Its amazing....I really loved the thought...It inspired me to think and write what i wrote below...Not as good as urs but a few lines thought i will share it with u
Ret par se kadmon ke nishan mit jaayenge
Wartaman bhi bhoot ban kar reh jaayega
maut ka bhi samna ho hi jaayega
na mitega to bus woh hai astitv mera
u know it was very very wrong of u to say that the lines u wrote r not as good as mine rather they r much much better than wat i wrote!!!!!!!!!!.........thanx a lot for appreciating and sharing with me ur wonderful little composition.thanx a lot once again........bye 4 now! take care!!!!!!!!!
koshish ko hamari please nakarna mat.........gar pasand aaye to likhna zaroor ek khat....
sorrrrrrrrryyyyyy!!!! for doing that i know that all compositions ru unique and special in their own way...but u know what u were the one who wrote that urs was not as good as mine and so i replied to that...but u know i really really like ur compositions especially the ones in the dard forum........
koshish ko hamari please nakarna mat.........gar pasand aaye to likhna zaroor ek khat....
Aye Shivani tu lagti hai nani...
Juice ki dookan pe maang ti hai paani....
Thoda sa mazak kiya hai . Ummed karta hoon bura nahi manogi...
Well thanks aapko meri poetry pasand aayi ... Bhai dard har ek ke dil mein hota hai...isliye dard ke kavita sab ko achi lagti hai....
Kash hum kuch aisa likh pate jisse sab ke aankhon mein Aansoon nahi khushi dekh pate....
I hope in future you will never underestimate your writing power and continue to write.. You write very welll. Thoda sa hi sahi magar hummein apna talent de do na please....
U wrote wonderful..n rohin has beautifuuly ended up putting a period 2 it!...Dont mind u ppl..its just a feeling......U both write awsome!...i luved it shivani..do keep wriiting!
u know ab to meri aadat ho gayi wo gaana sun ne ki aur sach maniye ab to achcha bhi lagta hai jab koi ye gaana mujhe dedicate karta hai haalaanki pehle ajeeb lagta tha par ab to achcha lagta hai......and i thank you a lot once again from the bottom of my heart for appreciating me this much....thanx!! ...bye 4 now!!!!take care!!!!!
koshish ko hamari please nakarna mat.........gar pasand aaye to likhna zaroor ek khat....
thanx a lot for praising my composition....u know this kind of appreciation really encourages and cheers a writer..and ur praise has done that to me.thanx a lot!!!!! bye 4 now!!!!!!take care!!!!!!!!!!!
koshish ko hamari please nakarna mat.........gar pasand aaye to likhna zaroor ek khat....