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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Ek nayee aag phir lagi hai abhi
Dil ki hasrat koi jali hai abhi
Kaun kehta hai door woh humse
Ek sadaa phir wahi suni hai abhi
Humse mayoos woh bhi rehte hai
Jinse rishta koi nahi hai abhi
Waqt_e_sajda khayaal aaya hai
Dil me khwaish koi buri hai abhi
Logh khud me dafan bhi hote hai
Dil me chahat kaiee dabi hai abhi
Jaisi marzi teri guzari hai
Jaisi kal thi zindagi hai abhi
Teri surat hai chand si lekin
Teri seerat kaha bhali hai abhi
Sajid Ghayel
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ghayal sahab.....kin lafzo me aapki taareef karu....samajh nahi aa rah hai.....
itna kamaal ki beherbandi ki hai...ki hai ..ki lab sil gaye.....khushi se seeTee bhi nahi bajaa paa raha hu.....agar mera ghar ground floor par hota to zarur khushi ke maare apne balcony se kuud jata.....
ek syllable bhi apke meter me bharti ka nahi hai.....
poori ghazal me sirf aur sirf ek misre me bahut bahot mamuli meter laDkhdaya hai..vo hai
Jaisi kal thi (___)zindagi hai abhi...bus yaha ek chota harf/lafz ki zarurat hai
aaj wakai itni khushi hui hai ki bayaa na kar paa raha hu....
aaj ek naya saajid sahab ka janm huaa hai....
aapki fikr hamesha bemisaal rahi hai....isliye aap GFFC ke malik hai
ab apke paas tecnic bhi hai aur urdu aapki maadri zabaan to hai hi....
mujhe poora yakeeen hai ki ek din ham sabko kahenge ki saajid sahab to hamaare dost hai ...aap itne famous ho jayenge...aap dekhna
bus lage rahiyega ab...ab koi bebeher ghazal nahi sunana....aaj ke baad
ise ek challenge hi samjh lijiye khudse.....
bhale 10 din ka gap aa jaaye......
my salute to you sir
regards