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6th January 2007, 04:31 PM
shayri.com ke sab dostoN ko naya saal mubarak ho, aur duaa karta huuN ke ye naya saal aap sabke liye khushiyaaN le kar aaye aur aapko har maqaam par kaamyaabi haasil ho
kuch post karne ka bahaana dhooNd raha tha taa'ke aap sabko naye saal ki mubarakbaad de sakuN to yeh do she'r haazir haiN : deewaangii ki hadd se guzar to nahiiN gaya dekhna "maikash" kahiiN mar to nahiiN gaya TooT gaya huuN maiN jaise us se bichaR kar voh bhi, sochta huuN, bikhar to nahiiN gaya maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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6th January 2007, 05:06 PM
mere dost maikasH ji SSA
kem chho? majama ne? aaj aapko bahot dino bad padha aapke ye do ash'aar to wakehi mere dil ko chhu gaye , maiN bhi dua karta huN k ye naya saal shayri parivaar ke sabhi sadasyoN ke liye achha ho aapko bhi meri aur se naya saal mubarak , apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN jai shree krishna aapka dost dhaval |
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6th January 2007, 11:44 PM
deewaangii ki hadd se guzar to nahiiN gaya
dekhna "maikash" kahiiN mar to nahiiN gaya TooT gaya huuN maiN jaise us se bichaR kar voh bhi, sochta huuN, bikhar to nahiiN gaya Kyaa baat hai huzoor... bahut khoob... Dear Maikash bhai, Naye varsh ki dheron shubhkamnayein aapko bhi...May this year brings lots of love and prosperity to you  Janaab aise bahaane dhhoondte raha kijiye... dil khush kar deti hai aapki yeh koshish... Dil se daad kubool kijiyega... yun hi aate rahiye Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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7th January 2007, 01:58 PM
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isi kadimain ek Gusaakhi hamaari taraf se..... Mere haseen khwaboN meiN simat ker ai dost kahiN dard-e-ghum ka dil se zikar toh nahiN gaya. Harash |
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8th January 2007, 01:03 PM
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par yeh kaya baat hue, naye saal mai.n aapne phele post ki woh bhi etne dard bhari...humey accha nahi lagga. dua karti hoon naya saal aapke liye deeeerrr saari kushiya lekar aaye....! aapke dono sher behad pasand aaye...dil ko chu gaye..bahut dard mahsoos hua aapke asiaaroN mai.n...! god bless u aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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8th January 2007, 01:30 PM
Hai, maikash kya baat hai, bahut khoob laga.
bahut achchi baat likhi hai aapne. Par pata nahin kyon..... "Hum tootte hain to bikhar jaate hain Log tutte taaron se apni naseeb banate hain.." Aisa kyon hota hai? " Hum duniya se tootte hain to taare ban jaate hain Phir taare toot ke jameen par kyon aate hain..." Mere liye ye ek sawal sa BAN GAYA HAI. |
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8th January 2007, 01:32 PM
deewaangii ki hadd se guzar to nahiiN gaya
dekhna "maikash" kahiiN mar to nahiiN gaya TooT gaya huuN maiN jaise us se bichaR kar voh bhi, sochta huuN, bikhar to nahiiN gaya wah janaab kaya baat hai....sat sri akaal ji......bhut din hoye thuade naal gal nahi ho saki.....thanu v nama saal bhut bhut mubarak.......rab thuadee har muraad poori kare......kush betarteeb se lafaz is gustaakh ki janib se..... dard-e-dil ne angdaii c lii hai abhi abhi wo sangdil dil mein kaihn utar to nahiiN gaya.... chiraag-e-wafa timtimane laga jugnu ki tarha ehad-e-wafa se wo kahin mukar to nahiiN gaya..... apna khyaal rakhiyega..........raj...... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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8th January 2007, 08:53 PM
Maikash Bhai..
Aapko bhi Naye saal dher saari mubarakbaad.. Behad khoobsoorat aasharon ke saath aapne ek naye saal ki bahut sunder shuruvaat ki hai.. Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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9th January 2007, 08:55 AM
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dhaval bhai jai shree krishna bilkul maze meiN huuN miyaaN she'r pasaNd farmaane ka aur duaa'oN ka shukriya qabuul kijiye maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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9th January 2007, 08:59 AM
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pulkit miyaaN namaste bhai aapse mukhaatib hote hue mujhe jaane kyoN ek ajeeb si khushi mehsuus hoti ba-har-haal aapki duaaoN aur daad ke liye shukurguzaar huuN aapka maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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9th January 2007, 09:04 AM
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Harash sahab namaste aur SSA ash'aar pasaNd farmaane ke liye aapka bohat shukriya saahab aur aapne jo she'r ataa kiya hai voh bohat pasaNd aaya go pehle misre meiN kuch tar'meem darkaar hai, ye suurat mula'izaa kijiye : mere haseen khwaab meiN simat ke mere dost mashkoor-o-mamnoon aapka bohat shukriya maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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9th January 2007, 09:12 AM
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Sunita Jee Namaste aur SSA aji baat yeh hui ke dard jab dil ko kohni maarta hai tabhi to majbuuran kaGhaz-o-qalam uthaana padta hai aur kuch na kuch likhaa jaata hai, ab agar Gham na hoga to Ghazal na hogi aur jab Ghazal na hogi to mujhe yahaaN kaun paagal puuchega ? kuch tu tuk banta hai, hai ke nai ? aapne Ash'aar pasaNd farmaaye bohat shukriya, ummiid hai aap aa'iiNda bhi yuuN hi hauNslaa badhaati raheNgii maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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12th January 2007, 08:45 AM
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daad ka shukriya jee maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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12th January 2007, 08:48 AM
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Sat Sri Akaal Rajveer saahab ajj-kal jaraa busy rehNdaa haaN, tuhade naal online gal ho rahi si ke kamm to bulaava aageya so jaana peya, agle hafte ik chhuTTi hai so ummiid hai ke tihade naal gal ho sakegi maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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14th January 2007, 12:05 PM
maikash bhaaii,
aap ko bhii naya saal mubaarak ho.. meri taraf se yeh duaa hai kii yeh saal aap ke liye KhuSHiyoN kii sauGhaat le kar aaye.. aap ke yeh do a'Shaar ke kya kahne haiN huzuur, hame to behad behad pasand aaya hai... kaii baar jab ek purri Ghazal dil par jo asar nahiiN karti, 2 a'Shaar us se zeyaadah dil par asar karte haiN.. deewaangii ki hadd se guzar to nahiiN gaya dekhna "maikash" kahiiN mar to nahiiN gaya TooT gaya huuN maiN jaise us se bichaR kar voh bhi, sochta huuN, bikhar to nahiiN gaya waah! huzuur waah! kya baat hai.., -Mayank |
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17th January 2007, 06:19 AM
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shukriya janaab maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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17th January 2007, 06:21 AM
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shukriya priya jee kaash ye shuruvaat "sunder" hoti, haif! maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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