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3rd July 2015, 06:00 PM
Matla
khoob hai ishq ka vo bayaan
gam mera ab bana daastaa.n(mast)
1st Sher
Reh Gayi Aarzoo dil mein hi
chal pada ashq ka kaarwaa.N(masti)
3rd sher
humne tau khud dekha ek jahaN,
humse phir raushna aasmaN (hamdam)
4th sher
chand taare uthaaye hue,
dhoondti ik naya aasmaaN(taish)..
5th sher
gam mila dil laga ke mujhe
kuch na baki hai soona jahaaN(madhu)
6th sher
jo hame jaan se ajeez the,
wo sabhii ho gaye raayegaaN. (Shaad)
7th sher
Dil mera le gaya tha kabhi
ab vo aashiq mera hai kahaa.n (Masti)
Matla
Khaak hi Khaak tha kar gaya
kis tarah tha uthaa ye dhuaa.N (Mast)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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3rd July 2015, 07:53 PM
[QUOTE=Madhu 14;481014]
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[CENTER]Matla
khoob hai ishq ka vo bayaan
gam mera ab bana daastaa.n(mast)
1st Sher
Reh Gayi Aarzoo dil mein hi
chal pada ashq ka kaarwaa.N(masti)
3rd sher
humne tau khud dekha ek jahaN,
humse phir raushna aasmaaN (hamdam)
4th sher
chand taare uthaaye hue,
dhoondti ik naya aasmaaN(taish)..
5th sher
gam mila dil laga ke mujhe
kuch na baki hai soona jahaaN(madhu)
6th sher
jo hame jaan se ajeez the,
wo sabhii ho gaye raayegaaN. (Shaad)
7th sher
Dil mera le gaya tha kabhi
ab vo aashiq mera hai kahaa.n (Masti)
Matla
Khaak hi Khaak tha kar gaya
kis tarah tha uthaa ye dhuaa.N (Mast)
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Maine apna sher durust ker diya hai..sorry Madhu ji kuch reply edit ho gaya..
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khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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4th July 2015, 11:34 AM
Chaliye matla pesh-e-khidmat hai....
Humsafar mera humnawa na hua,
Mera hi tha magar mera na hua...
Beh'r- 2122 1212 112 (ḳhafif musaddas maḳhbun maḥzuf)
Qaafiya- aa
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4th July 2015, 01:46 PM
Bahut khoob matla taish ji...lijiye agli koshish meri taraf se
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Humsafar mera humnawa na hua,
Mera hi tha magar mera na hua
1st sher
kuch vafaon me apni hogi kasar
Jisko chaha mera zara na huaa(madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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6th July 2015, 01:56 PM
matla
Humsafar mera humnawa na hua,
Mera hi tha magar mera na hua
1st sher
kuch vafaon me apni hogi kasar
Jisko chaha mera zara na huaa(madhu)
Abe kahaaN gaye saae...?? Jaldi-jaldi aa jao yahaaN nahiN to sabke oopar PM meiN maiN saaNp chhod duNga, fir soch lena haaN...
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6th July 2015, 04:53 PM
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matla
Humsafar mera humnawa na hua,
Mera hi tha magar mera na hua
1st sher
kuch vafaon me apni hogi kasar
Jisko chaha mera zara na huaa(madhu)
Abe kahaaN gaye saae...?? Jaldi-jaldi aa jao yahaaN nahiN to sabke oopar PM meiN maiN saaNp chhod duNga, fir soch lena haaN...
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7th July 2015, 01:32 PM
matla
Humsafar mera humnawa na hua,
Mera hi tha magar mera na hua
1st sher
kuch vafaon me apni hogi kasar
Jisko chaha mera zara na huaa(madhu)
2nd Sher
manzilen meri raah mein thi magar
raston se hi aashnaa na hua (Masti)
Humaara to aa gaya. saanp se darr lagta hai bohut
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7th July 2015, 09:35 PM
Matla
Humsafar mera humnawa na hua,
Mera hi tha magar mera na hua (Taish)
1st sher
kuch vafaon me apni hogi kasar
Jisko chaha mera zara na huaa (Madhu)
2nd Sher
manzilen meri raah mein thi magar
raston se hi aashnaa na hua (Masti)
3rd Sher
jeene ki ab na aarzoo hi rahi
unko chaha jo ab khudaa na hua (Mast)
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Humsafar mera humnawa na hua,
Mera hi tha magar mera na hua (Taish)
1st sher
kuch vafaon me apni hogi kasar
Jisko chaha mera zara na huaa (Madhu)
2nd Sher
manzilen meri raah mein thi magar
raston se hi aashnaa na hua (Masti)
3rd Sher
jeene ki ab na aarzoo hi rahi
unko chaha jo ab khudaa na hua (Mast)
4th sher
qahr jo aap dhaa rahe hain sanam
aise koii kabhii khafaa na huaa. (Shaad)
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Matla
Humsafar mera humnawa na hua,
Mera hi tha magar mera na hua (Taish)
1st sher
kuch vafaon me apni hogi kasar
Jisko chaha mera zara na huaa (Madhu)
2nd Sher
manzilen meri raah mein thi magar
raston se hi aashnaa na hua (Masti)
3rd Sher
jeene ki ab na aarzoo hi rahi
unko chaha jo ab khudaa na hua (Mast)
4th sher
qahr jo aap dhaa rahe hain sanam
aise koii kabhii khafaa na huaa. (Shaad)
5th sher
sadgi uski dil churaa ke gayii
yooN kabhi mujhse dil judaa na hua.(madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Matla
Humsafar mera humnawa na hua,
Mera hi tha magar mera na hua (Taish)
1st sher
kuch vafaon me apni hogi kasar
Jisko chaha mera zara na huaa (Madhu)
2nd Sher
manzilen meri raah mein thi magar
raston se hi aashnaa na hua (Masti)
3rd Sher
jeene ki ab na aarzoo hi rahi
unko chaha jo ab khudaa na hua (Mast)
4th sher
qahr jo aap dhaa rahe hain sanam
aise koii kabhii khafaa na huaa. (Shaad)
5th sher
sadgi uski dil churaa ke gayii
yooN kabhi mujhse dil judaa na hua.(madhu)
6th sher
KaarvaaN saath saath aage badaa,
humsafar phir yuN begana na hua. ( hamdam)
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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Matla
Humsafar mera humnawa na hua,
Mera hi tha magar mera na hua (Taish)
1st sher
kuch vafaon me apni hogi kasar
Jisko chaha mera zara na huaa (Madhu)
2nd Sher
manzilen meri raah mein thi magar
raston se hi aashnaa na hua (Masti)
3rd Sher
jeene ki ab na aarzoo hi rahi
unko chaha jo ab khudaa na hua (Mast)
4th sher
qahr jo aap dhaa rahe hain sanam
aise koii kabhii khafaa na huaa. (Shaad)
5th sher
sadgi uski dil churaa ke gayii
yooN kabhi mujhse dil judaa na hua.(madhu)
6th sher
KaarvaaN saath saath aage badaa,
humsafar phir yuN begana na hua. ( hamdam)
7th sher
jo gaya door tuu to aise gaya
Mujh ko haasil tera pata na hua (bhushan)
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Mujhe lagta hai ye Ghazal mukammal hui..
Aur ab mehfil ko naya matla dene ka waqt aa Gaya hai.
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Mujhe lagta hai ye Ghazal mukammal hui..
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lolwa maqta thode hi na necessary hai nipat gayi ghazal... naya matla pesh kiya jaaye...
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To lijiye bhaiyon agla matlaa aap sab ko nazar..........
takhti- 1222 1222 1222 1222
mujhe tumse shiqaayat hai ke tum mujhse Khafaa ho kyuu.n ,
inaayat ho nahii.n saktee to phir mere Khudaa ho kyuu.n....
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To lijiye bhaiyon agla matlaa aap sab ko nazar..........
takhti- 1222 1222 1222 1222
mujhe tumse shiqaayat hai ke tum mujhse Khafaa ho kyuu.n ,
inaayat ho nahii.n saktee to phir mere Khudaa ho kyuu.n....
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kya khoob matla diya hai shaad ji waah waah...
chaliye doston agaaz ho chuka hai...ab aapki bari..apni kalam se mahfil ko aage badhayein
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Matla
Humsafar mera humnawa na hua,
Mera hi tha magar mera na hua (Taish)
1st sher
kuch vafaon me apni hogi kasar
Jisko chaha mera zara na huaa (Madhu)
2nd Sher
manzilen meri raah mein thi magar
raston se hi aashnaa na hua (Masti)
3rd Sher
jeene ki ab na aarzoo hi rahi
unko chaha jo ab khudaa na hua (Mast)
4th sher
qahr jo aap dhaa rahe hain sanam
aise koii kabhii khafaa na huaa. (Shaad)
5th sher
sadgi uski dil churaa ke gayii
yooN kabhi mujhse dil judaa na hua.(madhu)
6th sher
KaarvaaN saath saath aage badaa,
humsafar phir yuN begana na hua. ( hamdam)
7th sher
jo gaya door tuu to aise gaya
Mujh ko haasil tera pata na hua (bhushan)
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sabhi doston ko gazhal ke mukammal hone par daad aur mubarak baad
..aage bhi isi josh ke sath sath dete rahein.....
shukriya...
aapki dost
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wah wah matla bohut hi strong diya hai, bohut pasand aaya.
Matlaa
mujhe tumse shiqaayat hai ke tum mujhse Khafaa ho kyuu.n ,
inaayat ho nahii.n saktee to phir mere Khudaa ho kyuu.n....(Shaad)
2nd Sher
yun apna kaat kar seena dhadakta dil dikhaya tha
Sitamgar tum hi batlao ki itne bewafaa ho kyun? (Masti)
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mujhe tumse shiqaayat hai ke tum mujhse Khafaa ho kyuu.n ,
inaayat ho nahii.n saktee to phir mere Khudaa ho kyuu.n....(Shaad)
1 sher
yun apna kaat kar seena dhadakta dil dikhaya tha
Sitamgar tum hi batlao ki itne bewafaa ho kyun? (Masti)
2nd sher
ye kaise hain takalluf aur kaisi dooriyaan jana
bhula kar yaad sari pyaar ki mujhse juda ho kyu.n..(madhu)
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takhti- 1222 1222 1222 1222
Matla
mujhe tumse shiqaayat hai ke tum mujhse Khafaa ho kyuu.n ,
inaayat ho nahii.n saktee to phir mere Khudaa ho kyuu.n (Shaad)
1 sher
yun apna kaat kar seena dhadakta dil dikhaya tha
Sitamgar tum hi batlao ki itne bewafaa ho kyun? (Masti)
2nd sher
ye kaise hain takalluf aur kaisi dooriyaan jana
bhula kar yaad sari pyaar ki mujhse juda ho kyu.n..(madhu)
3rd sher
khata apni meri jaana chalo main maan leta hoon
bhala phir maat par meri kaho soz-e-navaa ho kyun (Mast)
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takhti- 1222 1222 1222 1222
Matla
mujhe tumse shiqaayat hai ke tum mujhse Khafaa ho kyuu.n ,
inaayat ho nahii.n saktee to phir mere Khudaa ho kyuu.n (Shaad)
1 sher
yun apna kaat kar seena dhadakta dil dikhaya tha
Sitamgar tum hi batlao ki itne bewafaa ho kyun? (Masti)
2nd sher
ye kaise hain takalluf aur kaisi dooriyaan jana
bhula kar yaad sari pyaar ki mujhse juda ho kyu.n..(madhu)
3rd sher
khata apni meri jaana chalo main maan leta hoon
bhala phir maat par meri kaho soz-e-navaa ho kyun (Mast)
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"Maat par meri kaho soz-e-navaa ho kyoon" waaaaah behad umdah....kya baat hai
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"Maat par meri kaho soz-e-navaa ho kyoon" waaaaah behad umdah....kya baat hai
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Bazm mein agla sher rakhiye, ghazal aadhuri se lag rahi hai......
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takhti- 1222 1222 1222 1222
Matla
mujhe tumse shiqaayat hai ke tum mujhse Khafaa ho kyuu.n ,
inaayat ho nahii.n saktee to phir mere Khudaa ho kyuu.n (Shaad)
1 sher
yun apna kaat kar seena dhadakta dil dikhaya tha
Sitamgar tum hi batlao ki itne bewafaa ho kyun? (Masti)
2nd sher
ye kaise hain takalluf aur kaisi dooriyaan jana
bhula kar yaad sari pyaar ki mujhse juda ho kyu.n..(madhu)
3rd sher
khata apni meri jaana chalo main maan leta hoon
bhala phir maat par meri kaho soz-e-navaa ho kyun (Mast)
4th sher
Nigaahon me jahaan ham the vahaan ab gair ki surat
ye teri berukhi hai fir sukoon dil ko bhala ho kyun(madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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takhti- 1222 1222 1222 1222
Matla
mujhe tumse shiqaayat hai ke tum mujhse Khafaa ho kyuu.n ,
inaayat ho nahii.n saktee to phir mere Khudaa ho kyuu.n (Shaad)
1 sher
yun apna kaat kar seena dhadakta dil dikhaya tha
Sitamgar tum hi batlao ki itne bewafaa ho kyun? (Masti)
2nd sher
ye kaise hain takalluf aur kaisi dooriyaan jana
bhula kar yaad sari pyaar ki mujhse juda ho kyu.n..(madhu)
3rd sher
khata apni meri jaana chalo main maan leta hoon
bhala phir maat par meri kaho soz-e-navaa ho kyun (Mast)
4th sher
Nigaahon me jahaan ham the vahaan ab gair ki surat
ye teri berukhi hai fir sukoon dil ko bhala ho kyun(madhu)
5th sher
muhabbat se muhabbat thi muhabbat dil mein basti thi
meri jaa.n ye bataa do bas muhabbat se khafaa ho kyun (Masti)
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24th July 2015, 01:50 PM
waah......abhi tak to bahut khoob sher kahe sabhi ne...dpston ise aage badaiye...taki jald ek khoobsoorat ghazal hamare samne ho....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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24th July 2015, 08:55 PM
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Matla
mujhe tumse shiqaayat hai ke tum mujhse Khafaa ho kyuu.n ,
inaayat ho nahii.n saktee to phir mere Khudaa ho kyuu.n (Shaad)
1 sher
yun apna kaat kar seena dhadakta dil dikhaya tha
Sitamgar tum hi batlao ki itne bewafaa ho kyu.n (Masti)
2nd sher
ye kaise hain takalluf aur kaisi dooriyaan jana
bhula kar yaad sari pyaar ki mujhse juda ho kyu.n (Madhu)
3rd sher
khata apni meri jaana chalo main maan leta hoon
bhala phir maat par meri kaho soz-e-navaa ho kyu.n (Mast)
4th sher
Nigaahon me jahaan ham the vahaan ab gair ki surat
ye teri berukhi hai fir sukoon dil ko bhala ho kyu.n (Madhu)
5th sher
muhabbat se muhabbat thi muhabbat dil mein basti thi
meri jaa.n ye bataa do bas muhabbat se khafaa ho kyu.n (Masti)
6th sher
vo do din roothna tumse aur khud aansun bahaa dena
meri is dil ki halat ki kaho dard-e-dawaa ho kyu.n (Mast)
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24th July 2015, 10:03 PM
Wah anu waah......
Kamaal kamaal kamaal
Bohut khoob........
Ye ghazal kuch zyada hi achi ban rahi hai... Sabhi sher ek se badkar ek.
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27th July 2015, 10:02 AM
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Wah anu waah......
Kamaal kamaal kamaal
Bohut khoob........
Ye ghazal kuch zyada hi achi ban rahi hai... Sabhi sher ek se badkar ek.
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Shukriyaa, aur zakeenan ise compose karne mein bahut mazaa aayegaa..Doston agle sher se is ghazal ko muqammal roop dijiye...
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29th July 2015, 10:14 PM
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Matla
mujhe tumse shiqaayat hai ke tum mujhse Khafaa ho kyuu.n ,
inaayat ho nahii.n saktee to phir mere Khudaa ho kyuu.n (Shaad)
1 sher
yun apna kaat kar seena dhadakta dil dikhaya tha
Sitamgar tum hi batlao ki itne bewafaa ho kyu.n (Masti)
2nd sher
ye kaise hain takalluf aur kaisi dooriyaan jana
bhula kar yaad sari pyaar ki mujhse juda ho kyu.n (Madhu)
3rd sher
khata apni meri jaana chalo main maan leta hoon
bhala phir maat par meri kaho soz-e-navaa ho kyu.n (Mast)
4th sher
Nigaahon me jahaan ham the vahaan ab gair ki surat
ye teri berukhi hai fir sukoon dil ko bhala ho kyu.n (Madhu)
5th sher
muhabbat se muhabbat thi muhabbat dil mein basti thi
meri jaa.n ye bataa do bas muhabbat se khafaa ho kyu.n (Masti)
6th sher
vo do din roothna tumse aur khud aansun bahaa dena
meri is dil ki halat ki kaho dard-e-dawaa ho kyu.n (Mast)
7th sher.
Chhuda kar hath mujhse tum safar me bad gaye aage
Mujhe tanha jo dekha raah mein fir gam zadaa ho kyun (madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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30th July 2015, 02:24 PM
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takhti - 1222 1222 1222 1222
Matla
mujhe tumse shiqaayat hai ke tum mujhse Khafaa ho kyuu.n ,
inaayat ho nahii.n saktee to phir mere Khudaa ho kyuu.n (Shaad)
1 sher
yun apna kaat kar seena dhadakta dil dikhaya tha
Sitamgar tum hi batlao ki itne bewafaa ho kyu.n (Masti)
2nd sher
ye kaise hain takalluf aur kaisi dooriyaan jana
bhula kar yaad sari pyaar ki mujhse juda ho kyu.n (Madhu)
3rd sher
khata apni meri jaana chalo main maan leta hoon
bhala phir maat par meri kaho soz-e-navaa ho kyu.n (Mast)
4th sher
Nigaahon me jahaan ham the vahaan ab gair ki surat
ye teri berukhi hai fir sukoon dil ko bhala ho kyu.n (Madhu)
5th sher
muhabbat se muhabbat thi muhabbat dil mein basti thi
meri jaa.n ye bataa do bas muhabbat se khafaa ho kyu.n (Masti)
6th sher
vo do din roothna tumse aur khud aansun bahaa dena
meri is dil ki halat ki kaho dard-e-dawaa ho kyu.n (Mast)
7th sher.
Chhuda kar hath mujhse tum safar me bad gaye aage
Mujhe tanha jo dekha raah mein fir gam zadaa ho kyun (madhu)
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wah madhu wah.............................bohut khoob.
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30th July 2015, 03:37 PM
Shukriya sarika..............
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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4th August 2015, 04:11 PM
Bohot khoob sher kahe aap sabhi hazraat ne...bhai waah..
" Badi shiddat se kehte the ki my koi nahi tera,
Fir mere janaze me shamil be-wajah ho kyoon"
Bhushan
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4th August 2015, 09:01 PM
takhti - 1222 1222 1222 1222
Matla
mujhe tumse shiqaayat hai ke tum mujhse Khafaa ho kyuu.n ,
inaayat ho nahii.n saktee to phir mere Khudaa ho kyuu.n (Shaad)
1 sher
yun apna kaat kar seena dhadakta dil dikhaya tha
Sitamgar tum hi batlao ki itne bewafaa ho kyu.n (Masti)
2nd sher
ye kaise hain takalluf aur kaisi dooriyaan jana
bhula kar yaad sari pyaar ki mujhse juda ho kyu.n (Madhu)
3rd sher
khata apni meri jaana chalo main maan leta hoon
bhala phir maat par meri kaho soz-e-navaa ho kyu.n (Mast)
4th sher
Nigaahon me jahaan ham the vahaan ab gair ki surat
ye teri berukhi hai fir sukoon dil ko bhala ho kyu.n (Madhu)
5th sher
muhabbat se muhabbat thi muhabbat dil mein basti thi
meri jaa.n ye bataa do bas muhabbat se khafaa ho kyu.n (Masti)
6th sher
vo do din roothna tumse aur khud aansun bahaa dena
meri is dil ki halat ki kaho dard-e-dawaa ho kyu.n (Mast)
7th sher.
Chhuda kar hath mujhse tum safar me bad gaye aage
Mujhe tanha jo dekha raah mein fir gam zadaa ho kyun (Madhu)
Makhta
Badi shiddat se kehte the ki main koi nahi tera
Fir mere janaze me shamil be-wajaa ho kyun (Bhushan)
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4th August 2015, 09:04 PM
Bahut khoob Ghazal huyi hai doston mazaa aa gaya....sabko dheron mubaarakbaad
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5th August 2015, 09:54 AM
bahut hi khoobsurat kkalam huaa is baar bhii.... sabhii shaamil hue doston kodher saarii mubaarakbaad......
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