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Budhapa (old man) - 24th April 2003, 12:04 PM

Welcome to everyone here. Old man ki thinking ko shayri ka roop de raha hoon. yah meri apne neeji feeling hai. pesh hai..

main apaahij nahi hoon per lag raha hoon,
ummra ke es daur mein majboor ho gaya hoon,

aap jo path ko paar kera rahe hain yah meharbaani hai,
jinda hai ensaniyat abhi yah nishaani hai,

es bhag dauD ki jindagi mein kitane hi ojhal huea,
rah gaye hain vahi yahaN jo nahi bojhal huea

ek jamaana tha jab jajbaat ki kadar hoti thi,
ab to har jagah aukaat ki kadar hoti hai,

log taulate hain ek dusere ko dhan ke sapechh mein,
milta nahi koi jo bacha rahe es achhep se...



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hi - 25th April 2003, 12:05 PM

akhtar ji
aapne apne lafjo se budhape ke jo ahsaas pesh kiye lazawab hai taaarif ke kaabil hai
aise hi hume sher bhejte rahiyega
ek apna likha sher bhej raha hun

ek aisa bhi dor aake gujar gaya ..
duniya chalan pe thi aur hum bekhudi mai the !
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tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko !
meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !!


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27th April 2003, 08:56 PM

Hello Anish jee,

shayri pasand farmaane ka shukriya. main koshis kerunga aage bhi kuchh likhane ki. aapane bhi kuchh hi sabdo mein badi baat kahi hai. likhate rahiye.


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