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Smile Benaam Rishta - 23rd May 2016, 12:36 PM

SDC ki Mahefil ko Ghazal ka salaam.... ek lambe arse baad maine kuch likha hai... jo aap sab ki nazar kar rahi hooN...

Hum sabhi ne aksar yeh chaha hai k hum jise chahte hai... unse hamare rishte ko koi naam mile ...benaam sa rishta koi nahi chahta... pr hum hamesha yeh bhool jaate hai k... naam dene se risteiN umr k daayre me bandh jaate hai... in ristoN ki umr tab tak hee hai jab tak hum inheN nibhate hai... Bina naam k rishteiN .... koi umr k mohtaaz nahi... dil k ahessas se yeh zinda rahete hai...


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KyuN aksar hum chahte hai ? .. K rishte ko koi Naam Mile
Duniya ki nazaroN me ise bhi sanmaan mile …

Hai mahaz yeh chahat ? Ya apne matalab ki koi baat
Sochkar dekho zara tum bhi ise aaj ….

Nibhaate hai aksar jo rishtoN ko hai naam diya
Kitni dafa hum ne un rishtoN ko hai jiya?


Jeene k liye rishteN… Koi naam ke mohtaaj nahi
Benaam se rishteiN koi nayi si toh baat nahi..

Suraj ka roshni se… chand ka jo chandni se ..
Aasmaan ka hai baadaloN se .. rista bhi kuch aisa hai

Benaam hee hai yeh sabhi…. Par mahesus inhe karte hai
KyuN fir aksar rishteiN ko naam dene ko marte hai..

Naam de kar rishta ek matalb se hee chalta hai
rishteiN se judi ummidoN ka karwaa’ sa banta hai..


Bina naam k rishte ko jee k dekho ek baar
Mahekega jeevan bhi jaise ho koi gulzaar…




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23rd May 2016, 01:17 PM

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SDC ki Mahefil ko Ghazal ka salaam.... ek lambe arse baad maine kuch likha hai... jo aap sab ki nazar kar rahi hooN...

Hum sabhi ne aksar yeh chaha hai k hum jise chahte hai... unse hamare rishte ko koi naam mile ...benaam sa rishta koi nahi chahta... pr hum hamesha yeh bhool jaate hai k... naam dene se risteiN umr k daayre me bandh jaate hai... in ristoN ki umr tab tak hee hai jab tak hum inheN nibhate hai... Bina naam k rishteiN .... koi umr k mohtaaz nahi... dil k ahessas se yeh zinda rahete hai...


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KyuN aksar hum chahte hai ? .. K rishte ko koi Naam Mile
Duniya ki nazaroN me ise bhi sanmaan mile …

Hai mahaz yeh chahat ? Ya apne matalab ki koi baat
Sochkar dekho zara tum bhi ise aaj ….

Nibhaate hai aksar jo rishtoN ko hai naam diya
Kitni dafa hum ne un rishtoN ko hai jiya?


Jeene k liye rishteN… Koi naam ke mohtaaj nahi
Benaam se rishteiN koi nayi si toh baat nahi..

Suraj ka roshni se… chand ka jo chandni se ..
Aasmaan ka hai baadaloN se .. rista bhi kuch aisa hai

Benaam hee hai yeh sabhi…. Par mahesus inhe karte hai
KyuN fir aksar rishteiN ko naam dene ko marte hai..

Naam de kar rishta ek matalb se hee chalta hai
rishteiN se judi ummidoN ka karwaa’ sa banta hai..


Bina naam k rishte ko jee k dekho ek baar
Mahekega jeevan bhi jaise ho koi gulzaar…


Waah!! Purvi ji..ek khoobsoorat khayaal ko bade pyaar se kagaz pe utara hai aapne....jin rishton ke naam nahi hote koi swarth koi matlab nahi hota yakeekan vo ruhani hote hain...kabhi na tootne wale...aur behad khoobsoorat. .....

Daad qubool kijiye aur aise hee bazm ki raunak badhati rahiye.......

Khush rahein....



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24th May 2016, 11:41 AM

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SDC ki Mahefil ko Ghazal ka salaam.... ek lambe arse baad maine kuch likha hai... jo aap sab ki nazar kar rahi hooN...

Hum sabhi ne aksar yeh chaha hai k hum jise chahte hai... unse hamare rishte ko koi naam mile ...benaam sa rishta koi nahi chahta... pr hum hamesha yeh bhool jaate hai k... naam dene se risteiN umr k daayre me bandh jaate hai... in ristoN ki umr tab tak hee hai jab tak hum inheN nibhate hai... Bina naam k rishteiN .... koi umr k mohtaaz nahi... dil k ahessas se yeh zinda rahete hai...


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KyuN aksar hum chahte hai ? .. K rishte ko koi Naam Mile
Duniya ki nazaroN me ise bhi sanmaan mile …

Hai mahaz yeh chahat ? Ya apne matalab ki koi baat
Sochkar dekho zara tum bhi ise aaj ….

Nibhaate hai aksar jo rishtoN ko hai naam diya
Kitni dafa hum ne un rishtoN ko hai jiya?


Jeene k liye rishteN… Koi naam ke mohtaaj nahi
Benaam se rishteiN koi nayi si toh baat nahi..

Suraj ka roshni se… chand ka jo chandni se ..
Aasmaan ka hai baadaloN se .. rista bhi kuch aisa hai

Benaam hee hai yeh sabhi…. Par mahesus inhe karte hai
KyuN fir aksar rishteiN ko naam dene ko marte hai..

Naam de kar rishta ek matalb se hee chalta hai
rishteiN se judi ummidoN ka karwaa’ sa banta hai..


Bina naam k rishte ko jee k dekho ek baar
Mahekega jeevan bhi jaise ho koi gulzaar…




bahot hi dil se likhaa hai aapne Purvi ji, isiliye ye kalaam bhi utnaa hi asar daar hai jitnaa ke aapke alfaaz...... sach kahiye to doob sa gaya tha main aapke ek ek lafz ki gahraai me aur un ehsaason me jo kaagaz me utne bayaan na ho sakejiyne us dil me rahe honge jisne ineh likhaa hai.....

meri taraf se bahut saari daad aur mubaarakbaad aapke is pahal ke liye....

barbas hi khichaa chala aaya aapke is title ko padhte hi.. kyonki iske peeeche bhi koi baat hai.....

waqt mile to is link ko dekhiegaa.....


http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=72412



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......sach kahun...shaad ki tarah meri nazar bhi aapke kalaam ke title par atak gayi thi......zaruur dekhiyega ye link...



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bahot hi dil se likhaa hai aapne Purvi ji, isiliye ye kalaam bhi utnaa hi asar daar hai jitnaa ke aapke alfaaz...... sach kahiye to doob sa gaya tha main aapke ek ek lafz ki gahraai me aur un ehsaason me jo kaagaz me utne bayaan na ho sakejiyne us dil me rahe honge jisne ineh likhaa hai.....

meri taraf se bahut saari daad aur mubaarakbaad aapke is pahal ke liye....

barbas hi khichaa chala aaya aapke is title ko padhte hi.. kyonki iske peeeche bhi koi baat hai.....

waqt mile to is link ko dekhiegaa.....


http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=72412



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sab se pahele toh meri kalam padhne aur use sarhaaNe k liye main aap ki tah-e-dil se shukra guzaar hoon...

Mujhe behad khushi ho rahi hai k SDC par kuch puraane dost abhi bhi maujood hai jinko mere parichay ki zarurat nahi hai...


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Waah!! Purvi ji..ek khoobsoorat khayaal ko bade pyaar se kagaz pe utara hai aapne....jin rishton ke naam nahi hote koi swarth koi matlab nahi hota yakeekan vo ruhani hote hain...kabhi na tootne wale...aur behad khoobsoorat. .....

Daad qubool kijiye aur aise hee bazm ki raunak badhati rahiye.......

Khush rahein....
Madhu ji..

Meri chhoti si koshish ko padhne aur pasand karne ka bahot bahot shukriya

Khush raheN..

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Khyal bahot hi umda h aapka... Bahot badhiya...
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meri kalam ko pasand krne ka bahot bahot shukriya

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SDC ki Mahefil ko Ghazal ka salaam.... ek lambe arse baad maine kuch likha hai... jo aap sab ki nazar kar rahi hooN...

Hum sabhi ne aksar yeh chaha hai k hum jise chahte hai... unse hamare rishte ko koi naam mile ...benaam sa rishta koi nahi chahta... pr hum hamesha yeh bhool jaate hai k... naam dene se risteiN umr k daayre me bandh jaate hai... in ristoN ki umr tab tak hee hai jab tak hum inheN nibhate hai... Bina naam k rishteiN .... koi umr k mohtaaz nahi... dil k ahessas se yeh zinda rahete hai...


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KyuN aksar hum chahte hai ? .. K rishte ko koi Naam Mile
Duniya ki nazaroN me ise bhi sanmaan mile …

Hai mahaz yeh chahat ? Ya apne matalab ki koi baat
Sochkar dekho zara tum bhi ise aaj ….

Nibhaate hai aksar jo rishtoN ko hai naam diya
Kitni dafa hum ne un rishtoN ko hai jiya?


Jeene k liye rishteN… Koi naam ke mohtaaj nahi
Benaam se rishteiN koi nayi si toh baat nahi..

Suraj ka roshni se… chand ka jo chandni se ..
Aasmaan ka hai baadaloN se .. rista bhi kuch aisa hai

Benaam hee hai yeh sabhi…. Par mahesus inhe karte hai
KyuN fir aksar rishteiN ko naam dene ko marte hai..

Naam de kar rishta ek matalb se hee chalta hai
rishteiN se judi ummidoN ka karwaa’ sa banta hai..


Bina naam k rishte ko jee k dekho ek baar
Mahekega jeevan bhi jaise ho koi gulzaar…



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