bahaut badhiya likkha hai...padhke ke maza agaya... dard me mohabbat aur mohabbat me dard yeh dono hi ehsaas maujood the aapke kalaam mein...meri taraf se daad kubool kariyega...apna khyaal rakhiyega. Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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19th December 2005, 12:31 AM
MayaNk bhai
Bohat hi khoob aagaaz se anjaam tak aapka apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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3rd August 2010, 10:59 AM
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wah................dard ki bayaani kya khoob hai, mayank jii aapki kalam ab khamosh kyuN hai....esko khamosh mat hone dijiyega..........! dil ko hilla gaye ahsaas. reps +++ .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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