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Lightbulb my first lines - 23rd November 2005, 06:23 PM

hi! every one i am a new member.

i want to be friend with u all.
i am contributing few lines.please red them.

kya khata huyi humse jo unhone baat karna chhod diya...
rahon mai koi mod bhi na aaya aur unhone sath chhod diya..
eaisa laga jaise sahil pe bane aasiyane ko khud laharon ne tod diya
gar kaha hota ek bar tune ki rahana mujhe isi aasiyane mai...
to lahren kya tufan bhi dekh leta ki kitna dum is deewane mai hai...
   
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23rd November 2005, 06:55 PM

hello vijay ji....
welcome to shayri.com...
its a pleasure to read u...well written...
i'm sure u wud make many wonderful friends here...
take care


Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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