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kuch khas hain hamein bas apne pyar ka intezaar hain
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Love kuch khas hain hamein bas apne pyar ka intezaar hain - 2nd April 2009, 08:40 PM

kuch khaas hain,
haan mujhe bas mere pyar ka intezaar hain,
mitha mitha ye dard hain,pata nahin kab kaha kaise
un ghurti nazro ka mujhpe hua karam hain.

"chahat ki doli kab ehsaaso ka ghunghat ode nikal gayee,humne laakh samjhya phir bhi us anjaane ki woh ho gayee"

dhak si aawaj se bhi aaj lagta darr hain,chandani se bane un lamho se aaj meheka mera mann hain.
kaun si dor hain jisko thaamne ko ye dil kehta hain
kis se hua hamein pyar hain jiske pichhe khwabo ka bhaagne ka dil karta hain,
tadap ye kaisi hain jo harpal gudgudati hain,
pata nahin kab kaise shabdo ki khamoshi ki baat us ajnabee tak pahuchati hain,
kuch khaas hain hamein bas apne pyar ka intezaar hain
un labo ke sirf haan kehne ki deri hain,
mere iss dil ki baat unke dhadkano tak pahuchaane ki bas deri hain
   
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muskaan ji ehsaas khubsurat hain, but ek gustaki karna chahunga, aap yahan pe "ghurti" ki jagah "niharti" shabd ka use karein, this gives a loving and poetic sense to poem...........
bura laga toh maaf kijiyega....

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un ghurti nazro ka mujhpe hua karam hain.




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kuch khaas hain,
haan mujhe bas mere pyar ka intezaar hain,
mitha mitha ye dard hain,pata nahin kab kaha kaise
un ghurti nazro ka mujhpe hua karam hain.

"chahat ki doli kab ehsaaso ka ghunghat ode nikal gayee,humne laakh samjhya phir bhi us anjaane ki woh ho gayee"

dhak si aawaj se bhi aaj lagta darr hain,chandani se bane un lamho se aaj meheka mera mann hain.
kaun si dor hain jisko thaamne ko ye dil kehta hain
kis se hua hamein pyar hain jiske pichhe khwabo ka bhaagne ka dil karta hain,
tadap ye kaisi hain jo harpal gudgudati hain,
pata nahin kab kaise shabdo ki khamoshi ki baat us ajnabee tak pahuchati hain,
kuch khaas hain hamein bas apne pyar ka intezaar hain
un labo ke sirf haan kehne ki deri hain,
mere iss dil ki baat unke dhadkano tak pahuchaane ki bas deri hain

MUSKAAN JI..... SATSRIAKAAL JI........... AAPKO PARHA BAHUT HI UMDA LIKHA HAI AAPNE.................KEEP SHARING.................. BE IN TOUCH.............


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kuch khaas hain,
haan mujhe bas mere pyar ka intezaar hain,
mitha mitha ye dard hain,pata nahin kab kaha kaise
un ghurti nazro ka mujhpe hua karam hain.

"chahat ki doli kab ehsaaso ka ghunghat ode nikal gayee,humne laakh samjhya phir bhi us anjaane ki woh ho gayee"

dhak si aawaj se bhi aaj lagta darr hain,chandani se bane un lamho se aaj meheka mera mann hain.
kaun si dor hain jisko thaamne ko ye dil kehta hain
kis se hua hamein pyar hain jiske pichhe khwabo ka bhaagne ka dil karta hain,
tadap ye kaisi hain jo harpal gudgudati hain,
pata nahin kab kaise shabdo ki khamoshi ki baat us ajnabee tak pahuchati hain,
kuch khaas hain hamein bas apne pyar ka intezaar hain
un labo ke sirf haan kehne ki deri hain,
mere iss dil ki baat unke dhadkano tak pahuchaane ki bas deri hain

Bahut khub muskan ji .,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
   
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kuch khaas hain,
haan mujhe bas mere pyar ka intezaar hain,
mitha mitha ye dard hain,pata nahin kab kaha kaise
un ghurti nazro ka mujhpe hua karam hain.

"chahat ki doli kab ehsaaso ka ghunghat ode nikal gayee,humne laakh samjhya phir bhi us anjaane ki woh ho gayee"

dhak si aawaj se bhi aaj lagta darr hain,chandani se bane un lamho se aaj meheka mera mann hain.
kaun si dor hain jisko thaamne ko ye dil kehta hain
kis se hua hamein pyar hain jiske pichhe khwabo ka bhaagne ka dil karta hain,
tadap ye kaisi hain jo harpal gudgudati hain,
pata nahin kab kaise shabdo ki khamoshi ki baat us ajnabee tak pahuchati hain,
kuch khaas hain hamein bas apne pyar ka intezaar hain
un labo ke sirf haan kehne ki deri hain,
mere iss dil ki baat unke dhadkano tak pahuchaane ki bas deri hain
muskaan ji

aapke esahas bahut ache lage padkar mujhe... usme kahi sapne hai ... kahi samvedna hai... peeda hai... khushbu hai... dard bhi hai.... milan ki peeyas bhi hai....

ek dilkash rachna lagi mujhe.

aap aise hi likhte rahiye.

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mann , vicky n naresh thnx
itni buri shayri ki bhi tarif
tum log sach mein great ho
thnx mujhe himmat dene ke liye
next time achha try karungi
aur mr nalin ji
shukriya mujhe samjhane ke liye
main next time shabdo ka istemaal achha karungi
tum to danda le ke mere pichhe hi pad gaye ho
dekho ab main tumhare pichhe kaise padti hoon
waise thodi tention hogi kyunki tum galtiya nahin karte
achha likhte ho
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kuch khas to hota hain
jab do dil ek duje se milte hain
ek mitha sa dard bhi hota hain jab ek duje ke kareeb aata hain
lab bhi muskaate hain jab woh achanak kahin se aapke saamne aata hain
nazre uth ke phir jhukti hain jab woh aapko hi niharta rehta hain,
dil kehta hain chal uske paas chalein,kisi bahane se uske kareeb se guzrein,
kuch aisa karein ki khamoshi sabkuch keh jaaye.
chahat ki doli mein hum saj ke baith jaaye,

khwab se bhara lagta hain par ye pyar hain
hamaare tumhare dilo mein sajta hain jo ek mitha sa ehsaas hain
   
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