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kab se hooN, kya bataaooN - Ghalib
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Love kab se hooN, kya bataaooN - Ghalib - 18th October 2013, 04:37 PM

Hum Ghalib saab ke iis ghazal ko yahaa'n iis liye pesh kar rahe hain, kyun ki iis me Ghalib saab ka ek alag andaaz dekhne ko milta hai.

Bahot se ustaadon ne matla-e-avval aur husn-e-matle ka bayaan kiya hai, magar bahut kam shayr hain jinho ne iss ka sahi maaiine me istemal kiya ho.

Ye qalaam usee ki misaal hai...
Dekhne ki baat ye bhi hai ke ye ghazal matla-e-avval se nahi par log husn-e-matla se pechante hai.

miltee hai KHoo-e-yaar se naar iltihaab meiN
kaafir hooN gar na miltee ho raahat 'azaab meiN

kab se hooN, kya bataaooN jahaan-e-KHaraab meiN?
shab haaye hijr ko bhee rakhooN gar hisaab meiN

taa fir na intezaar meiN neeNd aaye 'umr bhar
aane ka 'ahad kar gaye aaye jo KHwaab meiN

qaasid ke aate-aate KHat ik aur likh rakhooN
maiN jaanta hooN jo woh likhenge jawaab meiN

mujh tak kab unkee bazm meiN aata tha daur-e-jaam
saaqee ne kuchch mila na diya ho sharaab meiN

jo munkir-e-wafa ho fareb us pe kya chale?
kyooN badGHumaaN hooN dost se dushman ke baab meiN?

maiN muztarib hooN wasl meiN KHauf-e-raqeeb se
Daala hai tumko weham ne kis pech-o-taab meiN

mai aur haz'z-e-wasl, KHudaa_saaz baat hai
jaaN nazr denee bhool gaya iztiraab meiN

hai tevaree chaDee huee andar naqaab ke
hai ik shikan paDee huee tarf-e-naqaab meiN

laakhauN lagaav, ik churaana nigaah ka
laakhauN banaav, ik bigaaDna itaab meiN

woh naala_dil meiN KHas ke baraabar jagah na paaye
jis naale se shigaaf paDe aaftaab meiN

woh sehar muddaa talbee meiN na kaam aaye
jis sehar se safina ravaaN ho saraab meiN

'GHalib' chutee sharaab, par ab bhee kabhee-kabhee
peeta hooN roz-e-abr -o- shab-e-maahtaab meiN..


~Mirza Ghalib



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18th October 2013, 04:44 PM

Aadeil saahab aadaab.. kyaa besh keemti tohfaa lekar aayehain aap mehfil me.. waahhhhh tareef shaayad kamm pad jaaye is nayaab kareegarii ke liye...

is ghazal ke kai aashar ne mujhe mutassir kiyaa hai magar sabse zyaada ye sher mujhe raas aaya hai... waah kya takhayyul aur bayaani hai..

qaasid ke aate-aate KHat ik aur likh rakhooN
maiN jaanta hooN jo woh likhenge jawaab meiN


Ghalib saahab ko allah bakshe aur jannat me aala muqaam de.. aameen

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18th October 2013, 05:27 PM

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Ghalib saahab ko allah bakshe aur jannat me aala muqaam de.. aameen

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Janaab Shaad,
Aapki iis dua pe Ghalib saab ke hi vichar bayaan karta huun. Aapko shaayad pataa na ho par Ghalib saab ilm se alag the. Unhon ne ek baar kahaa tha ki --
Jannat me mujhe sahar hote sharaab to mil jayegi, par raat ko wo dost kahaan milenge jo mere saath dagmaae? Wahaan gar khazaan nahi hai to bahaar kaise aayegi? Gar whaa husn pari hi hai to wo masukaa kaise milegi jo dil tod kar bhaag jayegi?

-- Ek alag soch rakhte the wo. To dua yun karte hai ki wahan bhi unhe wo aish mile jo unhon ne yahaan payee thi



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18th October 2013, 05:31 PM

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Janaab Shaad,
Aapki iis dua pe Ghalib saab ke hi vichar bayaan karta huun. Aapko shaayad pataa na ho par Ghalib saab ilm se alag the. Unhon ne ek baar kahaa tha ki --
Jannat me mujhe sahar hote sharaab to mil jayegi, par raat ko wo dost kahaan milenge jo mere saath dagmaae? Wahaan gar khazaan nahi hai to bahaar kaise aayegi? Gar whaa husn pari hi hai to wo masukaa kaise milegi jo dil tod kar bhaag jayegi?

-- Ek alag soch rakhte the wo. To dua yun karte hai ki wahan bhi unhe wo aish mile jo unhon ne yahaan payee thi
hahahahhaha..... durust hai durust hai.. chaliye yahi sahiiii....


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qaasid ke aate-aate KHat ik aur likh rakhooN
maiN jaanta hooN jo woh likhenge jawaab meiN


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Ye qalaam aalaa hai. Aur GHaliib saab ke andaaz ko dekhiye. gar gaur kare'n to ye shaayad behr ke baahar hai, Mere khayaal me Jaise maine bataayaa, me koee master nahi huun

Unkee philosophy ko iis sheyr ke zariye bayaan karna chahunga. Shaayad ghazal bhi ban jaaye!?

Arz hai...
aisA nahi'n ki duniyA me tera wajud nahi'n
phirtA hU'n liye tasvIr terI gUmrAh jaHAn hai

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Ye qalaam aalaa hai. Aur GHaliib saab ke andaaz ko dekhiye. gar gaur kare'n to ye shaayad behr ke baahar hai, Mere khayaal me Jaise maine bataayaa, me koee master nahi huun

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Main apne alfaaz waapas lenaa chahunga.... aur behad shamindgee bhee mehsoos karta hoon............ jaise jaise taqti aur beher kee samajh aatee gayee to ye bayaan pe khud se zillat huee....

so I am really really sorry on such a comment



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main apne alfaaz waapas lenaa chahunga.... Aur behad shamindgee bhee mehsoos karta hoon............ Jaise jaise taqti aur beher kee samajh aatee gayee to ye bayaan pe khud se zillat huee....

So i am really really sorry on such a comment
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Sameerbhai,

Main zidd bhai, Mishraji aur aap jaise faazil dostoN ka shukra guzaar hooN. Aap logoN se hi hamne ghazal kaise likhee jaati hai wo jaana hai

sach men yahaaN aane se pehle hum kuch bhee likh dete the aur use ek ghazal samajh lete the. ab hum dhire dhire kuch samajhne lage hai aur hum chahenge ki aap hamaare qalaam pe bhee tabdeer kareN.

isee ummeed ke saath........... Adil ka salaam.



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jee janaab.... main poori koshish karunga..... shukriyaa izzat afzaai k liye.

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waah waaah bahot umdaa ghazal....zabardast peskas.aadeil ji......dil se daad.............................!!!
bahot bahot shukriya aapka, Sudhirji.......
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