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18th October 2014, 01:02 PM
Khud se mujhko ek shikayat,Kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai...
Aasmaan ke chand ki chahat,Kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Jiski nazar ne kabhi na dekha,Tarasati meri nazron ko.. us dilbar ke deed se rahat,Kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Khushi mili to raas na aayi,Gam se hi yaree kar li.. nadaan dil ki aisi aadat,kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Milne ko to khoob mile hain,Log hame bhi rahon me.. Lekin us kafir se mohabbat,Kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Aksar bheega milta hai sirhane ka takiya bhi.. Ishq me dil ki aisi haalat kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai.. Lakh bura ho par na jane kyon vo mujhko bhata hai.. Pyaar usi se meri ibadat kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Yoon to dil sab janta hai farebi duniya ki batein Dil todne ki use ijazat kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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18th October 2014, 04:39 PM
Madhu jee
Namaste Aik achchhi koshish ...dil se daad Khush rahiye...apnaa khayaal rakhen Duaaon ke saath ijaazat Aapka Dhaval |
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18th October 2014, 07:26 PM
fir se kamaal kiya hai aapne....vo hee shabdo kee jaaduguri.....aur ehsaason ka sangam.....bejod..adbhut....kalaam
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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18th October 2014, 08:36 PM
behad behad ummdaah peshkash rahi aapki madhu saahibaa..... dil bhar aaya mera is kalaam par....
ummdah jazbaaat aaur andaaze bayaN..... bas likhtii rahiyega.. aur apna khoob khayaal rakhiyegaa... Shaad...... |
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19th October 2014, 12:37 AM
Madhu jee Aadaab ... ! Waah jee kyaa kahne behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal aur umdaa bayaani ... Ek khoobsurat radiff par kafi umdaa sher kahe hai aapne ... Is khoob kalaam par meri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ... Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye ... Shaad O aabaad rahiye ... Khuda Hafez ...  
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20th October 2014, 11:49 PM
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yoon hi sath dete rahein... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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21st October 2014, 12:06 AM
aur aaj bhii haii..
Wahhhhhh! Madhu jee.. Kia baat haii.... Bohat bohat khoob.... Kamal ka andaaz-e-bayaa raha.. Bohat lutf diya aap ke iss haseeN kalaam nay... Teh-e-dil so nikli dherooN daad qabool kejiye.. Likhty rahiye, Regards, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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19th December 2014, 04:45 PM
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khush rahiye aate rahiye... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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19th December 2014, 05:43 PM
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
Madhu ji......behad umda gazal...... Ye ehsaas choo gaye dil ko.... Beshumaar daad Aapka apna Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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20th December 2014, 11:22 AM
Dear Madhu....bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne, accha lga aapko padna...ham aapki es gazal ko Shayri.com ke facebook ke offical page par share kar rhe hai.
god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Khud se mujh ko eik shikaayat.. |
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Khud se mujh ko eik shikaayat.. -
20th December 2014, 11:55 AM
Madhu ji, aadaab!
Aap ki Ghazal paRhii aur pasand aayii Aap ne radeef baRii hi achChhii chuni hai Aur zameen bhi zarKhez hai, Aap is meN aur bhi gul khilaa sakti haiN Meri aap se darKhwast hai kih aap is meN do-chaar aur bhi ash’ar joR deN (aap zaruur is ke qaabil haiN) Sirf behtar ravaanii ke liye – aap ke Khayaalaat ko barqaraar rakhte hu’e, kuChh maamulii si tarmeem yaa sujhaao yahaaN likh rahaa huuN gar qubuul uftaad! (Ummid hai kih yeh aap par giraaN nahiiN guzregi) -------------------------------------------------------------------- Khud se mujhko ek shikayat,Kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai... Aasmaan ke chand ki chahat,Kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Khud se mujh ko eik shikaayat, kal bhi thii aur aaj bhi hai Aasmaan ke Chaand ki chaahat kal bhi thii aur aaj bhi hai aap kaa matla' bahot achChhaa hai, is meN ko'ii tabdeeli ki zaruurat nahiiN hai --------------- Uski nazar ne kabhi na dekha,Tarasati meri nazron ko.. Dilbar ke deedar se rahat,Kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. jis ki nazar ne kabhii nah dekhaa meri tarsi aankhoN meN us dilbar ke deed se raaHat kal bhi thii aur aaj bhi hai! ------------------ Khushi mili to raas na aayi,Gam hans ke ye apnaye.. nadaan dil ki aisi aadat,kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Khushii milee to raas nah aayii, Gham se hi yaarii kar lee naadaaN dil ki aisii aadat, kal bhi thii aur aaj bhi hai ---------------------- Milne ko to khoob mile hain,Log hame bhi rahon me.. Us sangdil se hi mohabbat,Kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Milne ko to Khuub milay haiN log hameN bhi raaHo meN Lekin us kaafir se muHabbat, kal bhi thii aur aaj bhi hai! ================================================== == |
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20th December 2014, 05:08 PM
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Aapne meri gazal par itna vaqt diya...tah e dil se shukra guzar hoon....aapke diye huye suggestions ko dhyaan me rakh kar..kuch ashhaar aur likhne ki koshish karoongi.. Aapne is qaabil samjha inayat hai aapki... aage bhi aapse aise hi sath ki umeed krti hoon.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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thnks for sharing it on official page... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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yoon hi sath dete rahiyega.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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6th January 2015, 06:57 PM
Kuch ashaar aur likhne ki mamooli si koshish ki hai doston..ummeed hai aapko pasand aayenge..
Khud se mujhko ek shikayat,Kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai... Aasmaan ke chand ki chahat,Kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Jiski nazar ne kabhi na dekha,Tarasati meri nazron ko.. us dilbar ke deed se rahat,Kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Khushi mili to raas na aayi,Gam se hi yaree kar li.. nadaan dil ki aisi aadat,kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Milne ko to khoob mile hain,Log hame bhi rahon me.. Lekin us kafir se mohabbat,Kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Aksar bheega milta hai sirhane ka takiya bhi.. Ishq me dil ki aisi haalat kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai.. Lakh bura ho par na jane kyon vo mujhko bhata hai.. Pyaar usi se meri ibadat kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Yoon to dil sab janta hai farebi duniya ki batein Dil todne ki use ijazat kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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aapko kalaam pasand aaya bahut khushi huyi...maaf kijiyega bahut der se reply kar pa rahi hoon... ummeed hai aage bhi aapki daad hasil hogi.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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20th June 2015, 11:28 AM
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Waahh.. Kyaa likha hai. Kamaal he kamaal hai bas. Aapke kalam ki dhaar din-ba-din tez hoti jaa rahi hai. Khudaa kare aur bhi tez hotii jaaye. likhte rahiye. **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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20th July 2015, 03:44 PM
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is kadar hausla afzai ka shukriya ada karne ke liye alfaz nahi hain mere paas yoon hee aate rahein...sath dete rahein... salamat rahein.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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21st July 2015, 01:22 AM
Waah madhu ji bahaut khoob...bahaut accaha likha hai aapne. Har ek sher dil ko chu gaya.
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21st July 2015, 11:28 AM
wah madhu jee achha likha hai aapne har sher dil ke kareeb raha
aise hi likhti rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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31st July 2015, 07:09 PM
Madhu ji, padhkar aapko bahaut accaha laga...aapka likha hamesha hi behad khoobsoorat hota hai...yeh lines kuch jyada hi dil ko chu gayin.
Lakh bura ho par na jane kyon vo mujhko bhata hai.. Pyaar usi se meri ibadat kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Yoon to dil sab janta hai farebi duniya ki batein Dil todne ki use ijazat kal bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Shukriya isse share karne ke liye. Jiya |
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Mafi chahti hun...nazar chook gayi jawaab na de saki pahle अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Bahut shukriya aapke pyaar aur sath ka..... Apki Madhubala.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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12th July 2016, 03:19 PM
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bahot shukriya sahab.... aate rahiye padhte rahiye.. taki likhne ka hausla bana rahe... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Do do baar hausla afzai ka dil se shukriya dear... Aati raha karo... Achcha lagta hai.. Tkcr Madhu अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Bahot dino ke baad aaye hain aap....khushi huyi ki aapne vaqt nikalkar meei koshish ko padha aur apni rai di.... Behad shukriya.. Salamat rahein.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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