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Khayal -
11th June 2004, 05:34 AM
Tere intizar mein kuch khayal aa raha hai
Rootha hai mujse jaise tu nazar aa raha hai Kahi kuch chhupa rahe ho koi baat mujse Aitbar nahi kar rahe ho, humen samaj aa raha hai Koi khata huwi ho to keh do humse Aazma rahe ho humko, khayal aa raha hai Chhura rahe ho daman humse dhire dhire Ab kuch dino se, mere dil ko nazar aa raha hai Jaise toofan aane se pehle samandar shant ho jata hai Shayad meri kashti samandar mein doobne wali hai Yahi soch kar mera jee gabhraa raha hai Tulsika!~ 
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11th June 2004, 10:26 AM
Hey...Tulsiiiiii....( Yahi soch kar mera jee gabhraa raha hai )
gahraa aur to rahii hai.......chall hattttt jhutii kahii kii...  marr matt jayyoo....dil vil tao nahi de baithii kisi ko...in faltoo kai chkar mai pad gayii na tao dekh...fir  Tulsiii ek baat bolun yaar tune likha sach mai achha hai....kaash kabhii tune mujhe soch kar kuch likhaa hota..par kyaa kare bhai....apni apni kismat....chal....koyii baat nahi..iss janam mai nahi agle janam mai...tao purii hogii mere dil ki muraad..issi umid par....baitha hu...  ab jate jate.....thodii sii daad le le mujhse....ache kalaam likhne kai liye......byeeeeeee......JSK! Sanju!!!!! muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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11th June 2004, 07:54 PM
hi tulsika ji.....aapki composition bahut achchi hai!!!!! ....likhti rahiyega...bye 4 now...take care!
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16th June 2004, 02:50 AM
Sanjoo!! sorry bohat dino baat reply kar rahi hoon par yeh post to mere khayal se nikal gayi thi..parr yaad agaya..
 thnx! for the daadd well.....waise to mein kisi ko soch kar likhti nahi hoon...khush dil ho to pyaar pe likhti hoon aur udas ho to yahi judaai etc pe likh leti hoon....u know me rite.. anywayz agar kisi din himmant mili to tujhe soch kar bhi kuch likhungi.... thnx again for replying it... Shivani ji, shukriya jo aapko pasand aaya aur kuch reply mein likha. I will try my best to keep writing. luv, tulsika!~
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17th June 2004, 02:49 AM
Tulsika ji,
Bahut hi pyari nazm pesh ki hai aapne.... Tere intizar mein kuch khayal aa raha hai Rootha hai mujse jaise tu nazar aa raha hai Kahi kuch chhupa rahe ho koi baat mujse Aitbar nahi kar rahe ho, humen samaj aa raha hai Koi khata huwi ho to keh do humse Aazma rahe ho humko, khayal aa raha hai Chhura rahe ho daman humse dhire dhire Ab kuch dino se, mere dil ko nazar aa raha hai Jaise toofan aane se pehle samandar shant ho jata hai Shayad meri kashti samandar mein doobne wali hai Yahi soch kar mera jee gabhraa raha hai Bahut khoob! Keep up the good work! "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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17th June 2004, 09:50 AM
Chahat ji, (Priya right?)
thank you so much for taking the time to read it..and commenting it.. luv, tulsika!~
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20th June 2004, 11:24 AM
Hi Tulsika!!
Hmmmm.. pata hai.. tumhaare ye jo khayaal hain na.. wo kuchh aise hain jo har pyaar narne waala kabhi na kabhi mehsus karta hai.. Hum bhi kar chuke hain.. ye darr, kisi ke rooth jaaneka, kisi ko kho dene ka.. Ye bebasi ke unhe hum par aitbaar nahi.. ki humse koi khata hui jisse wo naraaz hain.. magar hume bataate nahi..ki khata ki maafi maang lein.. unhe mana lein.. ye dheere dheere duuriyon ka baRna.. ye saare ehsaas.. tumhaari nazm me shaamil hain.. aur dil me mehsus hue.. tumne baRe saade alfaaz istemaal kiye hain.. lekin inme behad khubsoorti bhar di tumne.. very well written! |
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20th June 2004, 12:08 PM
hi! Banno ji!
aap yaha? bas heran hoon zara! yehi soch kar ke aap ko humari yeh chhoti si, simple si shayri pasand aayi!!! aur rahi baat yeh khayal ki..to haan sach kaha..sab es dor se guzar te hai..shayad jab mein guzar rahi thi to kuch dard zyada huwa es liye shayri ban gayi but anywayz thnx again!!!luv, tulsika!~
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2nd July 2004, 12:29 AM
"Tujhse daaman chuda ke main kahan jaaongi..
Tujhse khafa ho kar main na ji paaongi.. Roothe to hum kabhi bhi na tumse.. Tujhse juda ho ke main to marr jaaongi..." Bahut khoob likha aapne Tulsi ji Aise hi mehfil sajaate rahiye.. Khush rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Bahut khub -
17th July 2004, 08:03 PM
Bahut khub likha he tulsi aapne wakhi ek arse baad ek achcha sher padne ko mila,ishe pad ker dil khush hogaya gud work keep it up.
" Woh ruthe is kedar ki manaya na gaya! Dur itne ho gaye ki pass bulaya na gaya! Dil to dil tha samunder ka sahil nahin! Likh diya naam to phir mitaya na gaya!! Love, Mukesh |
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23rd July 2004, 02:50 AM
Priya ji...bohat hi shukriya aapka...
and no i didn't mind you signing my guestbook at all.. thanx!~ Mukesh ji, aapka bhi bohat bohat shukriya..jo aapko yeh pasand aayi... luv, tulsika!~
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