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Sad Naa kar sake.. - 2nd July 2003, 07:55 PM

karte the muhabbat magar ikraar naa kar sake
badkismati humari jo haal-e dil baya naa kar sake

karte rahe tum humse pyaar kaa daava
naada the hum jo badle mein tumhe pyaar na kar sake

khade rahe tum yu hi hatheli per dil liye
majboor the hum jo us dil par apna ikhtiyaar naa kar sake

chhahte the tum humara daaman khushiyon se bharna
patjhar the hum jo jeevan tumhara gul-e gulzaar naa kar sake

mar mite tum us muhabaat ke naam par
gunahgaar the hum jo tere janaje ko aakhiri salaam naa kar sake


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oh - 2nd July 2003, 08:19 PM

pari,
yah kaisi pyaar maie vitambana?
mar mite tum us muhabaat ke naam par
gunahgaar the hum jo tere janaje ko aakhiri salaam naa kar sake

dard ki had paar kar di tumnae to..... aagae kuchh nahi likh paati. sari nazam apne aap maie dard ka baenamoon hai.
   
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2nd July 2003, 09:28 PM

Wah Pari ji ..

Likha to bahut achha hai aapne .. magar aap kuch din se nazar nahi aa rahi thi khair welcome back . .

bahut achha likha hai
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hi - 2nd July 2003, 10:40 PM

hello meena ji,
Bahut shukriya .....aapki daad mil jaye to bas nazm poori ho jaati hai......again thanx for appreciation...
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hi - 2nd July 2003, 10:42 PM

hello kshitiz ji,
kaise hai aap???bahut dino baad aapki shayri padhi....kuch busy thi in dino aur phir shayri.com bhi to band tha....khair phir se aa gayi hoon aapko bor karne.......
aur shukriya nazm padhne kaa...
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Post hi - 3rd July 2003, 05:12 PM

Pari ji,

kai dino se aapka pata nahi tha.chalo aap vapas aa gayi.yahi kya kam hai us per se yah khoobsurat kalaam. ese padh ke man mein ek jajbaat utha jise yahi likh raha hoon.

pyaar ki samajh huie unhe tab
jab sanse nikal gayi thi meri sab




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hi - 3rd July 2003, 08:47 PM

hello akant ji,
Kaise hai aap????acchha laga phir se aapka saath paa kar...

pyaar ki samajh huie unhe tab
jab sanse nikal gayi thi meri sab

bahut achha likha hai aapne....bahut khoob.

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3rd July 2003, 09:22 PM

wahh .. pari aap ne to sach mein bemisaal likha hai kya baat hai pyar mein kitna aage aa gayi aap .. well likha bahut accha hai aur aap se ek baat kahna chahuga ki ye nazm nahin hai ye ghazal hai aur jab koi likhta hai to us ko ye pata hota hai ki nazm hai ya ghazal


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hi - 4th July 2003, 02:17 AM

hello madhegum ji,
Bhai bahut khoob comment likhte hai aap..
lekin maine kabhi aapki likhi koi gazal ya nazm nahi padhi....
kyuki jo shayriyon ki itni achhi jaankaari rakhte hai wo likhte bhi kamaal ka honge......by the way thanx for writting me.
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