bhol gaye

wafa · **bhol gaye -** 18th January 2003, 08:32 AM

hi friends!
mujhe umeed hai aap sab log theek hon gey
,
ETNI SHIDAT SE CHAHA KE KHUD KO HUM BHOL GAYE
YAD RAHE TU SIRF TUM ,SARI DUNIA HUM BHOL GAYE

DIN SAARA GUZARA TUMHARE HI KHEYALOON MAIN
RAAT BHI AAI PAR HUM SOONA HI BHOL GAYE

SOOCHTE RAHE TERI BAATAIN ,TERI CHAHAT KO HUM
APNE SAARE GHUM,, SAARE DARD ,,HUM BHOL GAYE

UTHA KE HATH MANGI KHUDA SE SIRF TUMHARI HI KHUSIAN
APNE LEYE TU HUM KUCH BHI MANGNA BHOL GAYE

DEKH KE ON HONTOON KI HUNSI KO WAFA
AAJ HUM APNI ANKH KE ANSOO BHI BHOL GAYE

adena · 28th January 2003, 02:47 AM

hi
hamain adena khatay hain
ap na theak bola anas miss wafa ka name be acha hay
or in ki shayare be
lakin mr anas ap ki taraf say parhanay ko kuch nahee mila
wafa jee ap apnay ustad ka name humain be bata dain
hum be islah lay sakain gay
regards
adena

wafa · **thanx -** 28th January 2003, 05:45 PM

salam friends!
umeed hai ke aap sab thek hongey ,anas and adena,uger aaplog tanz nahi kur rahe ke main ne acha likha tu thanx ,uger aap log mujh par tanz kur ke yeh keh rahe ho ke main ne acha likha oor main sekhti hon oor mere ustad kon hain ,tu es baare main kuch nahi kahon gi ,ustaad tu haalaat oor waqt hota hai jo bohet kuch sikha deta hain insaan ko ,main ne jo dil main aaya likh dia acha ya bura yeh pata nahi ,llekin mujhe umeed nahi thi ke koi mazak main bhi taref kure ga ,any way thanx ,
oor romana ji mujhe yakeen hai ke aap ne mazak nahi kia hoga kyon ke aapki post main parhti rehti hon ,bohet juld kuch oor likhon gi ,,,

hujome ghum meri fitrat badl nahi sakta
main keya kuroon mujhe aadat hai muskurane ki

wafa · **hello -** 29th January 2003, 08:50 AM

hi anas ji!
asal main baat yeh hai ke mujhe nahi lugta ke main ne kuch easa likh dia ke koi tareef kure ,es leye mujhe aapki baat mazak hi lugi i'm sorry uger aap hurt howe tu ,aapne mere naam ki dad di aapko mera naam acha luga ,thanx ,muger aapka naam anas ,esko ulta parho tu sana banta hai ,keya yeh aapka real name hai ya bas ease hi rakh lia ,zroor bateye ga ,oor rahi baat ke meri shayri main wazan ki baat tu yakeen karain main shayri shair banene ke leye nahi kurti na hi mujhe koi shair banene ka shooq hai yeh tu bas dil ki ghutan ko kam kurne ka samaan hai ,ustaad han ustaad zroori hai muger mere koi ustaad nahi abhi tak leekin ek ko keh sakti hon jis ki waja se likhna shuro kia ,oor woh sahir hain ,sirf onke leye hi likhna shuro kia ,i think dosti tu aap se ho hi gai hai ,aap shyri .com ke membar jo ho ,

kush raho
bye
wafa
jo ab nahi hoti

adena · 29th January 2003, 10:08 PM

adena here
yes u are right anas i should say sorry to both of romana and wafa
but belive me i did not mean to make ffun of wafa
i am sorry anyway
and u mr anas
yes romana is right u have a beautiful name
u can use that for ur takhulas
i hope anas u got my private email which i send u last day
sorry for that too
adena na anas ki poetry to par lee(ap sab log lucky ho kay anas na wo ap ko send nahee ki na he post ki {kidding anas jee mind mat ki jeya ga})
but nothing from u miss romana
and miss wafa we all waitng some thing from u
take care guys
adena

Chota Sa Dil · **hi -** 30th January 2003, 02:23 AM

Just wanted to say its been some time since I have come here to read any shayri. I must say this is the first one that i read today and its very sweat and simple. bahoth achai tarekai sai likha hai apne, baree saadhkee ke saath. Keep up the good work.

Chota Sa Dil

wafa · **adab -** 31st January 2003, 06:42 PM

salam ,anas ji adena ji ,romana ji ,oor chota sa dil ,

aap sab logoon ki hosla afzai ka shukria ,mujhe sach main khushi hoi ,anas ji plz aap bhi kuch likheye jub aap kuch likhain gey apne baare main kuch batain gey tu hi aap ke leye koi takhalus sooch sakon gi wese main es kabil nahi leekin mushwara zroor don gi ,leekin abhi main kuch nahi maswara de sakti ,plz mujhe yakeen hai aap log meri esi turran hosla afzai kurain gey .anas ji yeh sahir woh wale sahir nahi hain jo bohet burhe shair hain ,hain tu yeh bhi shair ,muger woh nahi ,
wafa ab kahaan hoti hai ,
tu aap bataeye keya ab wafa kaheen hoti hai keya ,
any way
take care
bye
wafa
'''' hunsoo aaj etna ke es shor main
'''''' sada siskeoon ki sunai na de

suman · 12:46 PM

assalam walikkum everybody.
hum to abhi naye hain is site mein wafa ji to hum kya aapke umda shayriyon pe apni opinion pesh kare?? par hum sirf itna keh sakte hain ki bahutt hi khoob likha hai aapne. bahut hi umda likha hai aapne.hume to bahutt pasand aaya. Humne bhi kuch likhi hai wafa ji aap zaroor hume batayiyega ki aapko kaisa laga.
ummeed hai aap hume apni raay zaroor batayenge.
anas ji hume bhi aapke shers ka intezar hai

***
Kyon chup-chup ke roya karte ho,
Kyon ghut-ghut ke tadpa karte ho,
Le chal hume bhi apne gum ki dariya mein,
Kyon reh-reh ke tarsa karte ho.....!!!

***
Hum chod chale hain mehfil ko,
Yaad aaye kabhi to mat rona!!!

***
wasim ki pyaar
Zindagi Hai.. Isiliye jiye ja rahe hain...!!!

khuda haafiz
suman

allahabadrptds · **NICE -** 1st February 2003, 02:05 PM

hello WAFA ji

IT is one of very nice creations i've ever come acrossed

sach boloon to aapki bhoolne ki is adaa par to hum fida ho gaye

+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
aviral

wafa · **salam -** 1st February 2003, 08:34 PM

hi anas ji !
kease hain aap ?
aap ne bilkul theek kaha ke main yehi kahon gi ke aap ne jo kehna hai yahaan kahain ,
mera nahi kheyaal ke main aapko mail kur paoon gi ,bura luge tu i'm sorry , muger aap yaheen baat kurain ,
any way
thanx
bye

zehr milta raha zehr peete rahe
roz marte rahe roz jeete rahe
zindagi bhi humain azmati rahi
oor hum bhi ese azmaate rahe
take care ,bye
wafa

wafa · **hi -** 4th February 2003, 12:59 PM

salam!
anas ji kease hain aap ?

uger aapko mujhe kuch batana nahi hai tu bar bar mail kurne ka kyon bolte hain main ne tu sirf esi leye aapko bola ke aap hi kur lain mail,kyon ke main tu nahi kuron gi ,any way lugta hai aap apni shaiyri humain nahi sunana chahte ya phir yeh bhi hosakta hai woh jo aap likhte hon sirf kisi ek keleye mukhsos ho oor kisi ko sunana nahi chahte ,chulain jease aapki murzee ,hum mujbore nahi kurte ,
khush rahye bas yehi dua hai ,
oor salam romana ji !

keasi hain aap ,aap bohet acha likhti hain ,oor sab ki hosla afzai bhi kurti hain yeh bohet achi baat hai ,wese romana ji lugta hai anas ji chupe rustam hain yeh jub kuch likhain gey na tu hum sab ko chunka dain gey ,ese logoon ke dil main bohet kuch hota hai bas bahir nikalne ka raasta hona chaeye ,jease hi enhon ne ek bar likha tu bas phir yeh likhte hi jain gey ,wese aap donoo bohet ache ho ,bulke bohet ache ho bas humari dua hai aap log humesha khush rhain ,take care
bye
wafa

Ishiqka · **Anas ji -** 5th February 2003, 05:39 AM

as u said to edit it. i think its well written just some punctuation marks otherwise its totally fine. i hope u write more, take care
Ishiqka

wafa · **salam -** 5th February 2003, 08:30 AM

anas ji !
aap ne tu kamal kur dia aap tu bohet acha likhte ho ,main ne kaha tha na ease log jub likhte hain tu chunka dete hain ,aap sach main bohet acha likhte ho ,mujhe tu koi kami es main nazer nahi aati ,aap ne acha likha oor llikhte rahe entzar rahe ga,
take care
bye
wafa

wafa · 5th February 2003, 11:45 AM

ok anas ji aap ne jis ke leye bhi likha acha likha,hum ustad na sahi par jo acha likhe ga oosko acha bolain gey zroor,woh aap hon ya zeshan,zeba romana ya jo bhi ho,hum tarif zroor kurain gey

be happy,uger aap nahi chahte ke main aapki shayri ki tarif kuron ,tu sach main achi cheez ki tarif zroor kurti hon ,han bura likho gey tu nahi kuron gi
jease pehle likha tha jo bhi main kuch nahi kaha tha ,
es leye hum tarif kurain gey aap chahin ya na chahin
bye
wafa

wafa · **salam -** 5th February 2003, 06:39 PM

anas ji mera nahi kheyaal ke main ne kuch ghult keh dia hai,
ok its my last reply main ab aapki shayri achi bhi lugi tu kuch nahi likhon gi na tarif oor eslah kurne ke kabil main kahan,
bye and take care

wafa
----------------------------
hi romana ji!
keasi hain aap ?
aap ne kaha aap donoo larh kyon rahe ho tu mera nahi kheyaal ke main ne koi larhai ki wese bhi larahi tu apno se hoti hai mera anas ji se taluq sirf shyri .com ki waja se tha humari na kubhi dosti thi na hi ab koi larhai ,
main tu bas ek achi shayri ki tarif kur rahi thi ,anas ji ne esko ghult samjh lia ke shaid main oon ko tung kur rahi hon,
aap bhi kuch mazeed likheye na humain entezar hai ,
ok take care
bye
wafa

a_khushi2001 · **hey wafa -** 5th February 2003, 09:44 PM

hi wafa ji
bahutt khoob likha hai aap ne aap ke pyaar karne ka andazz pasand aaya
lekin wafa ji aap bahut santi hoo logon ki baataon per dhyaan mat diyaa karo unhe to aadat hoti hai mazzak karne ki.mian shayed bahut bol rahin hoon sorry
waise aap ne thik kahan humare ustadd to waqt aur halat hote hai
likhte rahiyye
bye
khushi
--------
"mera yaar milade mujhe ko doo lakhe duwayee tujh koooo"

wafa · **hi -** 6th February 2003, 09:11 PM

hi!khushi
how r u ?
thanx aapko mera andaz pasand aaya ,warna main nahi samjhti ke kuch ziada acha likha main ne ,yeh tu aap sab dostoon ki hosla afzai hai ,thanx,aapne bilkul thik kaha main logoon ki baatain sunti hon mujhe easi baaton par tawjo hi nahi deni chaeye ,ab nahi don gi ,mujhe umeed hai aap meri hosla afzai kurte rahain ge sab log,
be happy
take care
bye

wafa

wafa · **hello -** 6th February 2003, 09:27 PM

hi!
romana ji keasi hain aap?
sorry reply late kur rahi hon bas thora bzi thi romana ji aap befiker rahin ab larai nahi hogi larai pehle bhi nahi thi ab bhi nahi hai or na hi hogi kisi se bhi nahi ,main bohet kuch jan chuki hon ,khair jub bhi aap farigh hon tu kuch likhain zroor aajkul main bhi kuch nahi likh pa rahi leekin bohet juld kuch na try kuron gi ,take care
bye

wafa

m_kashif17 · **wafa jo ab hoti nahi ------ ? -** 24th May 2007, 06:02 PM

Why
wafa jo ab hoti nahi ------ ?

sunita thakur · 31st July 2008, 02:56 PM

bahut acche ahsaas hai wafa ji.....