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Sad halat-e-gujrat - 31st December 2002, 03:10 PM

pesh hai kuch logon ki fitrat jo hamare desh maen hi palte hain.

mujhe yaqeen hai ke aapko bhi yaqeen aayega.


nisar teri gali ke aye watan jis se.

sadi-gali hui lashon ki boo nikalti hai.

yehi gali tera aadarsh hai, namoona hai.

isi gali maen teri tahzib palti hai.

nisar tujh pe aye watan ke tere saputon ne.

baha diya teri galion maen khun ki dhara .

sunayen kya tujhe rudaad een daridon ki.

ke maa ki kokh se bacha nikal kar mara.

nisar tujh pe watan ke ye rahbaran-e-watan.

ye mujremin jinhe shauk hai hikmat ka.

bahut zalil kiya tujh ko bazm-e-alam maen.

mazaq udta raha hai teri siyasat ka.

jahan-jahan bhi tera zikr aye watan nikla.

wahan-wahan pe jhuka lee hai sarm se gardan.

lagai hai aag jab khud hi baghbanon ne.

to kis tarah se bujhega ye shol-e-gulshan.


halaat is qadar majboor karte hain.
insan hi insan ko door karte hain.




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31st December 2002, 03:21 PM

Nice topic to write on..
You've written 'nicely'
Gar waqt ho ga, to check out a ghazal written by "fersahab," on Gujrat; also relatively good!

Likhte rahiye,
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janab sharabi sahab - 31st December 2002, 06:37 PM

janab,

aapne mujh par nazar dali iske lia bahut-bahut sukriya.

aapki mashwire par amal karne ki kosis karoonag.

tanqeed ka muntazir
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