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Kya sher pesh kiya hai saba sahiba
Laja-waab kar diya aapne

2nd sher

Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)

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Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun

مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن
مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن

1221,1221,1221,1222
1221,1221,1221,1222

MATLA
Mai ne ishq kiya koee gunehgaar nahi hu mai
Magar ishq ke asbaaq se bedaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)

1st sheir
Muhabet mein wafa kerna ager jurm hi tehrey toh
Sanam maan lo tum bhi k Khatakaar nahi hu mai
(Sabaa)

2nd sher

Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)

Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)

Parastaar= worshipperParastaar= worshipper

3rd sher
Muhabbat me lutayi hai yahaa.n maine sabhi cheezein
Ki imaan ko bhi bech dun taiyar nahi hun main(madhu)



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Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun

مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن
مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن

1221,1221,1221,1222
1221,1221,1221,1222

MATLA
Mai ne ishq kiya koee gunehgaar nahi hu mai
Magar ishq ke asbaaq se bedaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)

1st sheir
Muhabet mein wafa kerna ager jurm hi tehrey toh
Sanam maan lo tum bhi k Khatakaar nahi hu mai
(Sabaa)

2nd sher

Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)

Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)

Parastaar= worshipperParastaar= worshipper

3rd sher
Muhabbat me lutayi hai yahaa.n maine sabhi cheezein
Ki imaan ko bhi bech dun taiyar nahi hun main(madhu)

4th Sher
Mukammal nahi hoti meri haajat ye bahaaro se
Mujhe rizq-e-wafa chahiye gulzaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)
   
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15th July 2016, 12:50 PM

Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
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مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن
مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن

1221,1221,1221,1222
1221,1221,1221,1222

MATLA
Mai ne ishq kiya koee gunehgaar nahi hu mai
Magar ishq ke asbaaq se bedaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)

1st sheir
Muhabet mein wafa kerna ager jurm hi tehrey toh
Sanam maan lo tum bhi k Khatakaar nahi hu mai (Sabaa)

2nd sher

Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)

Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)

Parastaar= worshipperParastaar= worshipper

3rd sher
Muhabbat me lutayi hai yahaa.n maine sabhi cheezein
Ki imaan ko bhi bech dun taiyar nahi hun main (madhu)

4th Sher
Mukammal nahi hoti meri haajat ye bahaaro se
Mujhe rizq-e-wafa chahiye gulzaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)

5th Sher
humara jee sulaghtaa hai zamaana beasar rehta
khata ki hai zamaane ne yun bezaar nahi hu mai (Mast)



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15th July 2016, 01:44 PM

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مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن
مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن

1221,1221,1221,1222
1221,1221,1221,1222

MATLA
Mai ne ishq kiya koee gunehgaar nahi hu mai
Magar ishq ke asbaaq se bedaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)

1st sheir
Muhabet mein wafa kerna ager jurm hi tehrey toh
Sanam maan lo tum bhi k Khatakaar nahi hu mai (Sabaa)

2nd sher

Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)

Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)

Parastaar= worshipperParastaar= worshipper

3rd sher
Muhabbat me lutayi hai yahaa.n maine sabhi cheezein
Ki imaan ko bhi bech dun taiyar nahi hun main (madhu)

4th Sher
Mukammal nahi hoti meri haajat ye bahaaro se
Mujhe rizq-e-wafa chahiye gulzaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)

5th Sher
humara jee sulaghtaa hai zamaana beasar rehta
khata ki hai zamaane ne yun bezaar nahi hu mai (Mast)

Waah!!Bahut khoob ashaar doston.......daad qubool karein..



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15th July 2016, 04:21 PM

6th sher

Qiyaase na laga dekh ke makhmoor nigaaho ko
Hai ye kaif-e-mohabbat koi sarshaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)
   
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Aakhri sher koi pesh karey taake ghazal mukammal ho sakey
   
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16th July 2016, 06:40 PM

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6th sher

Qiyaase na laga dekh ke makhmoor nigaaho ko
Hai ye kaif-e-mohabbat koi sarshaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)
Bahut umdaa sher hua hai Mujahid bhai daad qubool farmiyegaa



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18th July 2016, 11:48 PM

Aakhri sher jald pesh karey

Nayi behr ka aaghaaz karna hai
   
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21st July 2016, 05:18 PM

6th sher

Qiyaase na laga dekh ke makhmoor nigaaho ko
Hai ye kaif-e-mohabbat koi sarshaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)[/QUOTE]


7th sher

Kabhi aazma kar dekho hamey apni mohabbat mai
Tumhe sab pata kya saahib-e-kirdaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)
   
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21st July 2016, 05:21 PM

Ghazal yaha mukammal hoti hai

Aap sab ka shukriya shirkat karne ke liye

Bohat jald pesh hota hu nayi behr ke saath
   
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Ghazal yaha mukammal hoti hai

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buhet ache ghzal
Agli beher ka intezar rahega


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21st July 2016, 09:20 PM

Dosto pesh-e-khidmat hu mai nayi behar ke saath

Umeed hai aap sab shirkat karenge

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Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan

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Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko(MUJAHID)
   
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21st July 2016, 10:58 PM

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Dosto pesh-e-khidmat hu mai nayi behar ke saath

Umeed hai aap sab shirkat karenge

BEHAR:
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2122, 2122, 212

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Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko(MUJAHID)
Umdaa aaghaaz hua hai janaab bahut bahut daad qubool farmaiye is haseen sher pe



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Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan

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فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان

2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212

Matla:

Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)

1st sher:

jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)



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BEHAR:
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Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan

فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان

2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212

Matla:

Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)

1st sher:

jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)

2nd sher

aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)


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Bohat hi umda ashaar likhe hai aap dono ne mast sahab aur sarika ji

Achha laga sarika ji aapne bazm mai shirkat farmayi

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Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan

فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان

2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212

Matla:

Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)

1st sher:

jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)

2nd sher

aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)

waah....bahut hee khoob behr di hai mujahid ji..aur uspe kamaal ke sher pesh kiye hain doston....bahut khoobsoorti se badh rahi hain ek haseen ghazal ki taraf..sabhi ko daad au mubarakbaad pesh hai...

Yun hee bazm roshn rakhein...

Apki
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Ab aapki baari hai madhu sahiba sher pesh karne ki
   
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Agla sher pesh hai doston...


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Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan

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فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان

2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212

Matla:

Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)

1st sher:

jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)

2nd sher

aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)

3rd sher

Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)



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23rd July 2016, 06:35 AM

vah buhet achee beher aor sub ne buhet ache ashaar paesh kiye hai


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Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)

1st sher:

jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)

2nd sher

aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)

3rd sher

Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)
Sarika aur Madhu behad umdaa sher lekar aaye hai is baar to ghazal jald hi muqammal hogi.....daad qubool farmaye



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[QUOTE=Madhu 14;493871]Agla sher pesh hai doston...

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Matla:

Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)

1st sher:

jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)

2nd sher

aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)

3rd sher

Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)

4th sher

Kab talak phirta rahega dar-ba-dar
Koi samjhaye dil- e -deewaaney ko
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Agla sher pesh hai doston...

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2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212

Matla:

Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)

1st sher:

jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)

2nd sher

aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)

3rd sher

Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)

4th sher

Kab talak phirta rahega dar-ba-dar
Koi samjhaye dil- e -deewaaney ko
MUJAHID
Waah...bahot khoob mujahid sahab......



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2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212

Matla:

Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)

1st sher:

jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)

2nd sher

aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)

3rd sher

Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)

4th sher

Kab talak phirta rahega dar-ba-dar
Koi samjhaye dil- e -deewaaney ko
MUJAHID

5 sher
Kam karo chaahat ka apni kuch asar
Kuch nasha chadne do iss maikhane ko (masti)


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2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212

Matla:

Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)

1st sher:

jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)

2nd sher

aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)

3rd sher

Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)

4th sher

Kab talak phirta rahega dar-ba-dar
Koi samjhaye dil- e -deewaaney ko
MUJAHID

5 sher
Kam karo chaahat ka apni kuch asar
Kuch nasha chadne do iss maikhane ko (masti)

6th sher
Kya karein ?makhmoor ankhei.n kah gayii.n
Har koi jane mere afsaane ko... (madhu)
   
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Ik sher bacha hai ghazal ko mukammal karne ke liye

Saba ji aap pesh kijiye
Baaqi membraan se bhi guzaarish hai

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Matla:

Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)

1st sher:

jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)

2nd sher

aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)

3rd sher

Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)

4th sher

Kab talak phirta rahega dar-ba-dar
Koi samjhaye dil- e -deewaaney ko
MUJAHID

5 sher
Kam karo chaahat ka apni kuch asar
Kuch nasha chadne do iss maikhane ko (masti)

6th sher
Kya karein ?makhmoor ankhei.n kah gayii.n
Har koi jane mere afsaane ko... (madhu)

Makta
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Wo to aaye hi nahi dafnane ko (masti)


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Maafi chahungi mujahid bhai. Khayaal aaya to raha nahi gaya.

Chaliye ab matla hi kehne dijiye saba ji ko.


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Matla:

Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)

1st sher:

jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)

2nd sher

aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)

3rd sher

Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)

4th sher

Kab talak phirta rahega dar-ba-dar
Koi samjhaye dil- e -deewaaney ko
MUJAHID

5 sher
Kam karo chaahat ka apni kuch asar
Kuch nasha chadne do iss maikhane ko (masti)

6th sher
Kya karein ?makhmoor ankhei.n kah gayii.n
Har koi jane mere afsaane ko... (madhu)

Makta
Jaa.n luta kar bhi to humko kya mila
Wo to aaye hi nahi dafnane ko (masti)
Waahh!! Makhta wakai hasil e ghazal raha sarika..bahut khoob....

Ek khoobsoorat ghazal par sabhi ko mubarakbaad......

Agli behr ka intzaar rahega....

Shukriya..



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Iss mai muaafi kaisa sarika ji

Sher aap pesh karey ya saba ji kya farq pardhta

Ghazal jaari rahey voh zaroori hai

Chaliye agli behr ka intezaar hai saba ji

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Agli ghazal ke liye matla pesh hai doston...

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Na chahtein na rahtein na dil me phir sukoon hai
Hai lutf e zindagi bhi kam agar nahi junoon hai



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Behr
1212/1212/1212/1212

Na chahtein na rahtein na dil me phir sukoon hai
Hai lutf e zindagi bhi kam agar nahi junoon hai
Bahut khoob matla pesh kiya hai Madhu aapne ek aur pur asar ghazal ka aaghaaz karne ke liye shukriyaa...jald haazir hota hoon ek sher ke saath



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Zaroor aaiyega...bazm muntzir hai apke liye....



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Waah!! bahut khoob sher pesh kiya hai mujahid sahab........



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vah madhu ji oomda beher oar sher
jald likhne ki koshish krti hum mai bhi

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buhet achaa sher mujahid sahib...............................

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