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DOHEY by pratap somvanshi - 16th June 2007, 04:52 PM
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Baba budhey bail hai unko kab aaram.
Ho betey kaptan judge kaun aaya hai kaam.
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Majboori gardan chadi ghar-ghar ki yah teesh,
Kanhi dava ka bill bani kanhi putra ki fees.
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Amma roey raat bhar biwi chhodey kaam,
Muh dhaanpey jaaga kareyn dadda Dataram.
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Chotey tum chid jaaogey kah dunga beimaan,
aatey ho sasuraal tak ham hai kya anjaan.

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Pura din chuk jaaye hai chotey-chotey kaam,
Kab likhey choti bahu khat bappa ne naam.
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18th June 2007, 12:38 PM
Pratam Somvanshi jee:

Namaskaar:


aap ka ess bazm meiN swaagat hai... aap ke aane se bazm kii Roshnii meiN ezaafayii hogii... aap ke dohe bohat achchhe lage... yuuN hii likhate raheN...


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9th November 2007, 01:12 AM
bahut khub dohe hai apke...apko paya paya acha laga

swagat hai apka

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hi kiya aap ke dohe hai.aap ne itne piyar se in ko sajaya hai . ki is ki jitni tarif kari jaye wo bhi kam hai.........Raj...

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