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shabab le baitha - 23rd June 2005, 12:47 PM

mainu tera shabaab le baitha
rang gora gulab le baitha

kinni pii te kinni baaki hai
mainu eaho hisab le baitha

changa honda sawaal na karda
mainu tera jawab le baitha

======= Shiv Kumar=======


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24th June 2005, 01:29 PM

namaskaar janaab...

shivkumar batalvi punjabi ke legendary poet rahe hain...unki rachnaayein dil pe gehraa asar kar jaati hain...aur unki shayri ko Jagjit Singh jee ne apni awaaz de kar ek nayi zindagi dee hai...yahan is sundar kalaam ko pesh karne ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya...

kuch lines missing theen tau socha main poora kalaam likh doon...

Mainu Tera Shabaab Le Baita
Rang Gora Gulab Le Baita
Mainu Tera Shabaab Le Baita
Kinni Beeti The Kinni Baakiye
Mainu Yeho Hisaab Le Baita
Rang Gora Gulab Le Baita
Kinni Beeti The Kinni Baakiye
Mainu Yeho Hisaab Le Baita
Mainu Jadvi Tusi Voh Yaad Aaye
Dindihade Sharab Le Baita
Mainu Jadvi Tusi Voh Yaad Aaye
Dindihade Sharab Le Baita
Changa Honda Sawal Na Karda
Mainu Tera Jawab Le Baita
Rang Gora Gulab Le Baita
Mainu Tera Shabaab Le Baita


*ek guzarish hai ki yeh forum sirf aapki apni shayri ke liye hai...tau ise ustaad wale forum mein post karte tau sahi rehta...


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24th June 2005, 02:43 PM

Namaskaar....

Gaurav ji...

Shiv kumar batalvi ji ki ye gazal mere dil ke bahut kareeb hai.....lekin ise aapki Shayri section mein post nahi karna chahiye tha...ise shayri-e-ustaad ya phir gazal section mein post karte to jayada aacha tha......

Paras....Meri behna...shukriya ise poora karne ke liye......

Meri nat-khat si behna kitni aachi hai......



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24th June 2005, 03:49 PM

Janab,

baat aisi hai ki main is site ke liye naya hoon. Aur kuch bekudi main khayal bhi nahi raha. Umeed hai is gustakhi ke lie aap sabhi log mujhe muaaf kar denge.

Aage se koshish hogi ke aisi koi post na koron jo aap sab logon ko nagavar gujre.

Allaha-hafiz
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i want audio version of this ghazal can anyone help me????
   
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