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Loneliness...no more! - 20th May 2005, 05:11 PM

Loneliness...no more!

At times it seems that a mirror divides us...
And now you say:
"It’s all finished"
I know ... I have also tried
to say this so many times.

But your words are a bridge
for the emotions, and we meet there,
and now I see your float on that beach again,
in some angle of the mind...!
I will wait for you,
every time that you will want,
on this sensory bridge.

We will meet again,
crossing the frontiers of a virtual world
that is not this, but the reality…

You exist because you already know
the script of this sad performance.
You exist because you have jumped
the obstacle of hypocrisy.
You exist because you give life
to the withered flower of my soul...
You exist for endless motives.

Every now and then
I will lit on a fire on the beach,
if you will want to stop...
and I won't be again destined
to wander in loneliness
ancient labyrinths of my memory,
because you will accompany me down there


Thanks...

Amanush...


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Hi Amanush... bhai

Bahut khoob... Wonderful...

Loneliness is lonely no more...

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Re: Loneliness...no more! - 20th May 2005, 06:08 PM

Every now and then
I will lit on a fire on the beach,
if you will want to stop...
and I won't be again destined
to wander in loneliness
ancient labyrinths of my memory,
because you will accompany me down there

Quite different from others!

first i read ur Untitled...the name was simply eye catching!

how culd i stop myself frm coming 2 this post....I liked it


[color=dark brown]Mujhse pehle kitne shayar aaye aur aa kar chale gaye,
Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye,

Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon,
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20th May 2005, 07:25 PM

At times it seems that a mirror divides us...
And now you say:
"It’s all finished"
I know ... I have also tried
to say this so many times.

Aaaahh... Well Said!!


But your words are a bridge
for the emotions, and we meet there,
and now I see your float on that beach again,
in some angle of the mind...!
I will wait for you,
every time that you will want,
on this sensory bridge.

Beautiful!


We will meet again,
crossing the frontiers of a virtual world
that is not this, but the reality…

You exist because you already know
the script of this sad performance.
You exist because you have jumped
the obstacle of hypocrisy.
You exist because you give life
to the withered flower of my soul...
You exist for endless motives.

Classsiiccc.... Love these lines... beautifully written


Every now and then
I will lit on a fire on the beach,
if you will want to stop...
and I won't be again destined
to wander in loneliness
ancient labyrinths of my memory,
because you will accompany me down there

Wonderfulll!!

Bhaiya!

Another masterpiece flowing down from ur pen... I simpy loved this one 2.... So so well expressed.... Do accept my praises... aise hi likhte rhaiye.. do TC


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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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Re: Loneliness...no more! - 20th May 2005, 07:33 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Amanush...
Loneliness...no more!

At times it seems that a mirror divides us...
And now you say:
"It’s all finished"
I know ... I have also tried
to say this so many times.

But your words are a bridge
for the emotions, and we meet there,
and now I see your float on that beach again,
in some angle of the mind...!
I will wait for you,
every time that you will want,
on this sensory bridge.

We will meet again,
crossing the frontiers of a virtual world
that is not this, but the reality…

You exist because you already know
the script of this sad performance.
You exist because you have jumped
the obstacle of hypocrisy.
You exist because you give life
to the withered flower of my soul...
You exist for endless motives.

Every now and then
I will lit on a fire on the beach,
if you will want to stop...
and I won't be again destined
to wander in loneliness
ancient labyrinths of my memory,
because you will accompany me down there


Thanks...

Amanush...
dear amanush,
wow exceleent flow of thoughts. just loved reading each word of it. do keep writing such masterpiece. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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wah chachu!!!!! bhot hi acha likha hai apne!!!!!!!


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21st May 2005, 12:20 AM

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Hi Amanush... bhai

Bahut khoob... Wonderful...

Loneliness is lonely no more...

Thanks
Rohin
Dhanyavaad...Rohin Bhai!

(Hamein aapke Amanush bhai hi rehne dijiye )

Amanush Bhai...



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Re: Re: Loneliness...no more! - 21st May 2005, 12:25 AM

Quote:
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Every now and then
I will lit on a fire on the beach,
if you will want to stop...
and I won't be again destined
to wander in loneliness
ancient labyrinths of my memory,
because you will accompany me down there

Quite different from others!

first i read ur Untitled...the name was simply eye catching!

how culd i stop myself frm coming 2 this post....I liked it
Thank you for appreciating...Shalini ji! and also for having
taken time to read "Untitled"!

Take care and keep coming...

Amanush...



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21st May 2005, 12:30 AM

Bhaiya!

Another masterpiece flowing down from ur pen... I simpy loved this one 2.... So so well expressed.... Do accept my praises... aise hi likhte rhaiye.. do TC


Chote Bhaiya...!

Your praises rejoice my heart...so do keep showering
them on me... !

Amanush Bhaiya...



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Re: Re: Loneliness...no more! - 21st May 2005, 12:34 AM

dear amanush,
wow exceleent flow of thoughts. just loved reading each word of it. do keep writing such masterpiece. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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Ruhani ji...!

Aap ko yahan dekh kar hum bahout khoush houe...Your
comments are highly appreciated.

Take good care of yourself and keep coming...!

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wah chachu!!!!! bhot hi acha likha hai apne!!!!!!!
Meri pyaari Betiyaa...!

Chachu ki kavita pasand karne ke
liye bahout shukriya...

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Hi Amanush

hhm this poem is different form some of what u wrote before. what i lkiked best was this verse

" You exist because you already know
the script of this sad performance.
You exist because you have jumped
the obstacle of hypocrisy.
You exist because you give life
to the withered flower of my soul...
You exist for endless motives"

somehow its so poignant. keep writing

Munnia


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