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sorryyyyyyyyyy - 21st September 2006, 10:09 PM

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har ek nazar jara si thirchi karke jo usne dali,
ek pal main deewane ho gaye unki nazaro.n ke

Kosis ki hai mene fir bhi nehi zam reha maffi chahta hu aap logo ki post kherab karne ka mager yeha Sunita ji ne aane ko keha tha itho apne dost ki baat rakhne ke liye yeha aaya chalta hu bye


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Re: sorryyyyyyyyyy - 22nd September 2006, 10:39 AM

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har ek nazar jara si thirchi karke jo usne dali,
ek pal main deewane ho gaye unki nazaro.n ke

Kosis ki hai mene fir bhi nehi zam reha maffi chahta hu aap logo ki post kherab karne ka mager yeha Sunita ji ne aane ko keha tha itho apne dost ki baat rakhne ke liye yeha aaya chalta hu bye


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ab naye gazal ki shuruyaat kijiye.

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22nd September 2006, 10:53 AM

Janab mirza galib sahab ki ek gazal ke matle se main is gazal ka aagaz karne ki himakat kar raha hoo.n ummid hai aap ise anzam tak pahunchane main sath denge….

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kya bane baat jahaan baat banaaye na bane

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hi - 23rd September 2006, 12:46 PM

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Nuktaa chii hai ghame dil usko sunaaye na bane
kya bane baat jahaan baat banaaye na bane

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khabar na thee mohabat ye din dikhayegi humme,
tumko bulana nahi aasa tere ghar jaye na bane.....

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Re: hi - 23rd September 2006, 03:03 PM

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Nuktaa chii hai ghame dil usko sunaaye na bane
kya bane baat jahaan baat banaaye na bane

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2nd share

khabar na thee mohabat ye din dikhayegi humme,
tumko bulana nahi aasa tere ghar jaye na bane.....

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meri bewaffeai ka silla kudha mujhe kuch aisa de,
jisko apna banana chahu woh mera banaye na bane.....

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Re: Re: hi - 23rd September 2006, 05:15 PM

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1st sher

Nuktaa chii hai ghame dil usko sunaaye na bane
kya bane baat jahaan baat banaaye na bane

dilip

2nd share

khabar na thee mohabat ye din dikhayegi humme,
tumko bulana nahi aasa tere ghar jaye na bane.....

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meri bewaffeai ka silla kudha mujhe kuch aisa de,
jisko apna banana chahu woh mera banaye na bane.....

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4th share

ta umar unke pyar ke seene main chipaye rakha,
antim safar me ye baat hamse chipaye na bane......

dilip

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hi - 23rd September 2006, 05:52 PM

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ta umar unke pyar ke seene main chipaye rakha,
antim safar me ye baat hamse chipaye na bane......

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haye re yeh ulfat ki dushwariya or teri chhahat,
dard saha nahi jata ab zakham dikhaye na bane....

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Re: hi - 23rd September 2006, 06:00 PM

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ta umar unke pyar ke seene main chipaye rakha,
antim safar me ye baat hamse chipaye na bane......

dilip

5th share

haye re yeh ulfat ki dushwariya or teri chhahat,
dard saha nahi jata ab zakham dikhaye na bane....

'veer'

6th sher

ek kami si lagti hai sare jaha.n main tere bagair,
lakh koshisho.n per bhi dil kahi.n lagaye na bane..........

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Re: Re: hi - 23rd September 2006, 06:28 PM

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ta umar unke pyar ke seene main chipaye rakha,
antim safar me ye baat hamse chipaye na bane......

dilip

5th share

haye re yeh ulfat ki dushwariya or teri chhahat,
dard saha nahi jata ab zakham dikhaye na bane....

'veer'

6th sher

ek kami si lagti hai sare jaha.n main tere bagair,
lakh koshisho.n per bhi dil kahi.n lagaye na bane..........

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DEKH SIRF TERI KAMI HAI ISS BHARE GHAR ME,
BINA TERE GHAR ME MEHAFIL SAJAYE NA BANE...

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24th September 2006, 05:13 AM

1st sher

Nuktaa chii hai ghame dil usko sunaaye na bane
kya bane baat jahaan baat banaaye na bane

dilip

2nd share

khabar na thee mohabat ye din dikhayegi humme,
tumko bulana nahi aasa tere ghar jaye na bane.....

'veer'

3rd share

meri bewaffeai ka silla kudha mujhe kuch aisa de,
jisko apna banana chahu woh mera banaye na bane.....

sunita virender

4th share

ta umar unke pyar ke seene main chipaye rakha,
antim safar me ye baat hamse chipaye na bane......

dilip

5th share

haye re yeh ulfat ki dushwariya or teri chhahat,
dard saha nahi jata ab zakham dikhaye na bane....

'veer'

6th sher

ek kami si lagti hai sare jaha.n main tere bagair,
lakh koshisho.n per bhi dil kahi.n lagaye na bane..........

dilip


7TH SHER

DEKH SIRF TERI KAMI HAI ISS BHARE GHAR ME,
BINA TERE GHAR ME MEHAFIL SAJAYE NA BANE...

POOJA

8th sher

Gam-e-judaai me is kadar doobe rehTe hain..
Muskuraane se bhi aansoon chupaaye na bane...

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26th September 2006, 10:45 AM

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yadpi, yahan ye badhai dene ka haq mujhe to nahi hai... per fir bhi chuki.n is gazal ka aagaz maine kiya tha is liye yaha.n badhai dena main apna farz samjhta hoo.n........
is gazal ko behad khoobsurati se apne anjam tak pahunchaya hai.......... khushi ki baat ye hai ki ise poora karne ke liye priya ji ne bhi sahayog diya. rajveer ji, sunita ji, priya ji or pooja badai ke patra hai.n jinhone ise anjam tak pahunchaya ........ main unhe badhai deta hoo.n........... mujhe lag raha tha ki ye gazal kuch mushkil ho gayi hai.shayad...... per aap sab saheban ne ise bhi khoobsurati se apne anjam tak pahuncha diya ......shukriya....

chaliye ab koun nayee gazal ka aagaz kar raha hai.........


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26th September 2006, 11:22 AM

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jindgi kuch bhi nahi fir bhi jiye jate hai.n
tujhpe e waqt hum ehsan kiye jate hai.n

(not mine) "dilip"

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ek hum hain unse door nahi rah pate hai.n
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26th September 2006, 11:35 AM

are didi ye to aapne kamal kar diya... bina starting kiye hi aapne mere signature se share lekar gazal ki shuruaat kar di......or haan aap jara apna massage box to khali karo.......

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jindgi kuch bhi nahi fir bhi jiye jate hai.n
tujhpe e waqt hum ehsan kiye jate hai.n

(not mine) "dilip"

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ek hum hain unse door nahi rah pate hai.n
ek woh hain baar baar judai diye jate hai.n

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tu to shamil na thi kabhi meri in fizao.n main
teri yado.n ko hi seene me apen liye jate hai.n

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26th September 2006, 11:42 AM

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are didi ye to aapne kamal kar diya... bina starting kiye hi aapne mere signature se share lekar gazal ki shuruaat kar di......or haan aap jara apna massage box to khali karo.......



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tu to shamil na thi kabhi meri in fizao.n main
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ek woh hai.n jinhey waffa kaya hai maloom nahi,
ek hum hai.n jo har kadam par waffa nibhey jate hai.n

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ek hum hai.n jo har kadam par waffa nibhey jate hai.n

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eh dost, jo bhi aaye hai tere paas hi bethey hai,
aur ek hum hai.n jo tere pahlu se sarktey jate hai.n

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aur ek hum hai.n jo tere pahlu se sarktey jate hai.n

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Aur hum har pal teri bewaffai ke bahane tujhe yaad kiye jate hai…


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26th September 2006, 03:12 PM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by pooja4588
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jante hai hum, tune barson pahale bhula diye hai wade pyar ke
Aur hum har pal teri bewaffai ke bahane tujhe yaad kiye jate hai…

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jindgi kuch bhi nahi fir bhi jiye jate hai.n
tujhpe e waqt hum ehsan kiye jate hai.n

(not mine) "dilip"

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ek hum hain unse door nahi rah pate hai.n
ek woh hain baar baar judai diye jate hai.n

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tu to shamil na thi kabhi meri in fizao.n main
teri yado.n ko hi seene me apen liye jate hai.n

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ek woh hai.n jinhey waffa kaya hai maloom nahi,
ek hum hai.n jo har kadam par waffa nibhey jate hai.n

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aur ek hum hai.n jo tere pahlu se sarktey jate hai.n

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jante hai hum, tune barson pahale bhula diye hai wade pyar ke
Aur hum har pal teri bewaffai ke bahane tujhe yaad kiye jate hai…

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jab se chuua hai maine tere makmali hontho ko,
na janey kaya hua hai muskuraye jatey hai.n....

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are waah ye gazal to badi jaldi apne anjam tak pahunch gayi.... badai ho aap sabko.... ab koun nayi gazal ka aagaz kar raha hai.......?


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kya mein shuruwat kar du?
chaliye ji........aaj kisi ki yaad aai to asha ji ki ek gazal ki do line yaad aa gai...........in do lines se hi agla kalaam shuru kar rahi hu........plz aage badhana ise

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chaaha thha ek shaqs ko, jane kidhar chala gaya..

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1st sher

nazron ko intazar ka dekar hunar chalaa gaya,
chaaha thha ek shaqs ko, jane kidhar chala gaya..

pooja

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pyar karo to phir rahey waffa chodo na kabhi,
dil udhar hi jaye phir, dilbar jidhar chala gaya...

-sunita virender
3rd sher

vo door hai mujhse bahot, yaad aa rahi hai aaj unki,
leke pegam mera hava ka jhonka unke ghar chala gaya..

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maffi chahungi.........kalaam ke first sher me ek shabad galat likh diya thha.......darasal ''nazron ko'' nahi balki ''aankhon ko'' shabd gazal me use kiya gaya hai............to use thi kar ke fir se likh rahi hu.....gustakhi maaf

1st sher

aankhon ko intazar ka dekar hunar chalaa gaya,
chaaha thha ek shaqs ko, jane kidhar chala gaya..

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pyar karo to phir rahey waffa chodo na kabhi,
dil udhar hi jaye phir, dilbar jidhar chala gaya...

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vo door hai mujhse bahot, yaad aa rahi hai aaj unki,
leke pegam mera hava ka jhonka unke ghar chala gaya..


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aankhon ko intazar ka dekar hunar chalaa gaya,
chaaha thha ek shaqs ko, jane kidhar chala gaya..


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aap ko pahli baar dekh rahi hun mein kyun ki ana bahut kam ho pata hai.
mein apse ye batana chahungi ki ye sher i think kisi aur ne likha hai.mein naam to nahi janti but ye sher kisi naamigiraami shkhashiyat ne likha hai.
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aap ko pahli baar dekh rahi hun mein kyun ki ana bahut kam ho pata hai.
mein apse ye batana chahungi ki ye sher i think kisi aur ne likha hai.mein naam to nahi janti but ye sher kisi naamigiraami shkhashiyat ne likha hai.
so pls aap ye jarur bata dete ki ye apka sher nahi hai.
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haan ji ye sher asha bhonsle ji ka hai..........aur shayad aapne gour nahi farmaya mein pahale jab ise post kiya tab bol chuki hu ki mein asha ji ki ek gazal ki do line se naye kalaam ki shuvat kar rahi hu..............

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aap ko pahli baar dekh rahi hun mein kyun ki ana bahut kam ho pata hai.
mein apse ye batana chahungi ki ye sher i think kisi aur ne likha hai.mein naam to nahi janti but ye sher kisi naamigiraami shkhashiyat ne likha hai.
so pls aap ye jarur bata dete ki ye apka sher nahi hai.
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page nu. 74 ke akhir me aap dekhiye meine ise likhne se pahale bataya hai ki ye sher mera nahi asha ji ki gazal ka hissa hai.............plz aap pahale gour farmaiye vahan pe..........

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1st sher

aankhon ko intazar ka dekar hunar chalaa gaya,
chaaha thha ek shaqs ko, jane kidhar chala gaya..

pooja

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pyar karo to phir rahey waffa chodo na kabhi,
dil udhar hi jaye phir, dilbar jidhar chala gaya...

-sunita virender

3rd sher

vo door hai mujhse bahot, yaad aa rahi hai aaj unki,
leke pegam mera hava ka jhonka unke ghar chala gaya..
-pooja
4th sher

yado.n ke kafile ko ab sang mere rahne do jara...
sang tere rahne ka wo same manjar chala gaya....

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i - 27th September 2006, 01:19 PM

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yado.n ke kafile ko ab sang mere rahne do jara...
sang tere rahne ka wo same manjar chala gaya....

dilip

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hum barso un raahon par nigra.n rahe yaro,
musafir jinko aadhori chhorkar chala gaya.........

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Re: i - 27th September 2006, 01:52 PM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by rajveeer
[B]4th sher

yado.n ke kafile ko ab sang mere rahne do jara...
sang tere rahne ka wo same manjar chala gaya....

dilip

5th share

hum barso un raahon par nigra.n rahe yaro,
musafir jinko aadhori chhorkar chala gaya.........

'veer'

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maine to socha tha pyar ko manzil dilla paugi,
par hum-raah beech rah chodkar chala gaya...

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4th sher

yado.n ke kafile ko ab sang mere rahne do jara...
sang tere rahne ka wo same manjar chala gaya....

dilip

5th share

hum barso un raahon par nigra.n rahe yaro,
musafir jinko aadhori chhorkar chala gaya.........

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maine to socha tha pyar ko manzil dilla paugi,
par hum-raah beech rah chodkar chala gaya...

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7th sher

humne bade shok se banaya thha ek gulistaan,
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Meine to chund khushiyan maangi thhi usse,
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Meine to chund khushiyan maangi thhi usse,
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1st sher

aankhon ko intazar ka dekar hunar chalaa gaya,
chaaha thha ek shaqs ko, jane kidhar chala gaya..

pooja

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pyar karo to phir rahey waffa chodo na kabhi,
dil udhar hi jaye phir, dilbar jidhar chala gaya...

-sunita virender

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leke pegam mera hava ka jhonka unke ghar chala gaya..
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4th sher

yado.n ke kafile ko ab sang mere rahne do jara...
sang tere rahne ka wo same manjar chala gaya....

dilip

5th share

hum barso un raahon par nigra.n rahe yaro,
musafir jinko aadhori chhorkar chala gaya.........

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par hum-raah beech rah chodkar chala gaya...

-sunita virender


7th sher

humne bade shok se banaya thha ek gulistaan,
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Meine to chund khushiyan maangi thhi usse,
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chalo ab mein hi shuruvat kar deti hu..............vo kya hai na ki mujhse wait nahi hota...........ok ji to gour farmaiye

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kaise kaha den ki khush hai tujhse door rahakar hum,
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kaise kaha den ki khush hai tujhse door rahakar hum,
un to chhup-chhup ke humne bhi zakhanm sehalaye hai....

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tere jane se meri karah se hi mera ab koi rista na raha
mere khud ke aansu meri aankho se hi huye paraye hain

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27th September 2006, 09:28 PM

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1st sher

kaise kaha den ki khush hai tujhse door rahakar hum,
un to chhup-chhup ke humne bhi zakhanm sehalaye hai....

pooja

2nd sher

tere jane se meri karah se hi mera ab koi rista na raha
mere khud ke aansu meri aankho se hi huye paraye hain

dilip

3rd sher

koi khushi to ho hansil hume bhi aye khuda,
jane kitne khwab humne ab tak dafnaye hai...

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28th September 2006, 11:28 AM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by pooja4588
[B]3rd sher

koi khushi to ho hansil hume bhi aye khuda,
jane kitne khwab humne ab tak dafnaye hai...

-pooja

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kabhi thakta nahi tha jo waffa ki kasme khate hue,
dekho dosto, wahi aaj humse huey paraye hai.n

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next sher - 28th September 2006, 11:45 AM

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kabhi thakta nahi tha jo waffa ki kasme khate hue,
dekho dosto, wahi aaj humse huey paraye hai.n
bahut khoob

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toone maine pyar kiya to kya khoya aur kya paya
mere pas ye saye hain tere pas bhee saye hain
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Re: next sher - 28th September 2006, 11:59 AM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by masoomshayer
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kabhi thakta nahi tha jo waffa ki kasme khate hue,
dekho dosto, wahi aaj humse huey paraye hai.n

-sunita virender

bahut khoob

5th sher

toone maine pyar kiya to kya khoya aur kya paya
mere pas ye saye hain tere pas bhee saye hain

- Anil

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aaj hawa mai.n kuch seelan se lagti hai mujhe,
woh aapni be-waffeai par khoob rokar aaye hai.n

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hi - 28th September 2006, 12:32 PM

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aaj hawa mai.n kuch seelan se lagti hai mujhe,
woh aapni be-waffeai par khoob rokar aaye hai.n

-sunita virender

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taumar jeeta raha bass usse apna samajh kar,
haqkit yeh hai ki wo ajj bhee humse praye hai.n.....

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