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~*itne sitam na kiijiye...*~ - 7th June 2015, 12:54 PM

Itane sitam na kiijiye sahmaa huaa hoon main,
Apne chaman ka phool ek murjhaa huaa hoon main..

Gumnaamiyon ne mujhko mitaa daala thaa magar,
Koiii kah rahaa tha aaj ke dekhaa huaa hoon main..

Mujhko nahii khabar ke kahaan ab miloongaa main,
Alfaaz pe ik nazm ke bikhraa huaa hoon main.

Aye neend rab ka waastaa hai laut jaa waapas,
Is waqt uskii yaad me khoyaa huaa hoon main..

Aye baade-sabaa* tum jo uske shahr ko jaanaa,
Kah denaa ke ab sookh ke kaantaa huaa hoon main..

Aa jaaun abhii dauD ke gir jaaun kadam pe ,
Bas ek anaa* k waaste thahraa huaa hoon main..


Shaad....



Baade- sabaa - morning breeze
Anaa- ego , proud, dignity, self respect.


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7th June 2015, 01:26 PM

Waaaahh!! bahut khoob kalaam hua hai shaad jii..jitna ishq utna hee dard..kamaal ke ehsaas..yoon to sabhi ashaar dil par chhap chhoD gaye...par ye kuch sher bahut bahut khoob rahe..

Mujhko nahii khabar ke kahaan ab miloongaa main,
Lafzon pe apnii nazm ke bikhraa huaa hoon main.

Aye neend rab ka waastaa hai laut jaa waapas,
Is waqt uskii yaad me khoyaa huaa hoon main..


Aur ye ek sher hakikat ke bahut kareeb..apni hee khami bade pyaar se pesh ki hai aapne..


Aa jaaun abhii dauD ke gir jaaun kadam pe ,
Bas ek anaa* k waaste thahraa huaa hoon main..

Bahut sari daad aur duayein..aapke kalaam par likhte rahein..
shaad rahein...



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7th June 2015, 06:10 PM

Shoiab bhai ko mera salaam.....its feel very nice to read u......inspiring...charismatic.... energetic...and full of emotions.....liked it as always.....yun hee likhte rahiye...aur Sdc kee shaan badate rahiye......



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7th June 2015, 09:59 PM

Shad bhai bahut rumani ghazal likhi aapne..makta bahut lasand aya.

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Waaaahh!! bahut khoob kalaam hua hai shaad jii..jitna ishq utna hee dard..kamaal ke ehsaas..yoon to sabhi ashaar dil par chhap chhoD gaye...par ye kuch sher bahut bahut khoob rahe..

Mujhko nahii khabar ke kahaan ab miloongaa main,
Lafzon pe apnii nazm ke bikhraa huaa hoon main.

Aye neend rab ka waastaa hai laut jaa waapas,
Is waqt uskii yaad me khoyaa huaa hoon main..


Aur ye ek sher hakikat ke bahut kareeb..apni hee khami bade pyaar se pesh ki hai aapne..


Aa jaaun abhii dauD ke gir jaaun kadam pe ,
Bas ek anaa* k waaste thahraa huaa hoon main..

Bahut sari daad aur duayein..aapke kalaam par likhte rahein..
shaad rahein...
Mahfil ki shaan, aur bazm ki jaan , madhu saahibaa tak is nachheez ka salaam pahuche........

aapki inaayat aur mehrbaanii jo mere kalaa pe haasil huii hai main tahe dil se aapkaa ehsaanmand ho gayaa hoon....... aur intekhaabii sher kii jaanib se aapkaa tahe dil se mashkoor hoon......

aur aakhri sher waqai mere dil ke bhii behad kareeb hai..... insaan chahtaa to bahut hai ke saare bandhan tod ke dil ka gubar nikaal de....... lekin uski majbuuriyaan use rok leti hain......

ummeed karta hoon aage bhi aapka saath aur khuloos haasil hotaa rahegaa...... aapna khayal rakhiyegaa... khush rahiye

Shaad......


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Behad nayab gazal kahi Sameer bhai.....behad umdah....waaaah...yooN to har sher lajawab hai....magar is sher pe khas daad dena chahunga...


Gumnaamiyon ne mujhko mitaa daala thaa magar,
Koiii kah rahaa tha aaj ke dekhaa huaa hoon main..


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Shoiab bhai ko mera salaam.....its feel very nice to read u......inspiring...charismatic.... energetic...and full of emotions.....liked it as always.....yun hee likhte rahiye...aur Sdc kee shaan badate rahiye......

bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka Aru bhai......

padhne ke liye, pasand karne ke liye aur apnii daad se nawaazne ke liye..... tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon aapka.... aate rahen


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wah shaad bhai bahut khoob aapka likha hamesha hi pasand aata hai is baar bhi dil ke kreeb raha
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Dheron daad...Sanjay Sehgal
behad shukriyaa aapkaa Sanjay saahab........... yunhhi duaaon me yaa rakkhen....

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8th June 2015, 10:16 PM

Wow Shaad

Khoobsurat nazm.Zindagi ki gehri kahani si.keep it up.

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Itane sitam na kiijiye sahmaa huaa hoon main,
Apne chaman ka phool ek murjhaa huaa hoon main..

Gumnaamiyon ne mujhko mitaa daala thaa magar,
Koiii kah rahaa tha aaj ke dekhaa huaa hoon main..

Mujhko nahii khabar ke kahaan ab miloongaa main,
Lafzon pe apnii nazm ke bikhraa huaa hoon main.

Aye neend rab ka waastaa hai laut jaa waapas,
Is waqt uskii yaad me khoyaa huaa hoon main..

Aye baade-sabaa* tum jo uske shahr ko jaanaa,
Kah denaa ke ab sookh ke kaantaa huaa hoon main..

Aa jaaun abhii dauD ke gir jaaun kadam pe ,
Bas ek anaa* k waaste thahraa huaa hoon main..


Shaad....



Baade- sabaa - morning breeze
Anaa- ego , proud, dignity, self respect.

Bahut khoob ehsaasat huye hai Shaad bhai aur beher ki baarikyon ka bhi bahut hadd tak dhaayan rakha hai aapne...yeh ek sher dil ko teer ki tarah aar paar kar gaya..Behad umdaa mere bhai yunhi hi mashaallah nagmon se is mehfil ko nawaazte rahiYeGaa

Mujhko nahii khabar ke kahaan ab miloongaa main,
Lafzon pe apnii nazm ke bikhraa huaa hoon main.



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Behad nayab gazal kahi Sameer bhai.....behad umdah....waaaah...yooN to har sher lajawab hai....magar is sher pe khas daad dena chahunga...


Gumnaamiyon ne mujhko mitaa daala thaa magar,
Koiii kah rahaa tha aaj ke dekhaa huaa hoon main..


Daad kubul farmaiyega
Aapka apna
Bhushan

inaayaton se mamnoon hoon aapkaa bhushan saahab..... aapne kalaam ko padhaa aur saraaha ye meri khsuhnaseebii hai aage bhi aapki aamad ke intezaar me rahungaa..... aate rahiyegaa....

Shaad.......


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Wow Shaad

Khoobsurat nazm.Zindagi ki gehri kahani si.keep it up.

take care
sukanya dee.......... manny thanks to you... aap aayeen yahii mere liye bahut badee khushnaseebii hai....

aatii rahiyegaa regular pahle ki hi tarah..... duaa me yaad rakhiyegaa

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Bahut khoob ehsaasat huye hai Shaad bhai aur beher ki baarikyon ka bhi bahut hadd tak dhaayan rakha hai aapne...yeh ek sher dil ko teer ki tarah aar paar kar gaya..Behad umdaa mere bhai yunhi hi mashaallah nagmon se is mehfil ko nawaazte rahiYeGaa

Mujhko nahii khabar ke kahaan ab miloongaa main,
Lafzon pe apnii nazm ke bikhraa huaa hoon main.
aapki inaayaton se mashkoor hoon mast saahab..... aate rahiyegaa... duaa me yaad rakhiye....

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Itane sitam na kiijiye sahmaa huaa hoon main,
Apne chaman ka phool ek murjhaa huaa hoon main..

Gumnaamiyon ne mujhko mitaa daala thaa magar,
Koiii kah rahaa tha aaj ke dekhaa huaa hoon main..

Mujhko nahii khabar ke kahaan ab miloongaa main,
Lafzon pe apnii nazm ke bikhraa huaa hoon main.

Aye neend rab ka waastaa hai laut jaa waapas,
Is waqt uskii yaad me khoyaa huaa hoon main..

Aye baade-sabaa* tum jo uske shahr ko jaanaa,
Kah denaa ke ab sookh ke kaantaa huaa hoon main..

Aa jaaun abhii dauD ke gir jaaun kadam pe ,
Bas ek anaa* k waaste thahraa huaa hoon main..


Shaad....



Baade- sabaa - morning breeze
Anaa- ego , proud, dignity, self respect.



wahhhhhhhhhhh Shaad bhai......simply superb


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Itane sitam na kiijiye sahmaa huaa hoon main,
Apne chaman ka phool ek murjhaa huaa hoon main..

Gumnaamiyon ne mujhko mitaa daala thaa magar,
Koiii kah rahaa tha aaj ke dekhaa huaa hoon main..

Mujhko nahii khabar ke kahaan ab miloongaa main,
Lafzon pe apnii nazm ke bikhraa huaa hoon main.

Aye neend rab ka waastaa hai laut jaa waapas,
Is waqt uskii yaad me khoyaa huaa hoon main..

Aye baade-sabaa* tum jo uske shahr ko jaanaa,
Kah denaa ke ab sookh ke kaantaa huaa hoon main..

Aa jaaun abhii dauD ke gir jaaun kadam pe ,
Bas ek anaa* k waaste thahraa huaa hoon main..


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wahhhhhhhhhhh Shaad bhai......simply superb
Aapki inaayaton se mamnoon hoon Sunitaa dee......

bahut khushi huii ye jaankar ke aapko ye adnaa si koshish pasand aayee... aatii rahiyegaa


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Gumnaamiyon ne mujhko mitaa daala thaa magar,
Koiii kah rahaa tha aaj ke dekhaa huaa hoon main..



waah Shaad Bhai bahut khub ye sher dil ko chuuu gaya or apki puri gazal behad khubsurat or roohani mehsus huyi..
aap m sach m haqiqat ko alfaazo m pirone ka ek alag hi hunar hai..
ise banaye rakhe or yu hi likhte rahe..
kush rahe.. Dua hai humari..


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Gumnaamiyon ne mujhko mitaa daala thaa magar,
Koiii kah rahaa tha aaj ke dekhaa huaa hoon main..



waah Shaad Bhai bahut khub ye sher dil ko chuuu gaya or apki puri gazal behad khubsurat or roohani mehsus huyi..
aap m sach m haqiqat ko alfaazo m pirone ka ek alag hi hunar hai..
ise banaye rakhe or yu hi likhte rahe..
kush rahe.. Dua hai humari..

taabaah saahab aapkaa replyy padh kar dil ko itnaa sukoon haasil ho rahaa hai ke main bayaan nahi kar saktaa.....

aapne jis sher ka zikr kiyaa hai, asal me wo sher khud mere dil ke behad kareeb rahaa hai... aur yaqeen maniyegaa ye poori ghazal bas isi ek sher ke liye maine bana daalii hai..... kyunki is ghazal ka sabse pahla sher bhi yahii huaa thaa......

aisaa lag rahaaa hai ke aapne dil ke taaron ko chuu liyaa ho... aur gahraai me utar koi motee churaa laaen ho.... bahut bahut shukriyaa aapkaa aur beshumaar inaayaten huiin hain aapki mujh par.... aate rahiyeegaa

khush rahiye

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taabaah saahab aapkaa replyy padh kar dil ko itnaa sukoon haasil ho rahaa hai ke main bayaan nahi kar saktaa.....

aapne jis sher ka zikr kiyaa hai, asal me wo sher khud mere dil ke behad kareeb rahaa hai... aur yaqeen maniyegaa ye poori ghazal bas isi ek sher ke liye maine bana daalii hai..... kyunki is ghazal ka sabse pahla sher bhi yahii huaa thaa......

aisaa lag rahaaa hai ke aapne dil ke taaron ko chuu liyaa ho... aur gahraai me utar koi motee churaa laaen ho.... bahut bahut shukriyaa aapkaa aur beshumaar inaayaten huiin hain aapki mujh par.... aate rahiyeegaa

khush rahiye

Shaad....
Shukiya Shaad bhai, Kushi huyi jankar ki ye sher apko b pasand tha. Mujhe bahut kushi huyi ki meri wajeh se apko acha mehsus hua..


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Ek aur pur asar, munfarid kalaam keliye dil se daad huzoor.
Yeh teen ash'aar khaas pasand aaye.


Mujhko nahii khabar ke kahaan ab miloongaa main,
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Aye baade-sabaa* tum jo uske shahr ko jaanaa,
Kah denaa ke ab sookh ke kaantaa huaa hoon main..

Aa jaaun abhii dauD ke gir jaaun kadam pe ,
Bas ek anaa* k waaste thahraa huaa hoon main..

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aapkii zarra nawaazii hai.......... taashreef laate rahiye

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Yeh teen ash'aar khaas pasand aaye.


Mujhko nahii khabar ke kahaan ab miloongaa main,
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Aye baade-sabaa* tum jo uske shahr ko jaanaa,
Kah denaa ke ab sookh ke kaantaa huaa hoon main..

Aa jaaun abhii dauD ke gir jaaun kadam pe ,
Bas ek anaa* k waaste thahraa huaa hoon main..

Yunhi likhte raheiN.

aapkii inaayaten sar aankhon par mere bhai............... aapne jin aashaar par khaas tavajjoh dii hai us jaanib se main aapkaa lakh lakh shukrguzaar hoon.... aate rahiyegaa....

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Shoaib,

Bahut hi umda kalaam pesh kiya hai tumne... bahut hi accha laga padhkar!

Aye neend rab ka waastaa hai laut jaa waapas,
Is waqt uskii yaad me khoyaa huaa hoon main..

Aye baade-sabaa* tum jo uske shahr ko jaanaa,
Kah denaa ke ab sookh ke kaantaa huaa hoon main..


Yeh sher khaaskar bahut pasand aaya mujhe... yun hi likhte raho, khayal rakho!


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Bahut hi umda kalaam pesh kiya hai tumne... bahut hi accha laga padhkar!

Aye neend rab ka waastaa hai laut jaa waapas,
Is waqt uskii yaad me khoyaa huaa hoon main..

Aye baade-sabaa* tum jo uske shahr ko jaanaa,
Kah denaa ke ab sookh ke kaantaa huaa hoon main..


Yeh sher khaaskar bahut pasand aaya mujhe... yun hi likhte raho, khayal rakho!
behad shukriyaaa aapka pulkit bhaiyaa jo aap merii bazme me tashreef laaye....
bahut khushi ho rahi hai sahi maayne me aaj aapko yahan dekh kar... aate rahiyegaa......

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Shaad...aapka kalaam padh sach maaniye behad khoobsurat hai..khas taur se yeh sher.

Mujhko nahii khabar ke kahaan ab miloongaa main,
Lafzon pe apnii nazm ke bikhraa huaa hoon main.

Aye neend rab ka waastaa hai laut jaa waapas,
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Shaad...aapka kalaam padh sach maaniye behad khoobsurat hai..khas taur se yeh sher.

Mujhko nahii khabar ke kahaan ab miloongaa main,
Lafzon pe apnii nazm ke bikhraa huaa hoon main.

Aye neend rab ka waastaa hai laut jaa waapas,
Is waqt uskii yaad me khoyaa huaa hoon main..

Aise hi likhte rahiye.

sach kahun to aaaj bazm me aapko maujood dekh kar main bataa nahii saktaa ke mujhe kitnee khushii mil rahee hai.... aaj yaqeen huaa ke shaayad maine kuch acchaa likha hogaa tabhi aap ko yahan tak le aane me kaamyaab hua hoon... khush rahiye... aate rahiye..........

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Itane sitam na kiijiye sahmaa huaa hoon main,
Apne chaman ka phool ek murjhaa huaa hoon main..

Gumnaamiyon ne mujhko mitaa daala thaa magar,
Koiii kah rahaa tha aaj ke dekhaa huaa hoon main..

Mujhko nahii khabar ke kahaan ab miloongaa main,
Lafzon pe apnii nazm ke bikhraa huaa hoon main.

Aye neend rab ka waastaa hai laut jaa waapas,
Is waqt uskii yaad me khoyaa huaa hoon main..

Aye baade-sabaa* tum jo uske shahr ko jaanaa,
Kah denaa ke ab sookh ke kaantaa huaa hoon main..

Aa jaaun abhii dauD ke gir jaaun kadam pe ,
Bas ek anaa* k waaste thahraa huaa hoon main..


Shaad....



Baade- sabaa - morning breeze
Anaa- ego , proud, dignity, self respect.
Shaad bhai ...

waaaaahhh! ... aap ny behad umdah ghazal se ru-ba-ru karwaya hai...

tamaam ashaar bohat khoob haiN...
daad haazir hy....

likhte rahiye

salamat rahiye


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Shaad bhai ...

waaaaahhh! ... aap ny behad umdah ghazal se ru-ba-ru karwaya hai...

tamaam ashaar bohat khoob haiN...
daad haazir hy....

likhte rahiye

salamat rahiye

Hassan saahab aadaab.... aapne khaak lafzon ki jo pazeeraai farmaaii hai usse behad mamnoon hoon aapkaa..... tashreef laate rahiyegaa

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Facebook par padha tha isiliye laga ki sdc par bhi pada hai aur mubarakbaad hi nahi di itna acha likhne ke liye.

Muafi chahungi.

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Mazaa aa gaya itna hi kahungi.


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