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baaton baaton me..... - 2nd September 2014, 07:37 PM

Badi masoomiyat se usne poochi ek baat baaton baaton me....
Kya sochti rahti ho tum jo soti nahi ho raaton me...

Kya khwahish hai jo seene me daba rakhi hai...
Kya chchipa rakha hai jo ye dard hai zazbaaton me....

Uske sawaal mujhe khamosh kar gaye the....
Jo de sake jawab vo dil bhi to tha uske hathon me....

Har jawab me vo hi hai mere hamesha se....
Usi ki surat dikhi aaj bhi sawalaton me....

Vo der tak dekhta raha ki aaj kuch kahoongi main....
Main der tak khoyi rahi uske hi khayalaton me....

Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....



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Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me..


Bohat khoob madhu ji................




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Badi masoomiyat se usne poochi ek baat baaton baaton me....
Kya sochti rahti ho tum jo soti nahi ho raaton me...

Kya khwahish hai jo seene me daba rakhi hai...
Kya chchipa rakha hai jo ye dard hai zazbaaton me....

Uske sawaal mujhe khamosh kar gaye the....
Jo de sake jawab vo dil bhi to tha uske hathon me....

Har jawab me vo hi hai mere hamesha se....
Usi ki surat dikhi aaj bhi sawalaton me....

Vo der tak dekhta raha ki aaj kuch kahoongi main....
Main der tak khoyi rahi uske hi khayalaton me....

Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....

clap clap clap...... beautifully expressed Madhu ji........


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thanks for sharing it. apna pan sa laga aapki peshkash se... behad khubsurat


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3rd September 2014, 03:51 AM

Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....


waaahhh! Madhu jee,

Jazbaat aur ehsaasaat ko ba-khoobi bayaaN kiya hai aap ne
apne kalaam meiN....

DherooN dherooN daad iss besh-qeemati kaawish ke liye!

Likhti rahiye,,

DuaooN ke saath,


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Bohat khoob madhu ji................
Pasand karne ke liye bahut shukriya zainy ji...........



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baaton baaton me.....Bohut khoob Madhuji......a good poetic writing.
   
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clap clap clap...... beautifully expressed Madhu ji........


likhtii rahen

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baaton baaton me.....Bohut khoob Madhuji......a good poetic writing.
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Kya baat hai.bahut khoob ...jab parne wala vohi mehsoos kare jo likhne wala
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Bahut khushi huyi naaz ji ye jaankar ki meri likhi nazm aapke dil tak pahunchi......meri koshish kaamyaab huyi agar isne kisi k dil ko chchua.....meri har ek koshish ko dil se samajhne k liye main aapki bahut shukraguzar hoon...aap ko jitna jana hai maine aap behad khushmizaz hain...aise hi hamesha muskrate rahein khush rahein...duaon k sath....

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Badi masoomiyat se usne poochi ek baat baaton baaton me....
Kya sochti rahti ho tum jo soti nahi ho raaton me...

Kya khwahish hai jo seene me daba rakhi hai...
Kya chchipa rakha hai jo ye dard hai zazbaaton me....

Uske sawaal mujhe khamosh kar gaye the....
Jo de sake jawab vo dil bhi to tha uske hathon me....

Har jawab me vo hi hai mere hamesha se....
Usi ki surat dikhi aaj bhi sawalaton me....

Vo der tak dekhta raha ki aaj kuch kahoongi main....
Main der tak khoyi rahi uske hi khayalaton me....

Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....


Bhut khoob andaaz-e-bayan hai aapka madhu ji.....gaheri soch aur uski adaayagi bhi kamaal ki hai.....mubarakbaad aapko!!!


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Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....


waaahhh! Madhu jee,

Jazbaat aur ehsaasaat ko ba-khoobi bayaaN kiya hai aap ne
apne kalaam meiN....

DherooN dherooN daad iss besh-qeemati kaawish ke liye!

Likhti rahiye,,

DuaooN ke saath,
Bahut bahut shukriya hassan ji pasandgi k liye....yoon hi sath dete rahein aate rahein..



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Kya baat hai.bahut khoob ...jab parne wala vohi mehsoos kare jo likhne wala
keh raha hai , tau meri nazar mein aap ka likhna purn ho gaya.

Aap jis gehrayi mein bari saral andaz mein pahumch jaate ho , vo
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Yun hi likhte rahein .

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Bohut khoob madhu...... Loved it.
Bahut bahut shukriya..sarika ji....yoon hi aate rahiye..



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thanks for sharing it. apna pan sa laga aapki peshkash se... behad khubsurat
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[QUOTE=Pankaj Mishra;468269][COLOR="DarkOliveGreen"][SIZE="3"][B]Bhut khoob andaaz-e-bayan hai aapka madhu ji.....gaheri soch aur uski adaayagi

Hausala afzai ka behad shukriya pankaj jii....aap doston ke sath ki hamesha zaroorat hai....
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Badi masoomiyat se usne poochi ek baat baaton baaton me....
Kya sochti rahti ho tum jo soti nahi ho raaton me...

Kya khwahish hai jo seene me daba rakhi hai...
Kya chchipa rakha hai jo ye dard hai zazbaaton me....

Uske sawaal mujhe khamosh kar gaye the....
Jo de sake jawab vo dil bhi to tha uske hathon me....

Har jawab me vo hi hai mere hamesha se....
Usi ki surat dikhi aaj bhi sawalaton me....

Vo der tak dekhta raha ki aaj kuch kahoongi main....
Main der tak khoyi rahi uske hi khayalaton me....

Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....

fully appreiated........ek massom si,masoomiat se likhi hui kavita
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Badi masoomiyat se usne poochi ek baat baaton baaton me....
Kya sochti rahti ho tum jo soti nahi ho raaton me...

Kya khwahish hai jo seene me daba rakhi hai...
Kya chchipa rakha hai jo ye dard hai zazbaaton me....

Uske sawaal mujhe khamosh kar gaye the....
Jo de sake jawab vo dil bhi to tha uske hathon me....

Har jawab me vo hi hai mere hamesha se....
Usi ki surat dikhi aaj bhi sawalaton me....

Vo der tak dekhta raha ki aaj kuch kahoongi main....
Main der tak khoyi rahi uske hi khayalaton me....

Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....

Madhu ji, yeh meri nazroN se chhuut gaya thaa.
Kyaa anmol khazaana hai jo aapki qalam se nikalta hai.
Bohot baDhiya.

Likhte raheiN.


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Aaj pehle baar aapko padha.bahut khoobsurat rachna hay.mere daad kabul kijeyega

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Badi masoomiyat se usne poochi ek baat baaton baaton me....
Kya sochti rahti ho tum jo soti nahi ho raaton me...

Kya khwahish hai jo seene me daba rakhi hai...
Kya chchipa rakha hai jo ye dard hai zazbaaton me....

Uske sawaal mujhe khamosh kar gaye the....
Jo de sake jawab vo dil bhi to tha uske hathon me....

Har jawab me vo hi hai mere hamesha se....
Usi ki surat dikhi aaj bhi sawalaton me....

Vo der tak dekhta raha ki aaj kuch kahoongi main....
Main der tak khoyi rahi uske hi khayalaton me....

Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....

fully appreiated........ek massom si,masoomiat se likhi hui kavita
well written and well expressed.
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Kyaa anmol khazaana hai jo aapki qalam se nikalta hai.
Bohot baDhiya.

Likhte raheiN.
Bahot shukriya janaab ...khajane ki parakh karne Wala jauhri hee hota Hai....
Achcha laga aapne padha....aate raha kariye aap doston ka sath likhte rahne ka hausla deta Hai....

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bahut khub likhaa hai madhu ji.
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Badi masoomiyat se usne poochi ek baat baaton baaton me....
Kya sochti rahti ho tum jo soti nahi ho raaton me...

Kya khwahish hai jo seene me daba rakhi hai...
Kya chchipa rakha hai jo ye dard hai zazbaaton me....

Uske sawaal mujhe khamosh kar gaye the....
Jo de sake jawab vo dil bhi to tha uske hathon me....

Har jawab me vo hi hai mere hamesha se....
Usi ki surat dikhi aaj bhi sawalaton me....

Vo der tak dekhta raha ki aaj kuch kahoongi main....
Main der tak khoyi rahi uske hi khayalaton me....

Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....
   
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bahut khub likhaa hai madhu ji.
Manoj ji.. Ehsaason Ko mahsoos kiya aapne Behad khushi huyi... Mere kalaam Ko padhne Aur sdc me shirkat karne ke liye dil se shukriya...

Points ke liye phir se shukriya..☺️aate rahiyega
Khush rahein..



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