we are in LOVE...!!

[Taish]

Another one from the old pages, now this one on a totally different track, compared to my writing... I hve no idea how you found find it to be, sorry in advance for the mistakes...


a lover is the 1, who,
shares with me,
the bright sun or,
the gloom.
a lover is 1 with,
love to spare.
as the heart,
has room.

lovers r flowers,
n the time spent toghether,
life's happiest hours.

for all the special,
joys we share.
for all the ways u,
show u care.
for all the times when,
u've been there.
i'm glad,i hav,
ur heart's share.

if we lit loves lamp,
let ne years ago,
it stiil will burn,
brightly,amid,
time's ebb n flow.

we hav grown 2 b 1 soul 2 part,
our lives so interwined,
that when some passion stirs ur heart,
i feel the quake in mine.

when the skies r,
overcast n when,
rain's pouring down.
i wish 2 walk with,
u along,
the whole town.

my dress still smells,
of the perfume u wore.
n now my heart body n soul,
is all just only your.

all my dreams r,
built aroud u.
n i've come 2 know,
that its true.
in my life,
there is no living,
that is not a,
part of u.

only thoughts,
of u remain.
in my heart,
where u had laid them.
others leave me,
all things leave me,
YOU,YOU,YOU,
n only YOU remain.

[Ahmad Hyderabadi]

Originally Posted by Taish

Another one from the old pages, now this one on a totally different track, compared to my writing... I hve no idea how you found find it to be, sorry in advance for the mistakes...


a lover is the 1, who,
shares with me,
the bright sun or,
the gloom.
a lover is 1 with,
love to spare.
as the heart,
has room.

lovers r flowers,
n the time spent toghether,
life's happiest hours.

for all the special,
joys we share.
for all the ways u,
show u care.
for all the times when,
u've been there.
i'm glad,i hav,
ur heart's share.

if we lit loves lamp,
let ne years ago,
it stiil will burn,
brightly,amid,
time's ebb n flow.

we hav grown 2 b 1 soul 2 part,
our lives so interwined,
that when some passion stirs ur heart,
i feel the quake in mine.

when the skies r,
overcast n when,
rain's pouring down.
i wish 2 walk with,
u along,
the whole town.

my dress still smells,
of the perfume u wore.
n now my heart body n soul,
is all just only your.

all my dreams r,
built aroud u.
n i've come 2 know,
that its true.
in my life,
there is no living,
that is not a,
part of u.

only thoughts,
of u remain.
in my heart,
where u had laid them.
others leave me,
all things leave me,
YOU,YOU,YOU,
n only YOU remain.

Allah Allah! Kya baat haye!

Aray bhaeeee...kyooon jaan itnee mushkil mayn daal rahay ho miyaaan? ( Dakni mayn bolta hoon khulkar sorry if have difficulty grasping)?

Akhir mayra kasoor kya haye bhaee?? kya kara maiyn? ayk kay baad ayk zabardast peomaan post kertay jaaray akhir muqablay ka kya hungaa??

In short bhaee mujhay waqaee paseenay aa rahayn hayn 9th January ki date yaad ker.. coz the list has got only 5 slots and already got 6-8 gems on their own including this one of yours... but the only solace is that I am not the jusge there...everyone will cast their vote... but shortlisting will gimme heart attack.......

Great Taish bhaee Hats off! Can't add ny more reps...will wait and do that certainly!


Duagoh
Ahmad

[Hamdam]

Only thougts of u remain in my heart
where you laid them ,others leave me
and only you remain.....

Taish bhai what u wrote is true in ur absence..
But true love is where u give more and
forgive others faults...

Hum intazar karenge tera kayamat tak
khuda kare ki kayamat ho aur tu aye

sanjay sehgal